The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
M83 · Anthony Gonzalez and Nicolas Fromageau · recorded in Antibes · Gooom, France
Mode
Shoegaze rebuilt from stacked synthesisers and drum machine, with guitars and live drums beside them, aimed at the grand emotional scale of film music
Mythos
A landscape after the end evoked in the titles, dead cities, red seas, ghosts, a church, a lake under a mountain, a cyborg; and a day’s arc from flight at morning to dying into light at sunset
Phase
A threshold, a statement of method and the one song at the start; a middle of drifts, atmospheres and interludes; the longest piece by a wide margin at the close
Presentation
Album; the second by M83, the last made by the duo; recorded in Antibes and released in France in 2003 on the Gooom label
Register
Mostly instrumental; synthesiser pads and walls, machine beat and live drums, guitars; voices few, treated and half buried, one soft processed lead in Run Into Flowers
Scale
One young sensibility hearing its own feeling at the size of catastrophe, and a weather of images: birds, sea, lake, mountain, sun, a ruined city, a church, a machine
Governing Proposition
A French duo on a small label builds the guitar wall of shoegaze out of synthesisers, drives it with a drum machine and aims it at the scale of a film score, and makes a record in which one young sensibility hears its own feeling as large as weather and as ruinous as the end of the world. It rises often, and it rises one way. It runs from a short flight at dawn to a long storm at sunset, and what it finds, between those ends, is a size more than a meaning.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The record begins in mid-air. Birds is a short swell, a rise of synthesised sound with nothing before it and nothing to stand on, and it lets the record start already lifted, as if the ground had been left before the listening began. It states no theme and carries no song. It is a threshold, and it is required as one: a record that will end in a long descent into light begins with a flight at dawn, and the shape of the day the record travels is set in its first minutes.
Dead Cities, Red Seas & Lost Ghosts is the second album by M83, made by Anthony Gonzalez and Nicolas Fromageau, recorded in Antibes and released in France in 2003 on the small Gooom label. Fromageau left after it, so it is the last record of the duo; M83 went on as Gonzalez’s project, larger and more popular. The album as first released, the Gooom edition, in its original order, is the work. It is mostly instrumental: synthesisers, a drum machine and live drums, guitars, and voices that are few, treated and half buried.
The duo had made one quiet album on a small label, and there was no public to lose. What they set out to do on this one is audible from the start. The guitar walls of British shoegaze, of My Bloody Valentine, Slowdive and Ride, are rebuilt here chiefly out of synthesisers, driven by a machine, and aimed not inward, at the introversion of the indie record, but outward, at the grand emotional scale of the film scores and synthesiser pop of the 1980s. The French electronic music of the late 1990s is the immediate setting. The turn is real. It was taken on paths others were opening in the same years, and it risked little.
Movement II
Unrecorded states the method, and nothing later states it as plainly. A hard machine beat starts, and over it a wall of synthesisers climbs, layer on layer, steeply and early, into something grand and almost triumphal. It is the record’s first height. The making is exact where it matters: the beat and the synthesiser mass are set so that the wall rises without swallowing the rhythm, and the rhythm keeps pressing the wall upward. A shoegaze wall has been made without the guitar at its centre, and made to run.
What the piece discloses is a condition, and it can be named: enormity felt from inside a small room. The wall rises past the point of comfort, and the feeling it makes audible is the adolescent sense that private feeling is as large as weather. The feeling is exact and recognisable, and it is rendered through sound, which counts as fully as statement. The title of the record proposes more, dead cities, a sea turned to blood, ghosts, catastrophe in the register of a child’s imagining, and the music gives that catastrophe its size.
It does not give it a meaning. No human or social condition is articulated; the words are too few and too buried to carry a claim, and the sound does not convert the mood into something that could be stated and argued with. Beside it, Low (8.5) turns wordlessness into a city and an exile, and m b v (7.7), the nearest record on the desk in idiom, makes of its unstable pitch a finding about attention. This record makes a finding about size, and it is less exact than either. Its mood is real and well made, and it remains a mood.
Movement III
Run Into Flowers is the record’s one song in a plain sense, and its one approach to the ordinary scale of a song. A soft voice, processed and small, sits inside a large, bright arrangement of synthesisers and beat, and the height it reaches is a quieter one than Unrecorded’s: tenderness at full volume. The balance is the achievement. The voice is fragile and the sound around it is huge, and neither is lost; the arrangement is built so that the small voice is carried rather than drowned.
Change the form and the song goes. Played as a plain guitar song it would know only its melody; what it means is the scale of the arrangement around the voice, the small thing held inside the large one. That is the record’s whole procedure in miniature. It knows size through sound, through stacked synthesisers, through a compression that makes the mass press on the ear, and through voices sunk so deep elsewhere that they become part of the weather. At its peaks the form is the content.
