The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Van Morrison · produced by Lewis Merenstein · Warner Bros.-Seven Arts · about 47 minutes
Mode
Acoustic song with a jazz rhythm section: long takes in which the voice circles its phrases until they change
Mythos
Genesis and aftermath: a longing for rebirth in the place a life began, then the departure from it
Phase
Eight tracks on two near-equal sides headed “In the Beginning” and “Afterwards”; three long songs set as pillars, and a bare ending
Presentation
Album; eight tracks, about forty-seven minutes, with strings and horns overdubbed after the band sessions
Register
Voice and acoustic guitar, double bass, second guitar, flute and soprano saxophone, vibraphone and percussion, light drums; strings and a small horn group
Scale
One young consciousness, its city and a few named streets, held in memory
Governing Proposition
A rock singer of twenty-three, a hit behind him and a contract dispute around him, leads jazz players through eight long acoustic songs whose phrases circle until they turn, and divides them into a beginning and an afterwards: memory returning to the few streets where a life began, asking to be reborn there, and leaving them on a train.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The record begins with a guitar and a double bass, and then the voice makes its first long ascent. The title track rises, the strings lift it further, and the song asks “to be born again”. That asking is the record. Over seven minutes Morrison circles a few phrases and repeats them until they turn, and the circling is not decoration: it is memory returning to one place, a life going back to where it began and trying to begin there again. The first side is headed “In the Beginning”, and the first song is a call.
Warner Bros.-Seven Arts released the album in November 1968, eight tracks on two sides, produced by Lewis Merenstein. Morrison was twenty-three. He had left Them, had a hit in 1967 with “Brown Eyed Girl” on Bert Berns’s Bang label, and came to Warner after Berns’s death in December 1967 under a contract dispute. Several of the songs, “Beside You” and “Madame George” among them, existed in earlier versions from the Bang period. Merenstein hired jazz players: Richard Davis on double bass, Jay Berliner on guitar, Connie Kay on drums, John Payne on flute and soprano saxophone, Warren Smith Jr. on percussion and vibraphone. Larry Fallon arranged and conducted the strings and horns, overdubbed afterwards.
The architecture is two sides of almost exactly equal length, about forty-seven minutes in all. Four of the eight tracks run over six minutes and take about two thirds of the time; the longest, “Madame George”, close to ten minutes, a fifth of the record, stands second on side two. There is no electric instrument of consequence: acoustic guitars, bass, flute, vibraphone, strings, a small horn group on one track. Three long songs are set as pillars, the title track opening, “Cyprus Avenue” closing side one, “Madame George” at the centre of side two. The sequence is a genesis and its aftermath, and it is built so.
Movement II
“Sweet Thing” is joy at near full height. The voice runs ahead of the band, Payne’s flute answers it, and the song is a garden seen, the happiness of a first sight held as it happens. It is the brightest point of side one and the most distant thing on the record from its last song, and both obey one law: acoustic, unhurried time, a voice that circles until the phrase changes, desire set in a place. Seven of the record’s eight tracks rise; this is one of the four where the height is full.
Under it, and under everything, is Richard Davis’s bass. It is the record’s second voice, answering and anticipating Morrison phrase by phrase, and it carries the form. Berliner’s guitar lines, Kay’s light time and Payne’s flute are placed with restraint around the two voices. The turn this makes is large. The rock and rhythm-and-blues record of 1968, and Morrison’s own hit, stood on chorus, backbeat and electric guitar; here a rock singer leads a jazz rhythm section through long takes, most songs have no chorus, and the voice treats words as sound. The models lie nearer modal jazz and the folk ballad than any rock album of its year.
The stake was the singer’s career. He came out of a contract dispute with a hit behind him and placed his first record for a new label on a form no audience had asked for, and the record failed commercially for years. What holds the turn short of the top is that the means were jazz’s and folk’s, already proven, and others were moving in a near direction at the same time. The making has its faults. “Beside You” is loose in the middle. Fallon’s strings, added afterwards by another hand, are sometimes conventional and sit apart from the band, and the mix is rough in places, the voice and the bass carrying while the rest blurs.
Movement III
Side one ends on a boy in a car. “Cyprus Avenue” discloses adolescent longing as paralysis: a boy who sees a girl he cannot reach, on a named street in Belfast, and cannot speak. The song does not explain him. It repeats, as he does, and the voice stammers where the words would fail. This is disclosure through sound as well as through words, and it is credited as such: the breaking voice says what the lyric does not.
