The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Don DeLillo · a novel in two parts, with two first-person sections in another voice · Scribner, New York, 2003 · scored on DeLillo’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain
Mode
Novel of finance as stylized allegory; the one-day crossing of a city, the drama of a master’s ruin and a prophecy of the networked market in one book
Mythos
The one-day voyage across a city, from the Odyssey through Ulysses, bent westward toward origin; the king who seeks his own sacrifice; the man who sees his fate before it comes
Phase
One day in the year 2000, at the end of the boom: from a sleepless night to a barbershop in the neighbourhood a father came from, and a last room
Presentation
Fiction; two parts of third-person narration close to Eric Packer, with two first-person sections, “The Confessions of Benno Levin”, written after the event and set within the day
Register
Short declaratives and aphorisms that turn on themselves; dialogue stylized to one idiom; cold and dry by design, broken by set pieces of grief, violence and strange calm
Scale
One man, one day and one street across Manhattan, with money, the state, the body, art, religion and protest met along the way
Governing Proposition
Eric Packer, a master of the currency markets, spends one day in the year 2000 crossing Manhattan in a cork-lined limousine to get a haircut, while his bet against the yen fails hour by hour and the city stalls around him; he loses his fortune and his wife’s, sheds his protection, and arrives at the room of the man who will kill him, a discarded employee whose confessions, set within the day, have told the reader the end before Eric knows it. The wager of the novel is that money made into data had come loose from narrative and from the present, so that capital lived in a future it computed, and that a day of crawling traffic set against markets moving at the speed of light can show a master’s wish to be absorbed by what he mastered.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
“Sleep failed him.” The novel opens on Eric Packer awake in the night, and its first three words set a master of time against the one thing time will not give him. He is a master of the currency markets, and on this day, in the year 2000, he has bet against the yen. The yen keeps rising. Through the hours that follow it will refuse to fall, and he will refuse to stop betting against it.
What he wants this day is a haircut. He will cross Manhattan for it, westward along one street toward Hell’s Kitchen, in his limousine, to the barber who cut his father’s hair, in the neighbourhood his father came from. The city is stalled: a presidential motorcade holds the traffic, and the car crawls. The whole book takes this one day and, almost wholly, this one route, so that the city is seen street by street through the windows of a car that hardly moves.
Don DeLillo’s thirteenth novel was published by Scribner, New York, in 2003. It is told in two parts, in the third person close to Eric, and within them stand two sections in another voice, “The Confessions of Benno Levin”, written by a former employee of Eric’s after the events of the day. Benno is the man who will kill him. Because his confessions are set within the day, the reader knows the end before Eric does, and the book is a day long with its last hour already known.
Movement II
The limousine is lined with cork against the noise of the city, and the book has a word for it: the car has been “prousted”. The joke is exact. The sealed room in which a novelist once withdrew from Paris to recover lost time has become a car in which a trader withdraws from Manhattan to command the future. Inside it are screens, and on the screens the market moves at the speed of light while the car moves at the pace of a funeral.
Eric’s advisers board the car one after another to talk, each with a subject: technology, currency, finance. Vija Kinski, his chief of theory, gives the book its theory as lecture: money has come loose from narrative and from the present, and capital lives in a future it computes. A doctor examines him in the car, as one does every day, and his prostate is found asymmetrical. Torval, the head of his security, watches the street. Whoever speaks, the talk in the car has one idiom, aphoristic and cold, turning on itself.
The gap between the screens and the street is the book’s subject. The market computes the future in fractions of a second; the car crawls through traffic at a mourner’s pace. Eric begins to see himself act a moment before he acts, as if an image of him ran just ahead of the man. The uniform manner costs the book its persons: Eric is a figure ideas pass through more than a man in whom a condition is shown, and every voice in the car sounds like his.
Movement III
Eric’s wife, Elise Shifrin, is a poet, and has a fortune of her own. He meets her several times in the course of the day, and each meeting fails: the two speak past each other in the same cool idiom, and the marriage repeats one figure of non-meeting until the figure is the marriage.