Its close is a summit. The band slows, the voice drops out and returns, and the repeated phrases arrive somewhere they could not have reached without the repetition. The subtractive test meets the record here at an angle. Cut the repetitions of this close, or of the long farewell of “Madame George”, and the songs lose their arrival; they resist. A three-minute song with a chorus could not say what this form says, because the form is a mind going back to one place and finding it changed by the going back.
What the record discloses can be stated: in a young man desire and memory are one motion, and the place a life began, a few named streets, is where it keeps trying to be reborn. The record shows that, and holds it. But much of it is mood, rapture and ache, more than meaning, and what it states as a condition rests on the title track, this song and one other. The place itself is particular: Cyprus Avenue, Fitzroy Avenue, the railway, a party in a house. Belfast is held as childhood and as streets.
Movement IV
Side two is headed “Afterwards”, and the turn of the sides is the record’s frame: a beginning, then what follows it. Side one’s songs are of longing and first sight; side two’s are of the party, the departure, the dancer and the dying. The frame is printed on the record as released, and the sequence bears it out. It opens badly. “The Way Young Lovers Do” is a brassy jazz waltz in a stock arrangement, in another register from everything around it, and it is the one breach of the record’s law and of its form. It could leave with little loss.
Then “Madame George”, nearly ten minutes, the record’s centre and its highest point. A boy at a party in the half-light sees an older figure of uncertain gender, and sees that figure with tenderness and without judgment; then the song leaves on a train, and builds for its whole length into a repeated farewell. It is the deepest disclosure on the record, a human condition seen whole and held, and the one order the record sees from outside its speaker. Here myth is built rather than evoked: Madame George becomes more than a person, a figure at the threshold between childhood and the world, loved and left.
Around that song the myth thins. The genesis and the aftermath are carried by the side titles and the sequence more than built through every song, and the mythic elsewhere is evoked rather than load-bearing. “Ballerina” follows and runs past what its material asks, rising once, late. The height of the record is of one colour, ecstatic longing, without terror or grandeur, and that holds it from the top of its own strongest axis even as it reaches that height four times.
Movement V
The record ends bare. “Slim Slow Slider” is the voice and the soprano saxophone almost alone, a song of illness and dying, and it stops rather than concludes. It answers “Sweet Thing” as afterwards answers the beginning: the same voice, the same circling, the same acoustic room, the garden now a road out. The law that governs the record holds across its widest distance, from rapture to adolescent paralysis, tenderness, farewell and illness, and the range is wider than the record’s name for a single mood.
It sold poorly at first, and its standing has grown in every decade since. Lester Bangs wrote a long essay on it, among the most cited pieces of rock criticism; Ryan H. Walsh’s Astral Weeks: A Secret History of 1968 (2018) reopened its context; Morrison performed it whole in 2008, forty years on. Its reach is real and diffuse. It founded no school, and no practice turned on it at once; it came late, through individual singers and songwriters and the idea that a rock album may be a single ecstatic utterance, a touchstone cited more than followed. The fabric carries little date, and the record is heard whole, more among critics and musicians than among the public.
What it holds is one consciousness: memory, desire and the ecstatic state, love from the crush to the lovers’ walk, childhood and the city, rebirth asked for, a marginal figure seen, and at the end illness and death. The family, labour, the state and history do not appear, though the record comes from Belfast on the eve of the Troubles. Within that, the form is the knowledge. The record asks to be born again in the place it began, circles that place until the asking changes, and ends by breaking off.
Act III · The Twelve
Eight tracks in about forty-seven minutes, and the subtractive test meets the record at an angle, because its method is repetition. Morrison circles a phrase until it turns, and the circling is the subject: memory returning to one place. Cut the repeated close of “Cyprus Avenue” or the long farewell of “Madame George” and those songs lose their arrival; they resist. The test finds give elsewhere. “The Way Young Lovers Do” is a brassy jazz waltz in another register from everything around it and could leave with little loss. “Ballerina” runs past what its material asks, “Beside You” is loose in the middle, and “Slim Slow Slider” stops rather than concludes. Four strong necessities against three or four places of give hold the figure, the record’s second lowest.