Between the meetings there are other women, Didi Fancher, through whom art enters the day, and Kendra Hays, and the encounters repeat one function. Art enters again in Eric’s wish to buy the Rothko Chapel whole, a building made for silence wanted as a possession. Each appetite is met and set aside. The body is examined, fed and spent, and none of it slows the car or brings the day any nearer to the ground.
Through the day the yen keeps rising, and Eric keeps betting against it, past reason. He loses his fortune, and then his wife’s. The ruin is not suffered; it is pursued. The master of the markets is shedding what made him master, money, marriage and protection, as if each were a weight. The book’s deepest pattern shows here: the king who seeks his own sacrifice, stripping himself on the way to the place where it will be made.
Movement IV
The funeral of Brutha Fez, a Sufi rapper, moves through the stalled traffic: mourners in procession, and whirling dancers among them. It is the book’s one moment of shared grief, and the one sight in the day that the market cannot price. Religion enters with it, and a warmth the talk in the car has kept out.
Protesters riot in the street, and the limousine is defaced. The riot ends in a man setting himself on fire, an act the book treats as the one thing in the day the market cannot absorb. Elsewhere on the route an assassin of a softer kind, André Petrescu, throws a pie at Eric. Two acts of protest, one burning and one comic, share a single day, and the book does not settle which register governs them.
At a film shoot hundreds of naked bodies lie in the street, and Eric lies among them. It is an image of strange calm: the master of the day’s abstractions, out of his car, lying as one body among hundreds. The set pieces are where the book rises, and between them the dry register returns, so that the heights come out of the talk and go back into it.
Movement V
In the course of the day Eric shoots Torval, his own guard, and the last of his protection is gone. At the barbershop, in the neighbourhood his father came from, the old barber talks of his father: origin and body, set against everything the day has turned into data. The voyage has run west, back toward its source, and it does not stop there.
Benno Levin, the former employee, writes in fragments and grievance, a man the system discarded, and his confessions are the book’s law seen from its casualty. Eric goes to the room where Benno waits. There, before the shot, he sees his own death in the crystal of his watch: his corpse, foreseen. The visions that ran a moment ahead have run to the end, and the book closes on a man who sees his fate before it reaches him, and on a reader who has known it since Benno first spoke.
David Cronenberg made a film of the novel in 2012, with Robert Pattinson as Eric; it is a separate work, and enters here only as part of the book’s presence. Written before the crash of 2008 and the market of the algorithm, the novel has since been read again as among the first to grasp the digital market. DeLillo set it at the end of the boom by design, and its devices, its valuations and its yen trade date it to the year 2000; that it became prophetic is why it is read, not a reason its surface has not aged. It is a cold, short, stylized book, made with control, and its prophecy is real and stated.
Act III · The Twelve
The route gives the book a spine, and the route is additive. Eric crosses the city along one street for a haircut, and the day is a sequence of stations: advisers who board the car to talk, each with a subject, technology, currency, finance, theory; meetings with his wife, each a failed meeting; encounters with Didi Fancher and with Kendra Hays; a medical examination in the car; a funeral, a riot, a film shoot. Some stations are required: the yen’s refusal to fall, the barber at the origin, Benno waiting at the end. Others are permitted: the advisers’ sessions repeat one form, and the encounters repeat one function. What holds the axis at the foot of the twelve, with one other, is that a quarter of the stations could go without the argument losing a step.
Score: 7.4 / 10
The disclosure is articulated and it holds: money made into data and moved at the speed of the network had come loose from narrative and from the present, so that capital lived in a future it computed; and the man who mastered it would want, in the end, to be absorbed by it, to pass out of the body into information. Eric’s ruin is willed. He bets against the yen past reason, loses his fortune and his wife’s, shoots his own guard, and goes to meet the man who will kill him. Later markets have made the account read as foresight; it is credited on what it disclosed in 2003. Held because the book states more than it discovers: the theory comes from Vija Kinski as lecture, and Eric is a figure ideas pass through more than a person in whom a condition is shown.
Score: 8.0 / 10
The height is in a few set pieces, and they are strong. The funeral of Brutha Fez, the Sufi rapper, moving through the stalled traffic with its mourners and whirling dancers, is the book’s one moment of shared grief. The riot of the protesters, the limousine defaced, ends in a man setting himself on fire, the one act in the day the market cannot absorb. The film shoot, hundreds of naked bodies lying in the street and Eric lying among them, is an image of strange calm; the last scene, Eric seeing his own death in the crystal of his watch before it comes, is cold and dreadful. Between them the register is the dry talk of the car. Height recurs, and the book’s abstraction keeps it at a distance.