Score: 8.0 / 10
The disclosure can be stated: in a young man desire and memory are one motion, and the place a life began, a few named streets, is where it keeps trying to be reborn. The title track asks “to be born again”, and the record shows the asking. “Cyprus Avenue” discloses adolescent longing as paralysis, a boy in a car who cannot reach the girl he sees. “Madame George” goes deepest: an older figure of uncertain gender, seen by a boy at a party in half-light, with tenderness and without judgment, then left behind on a train. The breaking voice, stammer and cry, is credited as disclosure too. It is held below the bar because much of the record is mood more than meaning, and what it states rests on three songs.
Score: 8.2 / 10
Height is frequent, and its kind is transport. The title track rises from guitar and bass into the voice’s first long ascent, and the strings lift it further. “Sweet Thing” is joy at near full height, the voice running ahead of the band. The close of “Cyprus Avenue”, the band slowing, the voice dropping out and returning, is a summit. “Madame George” builds for nearly ten minutes into its repeated farewell, the record’s highest point, and “Ballerina” rises once, late. Seven of eight tracks rise, and full height is reached four times. It is held from the top because the elevation is of one colour, ecstatic longing without terror or grandeur, and because two tracks swing or wander without rising. It stands level with Kind of Blue on frequency, a tenth below on purity.
Score: 9.0 / 10
The record is built on one archetypal frame, and the frame is printed on it: side one is “In the Beginning”, side two “Afterwards”. Side one is a genesis, a longing for rebirth that opens on the title track’s call and passes through the garden of “Sweet Thing” to the boy on Cyprus Avenue. Side two is the after-life of that innocence: the party, the departure, the dancer, the dying. The particular stays particular, Fitzroy Avenue, Cyprus Avenue, a train, a named figure, and Madame George becomes more than a person: a figure at the threshold between childhood and the world, loved and left. What holds the axis below the bar is that the frame is carried by the side titles and the sequence more than built through every song, and around it the mythic is evoked rather than load-bearing.
Score: 8.3 / 10
The turn is from the rock and rhythm-and-blues record of 1968, and from the singer’s own hit, to something without precedent in its field: a rock singer leading a jazz rhythm section through long takes, with no electric guitar and no chorus in most songs, the voice treating words as sound and repeating them until they change. Its models lie nearer modal jazz and the folk ballad than any rock album of its year. The stake was real. Morrison came out of a contract dispute with a hit-single career behind him, placed his first record for a new label on a form no audience had asked for, and the record failed commercially for years. It is held from the top because the means were jazz’s and folk’s, already proven, and others were moving in a near direction at the same time.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Change the form and the record stops knowing what it knows. The songs are made to be circled: a few chords, a bass line answering the voice phrase by phrase, a voice free to repeat, stammer and extend. That form is memory returning to a place, and a three-minute song with a chorus could not say it. The sequence is counted here, once: two sides of near-equal length, genesis and aftermath, with the long songs set as pillars (the title track opening, “Cyprus Avenue” closing side one, “Madame George” at the centre of side two) and the bare “Slim Slow Slider” to end. What holds the axis down: strings added afterwards by another hand sometimes sweeten rather than serve, “The Way Young Lovers Do” breaks the form, and edits and fades made after the takes fixed part of the shape.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Evidence rather than promise, and fifty-eight years of it. Critics have returned to the record in every decade since its failure: Lester Bangs’s long essay on it is among the most cited pieces of rock criticism, Ryan H. Walsh’s Astral Weeks: A Secret History of 1968 (2018) reopened its context, and the major critical polls of albums have placed it high. Morrison performed it whole in 2008, forty years on, and that return reopened what the songs are. The depth is semantic and formal at once: the words remain open to reading, and the interplay of Richard Davis’s bass with the voice yields on each return. It is held below the top because the re-examination is narrower than that given to Kind of Blue, which musicians study as a grammar.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The field is the rock and singer-songwriter album of 1968 and the years after. The intrinsic force is high: the record showed that a rock singer could make an album as a long improvised meditation with jazz players, setting words as incantation inside an open form, and that the result could hold the deepest material of a life. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the record founded no school, and no practice can be shown to have turned on it at once. Its reach came late and runs through individuals: the open-form songs of later singer-songwriters, Morrison’s own later work, and the idea that a rock album may be a single ecstatic utterance. Much of it is the reach of a touchstone, cited more than followed. Delayed influence is credited and discounted, and that holds the figure below the bar.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Survival is weighed over fifty-eight years: form first, then presence, then fabric. The form is whole: the recording survives as issued, remastered and reissued. Presence has grown: a record that sold poorly in 1968 is now heard whole, placed high in every count of the century’s albums, and was performed whole by its maker forty years on. That presence is wider among critics and musicians than among the public, and the songs are known through the album more than through broadcast, which holds it from the top of its row. The fabric carries little date: acoustic instruments, no period drum or guitar sound, only the strings marking the late sixties. It stands two tenths below Kind of Blue, which has lasted longer and is heard more widely.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Command of the recorded medium is load-bearing at the centre. Richard Davis’s bass is the record’s second voice, answering and anticipating Morrison phrase by phrase, and it carries the form. Morrison’s singing is command of a rare kind: the voice moves from croon to stammer to cry, bends words, and places its repetitions so that they build. Jay Berliner’s guitar, John Payne’s flute on “Sweet Thing” and “Beside You”, and Connie Kay’s light time are all placed with restraint. The faults fall across the record: Larry Fallon’s overdubbed strings are sometimes conventional and sit apart from the band, the mix is rough in places, “The Way Young Lovers Do” is a stock arrangement, and two tracks end on fades. It stands below Low at 9.0 and Kind of Blue at 9.3, which command the medium throughout.
Score: 8.7 / 10
One law governs the record: acoustic, unhurried time; a voice that circles and repeats until the phrase changes; memory and desire set in a few named places. The two most distant elements are “Sweet Thing”, all joy, the garden seen, and “Slim Slow Slider”, bare and dying, the voice and the soprano saxophone almost alone. They obey the same law, the same voice, the same circling, the same acoustic room, and the second answers the first as afterwards answers the beginning. The range is real: rapture, adolescent paralysis, tenderness, farewell, illness, from guitar and bass to strings. The one breach is “The Way Young Lovers Do”, whose brass and swing belong to another record. Narrowness is not the issue: the range is wider than the record’s name for a single mood.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Judged on what the record holds. Consciousness is held deeply: memory, desire and the ecstatic state. Love and sexuality are held, from the adolescent crush to the lovers’ walk. Childhood and the city are held together: Belfast’s streets, the avenue, the railway, a party in a house. The sacred is present as longing, rebirth asked for, not as faith. Gender and the marginal are held in “Madame George”, the one order the record sees from outside the speaker, and illness and death enter at the end. What holds the axis lowest is absence: the family, labour, the state and history do not appear, though the record comes from Belfast on the eve of the Troubles. A forty-seven-minute record of one consciousness holds what it holds, and the figure describes the form.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.5 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Sublime at 9.0, then The Swerve, The Bottomless Well and The Imperishable at 8.8. Transport on seven of eight tracks and full height four times; a rock singer’s turn to a jazz rhythm section and long acoustic takes, staked against a hit-single career; fifty-eight years of return by critics and musicians; and a record that failed on release, has grown in every decade since, and carries little of its date.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 7.3: one consciousness, its love and its city, with the family, labour, the state and history absent. Then The Inevitable at 8.0: the looseness of “Beside You” and “Ballerina” and the breach of “The Way Young Lovers Do”. Then The Unconcealment at 8.2, and The Archetypal Deep and Pressure on Tradition at 8.3: much of the record is mood more than statable meaning, its myth is framed by the side titles more than built through every song, and its reach came late and runs through individuals.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.0 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.6, The Made at 8.7, The Inner Law at 8.6, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Swerve and The Imperishable at 8.8 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Unconcealment at 8.2, The Archetypal Deep at 8.3 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.3 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met: no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.0, against 7.5, and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.3.
Basis · the LP as first released by Warner Bros.-Seven Arts in November 1968, eight tracks in their original sequence on two sides headed “In the Beginning” and “Afterwards”, about forty-seven minutes; judged from knowledge of the recording, its documented making and its reception. No recording, score or lyric sheet was in hand. The album is the unit; reissues, remasters, later editions and Morrison’s performance of the album in 2008 are evidence only. Running times are given roughly. Songs are cited by title, and one phrase of four words is quoted from the title track. Facts that could not be verified are not given: among them the studio and dates of the sessions, the exact day of release, the personnel of each track, the circumstances of the earlier versions of the songs, the players’ accounts of how the sessions were run, the edits made to particular tracks, the record’s later sales certification, the recording of the 2008 performance and the expanded edition, the year and place of publication of the Bangs essay, and the names of musicians who have cited the record.