Score: 7.6 / 10
Here a myth is built. The one-day crossing of a city descends from Ulysses, and through it from the Odyssey, and DeLillo bends it: the voyage runs west toward origin, to the barber who cut his father’s hair in the neighbourhood his father came from, and past it to a death. The deeper shape is the king who seeks his own sacrifice: the master of the markets who sheds his fortune, his guard, his wife and his protection, and arrives stripped at the room of the man who will kill him. His visions, himself acting a moment before he acts and at last his own corpse, make him the one who sees his fate. Held below the bar because Eric is so abstracted that the archetype stands over him more than through him, and the Joycean frame is evoked as much as built.
Score: 7.8 / 10
The turn is real: a novel of finance written not as social realism, the way American fiction had written money from Dreiser to Tom Wolfe’s The Bonfire of the Vanities, but as a stylized, nearly allegorical drama in which characters speak in aphorism and the market is a metaphysics. It joined the single-day form to the networked present and made a trader’s interiority a meditation on time, and the stake was real, since a book so cold invites the charge that its people are mouthpieces and its air is thin. Held where it is because the manner is DeLillo’s own, pushed further rather than turned; because the novel of money in stylized talk has a lineage, in Gaddis’s JR; and because the one-day frame is borrowed whole.
Score: 7.7 / 10
The form carries much of the knowledge. A day spent mostly in a vehicle that hardly moves makes the argument about time: the market runs at the speed of light on the screens while the car crawls at the pace of a funeral, and the gap between them is the subject. Benno’s confessions, written after the event and set within the day, mean that the reader knows the end before Eric does, so the narration enacts the foreknowledge his watch will show him; Eric’s visions of himself a moment ahead are the form compressed into an image. Held off the higher reaches because the stations could stand in another order, a form that permits episodes rather than compels them, and because every voice in the car is one voice, which the form does not need.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Evidence first, and twenty-three years show a rise. Since the crash of 2008 and the spread of algorithmic trading the book has been read again as among the first novels to grasp the digital market, and David Cronenberg’s film of 2012 sent readers back to it. On return its foreknowledge thickens: Benno’s confessions, the watch and the visions all point one way, and the yen’s logic, opaque at first, becomes the shape of the plot. Held because the field of meaning, once grasped, is bounded: the ideas are stated, often in so many words, and a second reading finds them where the first found them. The depth is in the prophecy more than in the persons, and persons are where novels most often keep yielding.
Score: 7.6 / 10
The field is the American novel of the 2000s. The intrinsic force is real: the book was among the first novels to treat networked finance as a change in the nature of time and of the self rather than as a scene of greed, and it gave the novel of money a new register, abstract, prophetic and cold. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: a film by David Cronenberg in 2012, and a standing that rose after 2008, as the market it described came to pass. What it did not do is redirect practice: the novels of the crash took other forms, mostly realist, and no school followed its stylization. It stands below Ellis’s American Psycho, whose figure entered the wider culture. What holds the axis at the foot of the twelve, with one other, is a reach that came late and lies in how a period is read more than in what was written after it.
Score: 7.4 / 10
Survival is weighed over twenty-three years, on what has been shown. The text survives whole as published and has stayed in print. Its presence has widened, carried by its rereading after 2008 and by the film, and it lies within DeLillo’s readership and the academy more than across the culture. The charge falls on the surface, which the axis names: a surface fixed to a technology and a moment, hand-held devices and screens, the valuations of the boom, the yen trade, the year 2000. DeLillo set the book at the end of the boom by design, and the design makes it historical; that it became prophetic is a reason it is read, not a reason its surface has not dated. Two decades demonstrate less than centuries, and the dated surface is charged.
Score: 8.1 / 10
Judged on DeLillo’s English, with no translation between. The sentences are cut close and polished; the opening words, “Sleep failed him”, begin a book of short declaratives and aphorisms that turn on themselves. The set pieces are commanded: the funeral, the riot, the film shoot, the last room. The cork-lined car, “prousted”, is a made object of real wit. Three charges: the dialogue is stylized until every character, the chief of theory, the bodyguard, the poet wife, the currency analyst, speaks one idiom, which is DeLillo’s; the exchanges with Elise repeat one figure of non-meeting; and the aphorisms come so thick that they cancel one another. The control is real, and the effect is airless by intent and at times beyond it. It stands level with the sustained manner of Palahniuk’s Fight Club.
Score: 8.0 / 10
One law governs: everything is turned into information and speed, and Eric moves through a world his systems have abstracted. Take the most distant elements, the cold talk of yen and yield in the car and the warm barbershop at the end, where the old barber talks of Eric’s father. They obey the same law, since the barber is origin and body set against abstraction, and the day is the approach to that choice. Benno’s confessions, in another voice, are the same law seen from its casualty, an employee the system discarded, writing in fragments and grievance. Charged: the tone wavers between satire and solemnity, so that the assassin with a pie and the burning protester share one day without the book settling which register governs; and the rule of Eric’s visions is extended without being explained.
Score: 7.8 / 10
The book reaches for many orders and holds most of them in sketch. Money, the master subject. Technology and the network. The state, in a presidential motorcade that stalls the city. The body, in the daily examination of Eric’s asymmetrical prostate and in his appetites. Marriage, in Elise. Art, in Didi Fancher and in Eric’s wish to buy the Rothko Chapel whole. Religion, in the Sufi funeral. Protest and politics, in the riot. Death, at the end. The city, crossed street by street. They are integrated, in that each is a station on one route and each is turned into data; and they are thin, in that each is visited once and held for a scene. Achieved, mostly, and integrated by abstraction more than by life.
Score: 7.5 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
7.7 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier III · Major
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 8.1, then The Unconcealment, The Living Form and The Made at 8.0. A text whole and in print, its presence widened by its rereading after 2008 and by the film; a disclosure that holds, that capital had come to live in a future it computed and that its master would wish to be absorbed by it; a form in which a car crawling at a funeral’s pace against markets moving at the speed of light is the argument; and sentences cut close, from “Sleep failed him” to the commanded set pieces.
Limiting Dimension
The Inevitable and Pressure on Tradition at 7.4: a route of stations of which a quarter could go without the argument losing a step, the advisers’ sessions repeating one form and the encounters one function; and a reach that came late and lies in how a period is read, with no school following the book’s stylization. Next above them, The Encompassed at 7.5: many orders, each visited once and held for a scene, integrated by abstraction more than by life.
The Necessity Cap is unmet: The Inevitable at 7.4 falls a tenth below the threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.0, The Made at 8.0, The Inner Law at 7.8, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on all five: The Imperishable at 8.1, The Unconcealment at 8.0, The Archetypal Deep at 7.8, The Swerve at 7.7 and Pressure on Tradition at 7.4 each fall short of the bar of 8.5. The Universal Minimum is unmet at The Inevitable, 7.4, and Pressure on Tradition, 7.4, both below 7.5; The Encompassed, which it exempts, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.5. Two of the five summit conditions are met. The work stands where its aggregate places it: 7.7, in the band of Tier III, short of the 8.0 at which Tier IV begins and of the 9.0 that the summit requires.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Don DeLillo’s Cosmopolis, published by Scribner, New York, in 2003: his thirteenth novel, the second after Underworld (1997). It is scored as one novel, its two parts of third-person narration and the two first-person sections headed “The Confessions of Benno Levin” together, in DeLillo’s English as first published. David Cronenberg’s film of 2012 is a separate work and is not scored; it enters only as evidence of the novel’s presence. The book is in copyright and no text of it was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on DeLillo’s English, with no translation between. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain: the opening words, and one word for the car. The order of the stations along the route and the wording of the dialogue are held less closely than the frame and the set pieces, and the page claims no sequence among the stations beyond what is given. Facts that could not be verified, among them the month in which the day falls, where exactly Benno’s two sections fall, the page and word counts, the share of dialogue, the book’s first reviews, the record of its place in criticism and the film’s festival history, are not given. Citations are by part.