The same compression has a cost. The mix is often crowded and pressed to the point of fatigue, so that dynamic range, the very means of the sublime in a long build, is spent early, and the heights that come later must rise from a floor already raised. The palette is narrow: the same pads and swells serve many pieces. Where the live drums are used, they are less exact than the machine. The layering is skilled, and done with limited means; it is load-bearing at the peaks of the record, not throughout it.
Movement IV
Between Run Into Flowers and the close lies the middle of the record, and there the subtractive test bites several times. The titles name a landscape: In Church, Noise, On a White Lake, Near a Green Mountain, Be Wild, Cyborg, 0078h, Gone. The slow pieces among them have a cold, wide beauty, the sense of looking down from a height at lights. But Cyborg and 0078h read as interludes and sketches, studio passages that hold a mood without adding a turn, and two or three of the slower atmospheres repeat one another’s gesture of swell and release. A shorter sequence would lose little.
The titles lay out a field of archetypes: the ruined city, the sea turned red, the ghosts that remain, the church, the white lake near a green mountain, the cyborg, the birds. It is a landscape after the end, half sacred and half science fiction, and the music gives it a weather, not a structure. No figure bears these images and no passage moves between them as stages of a story. In Church is a mood of reverence, not a rite; Cyborg is a texture, not a body. The myth is evoked, and nothing in the particular grows archetypal weight.
Here the form sags. The arc that holds at both ends becomes, in the middle, a container for pieces that could be reordered without loss, and the heights, all made by the one means, are anticipated before they arrive. The record’s law is kept throughout: Cyborg’s cold texture and Birds’ rising air are the same feeling at different sizes, and nothing contradicts anything. But the law is kept because little is asked of it. One register, grand, nostalgic and nocturnal, and one emotional temperature cover the whole, and narrowness is not coherence.
Movement V
The close is the end the record is built toward, and the longest piece on it by a wide margin. Lower Your Eyelids to Die with the Sun is a long accumulation: a build that keeps adding weight, layer after layer, each addition paced to be heard, until the sound becomes a storm, and then a release. It is the summit of the record and its dreadful sublime, the death in the sun of the title, and it works only after so much drift. The record that began with a flight at dawn ends at sunset, dying into light. That arc is the one frame the sequence carries, and it is real.
The record holds one consciousness and a weather of images. The natural order is evoked through titles and sound, birds, sea, lake, mountain and sun; the city is named in the title and given a ruin, not a life; the sacred is touched as a mood; the machine is the medium and, once, a figure. None is held as an order of reality with its own weight, and the family, labour, the state, history and other people are absent. It is the scale of the form as this record uses it. Beside it, Zooropa (7.8), a larger band’s turn to electronic sound, holds more orders and discloses more, and stands above it.
Twenty-three years on, the recording survives whole and has been reissued. It has a devoted public rather than a wide one, and it is sustained more by the later fame of M83 than by its own reach. Its timbres and its compression belong to the home studio of the early 2000s, and its cinematic manner has since become common, so that parts of it sound like the anticipation of a later cliché; the form and the feeling have outlasted the timbres. It widened an idiom without reorganising it. On the tenth hearing it means what it meant on the first, felt more fully: a feeling the size of the world, heard from one small room.
Act III · The Twelve
The subtractive test bites more often here than on the strongest albums of the kind. The frame is compelled. Birds is the threshold, a short swell that lets the record begin in mid-air; Unrecorded states the method, a drum machine under a rising synthesiser wall, more plainly than anything later does; Run Into Flowers is the record’s one approach to song; and Lower Your Eyelids to Die with the Sun is the end the whole is built toward, an accumulation that works only after so much drift. In the middle the test bites several times. Cyborg and 0078h read as interludes and sketches that hold a mood without adding a turn, and two or three of the slower atmospheres repeat one another’s swell and release. A shorter sequence would lose little. The cap is met, and only just.
Score: 7.5 / 10
Disclosure through sound is credited fully, and the record does disclose something: enormity felt from inside a small room, the adolescent sense that private feeling is as large as weather and as ruinous as the dead cities of the title. Unrecorded and the close make that feeling audible as scale, a wall of synthesisers rising past the point of comfort, and it is exact and recognisable. The title proposes more: apocalypse, a sea turned to blood, ghosts, in the register of a child’s imagining of catastrophe. What is disclosed stays a mood. No human or social condition is articulated; the words are too few and too buried to carry a claim, and the sound does not turn the mood into a meaning, as Low turns wordlessness into a city and an exile.
Score: 7.2 / 10
Elevation is the record’s purpose and its chief good, and it comes often. Unrecorded rises early and steeply, its synthesiser mass climbing over a hard machine beat into something grand and almost triumphal: the first height. Run Into Flowers reaches a quieter, brighter one, tenderness at full volume. The slow pieces have a cold, wide beauty, the sense of looking down from a height at lights. Lower Your Eyelids to Die with the Sun is the summit, a long build that keeps adding weight until the sound becomes a storm, the dreadful sublime of the title’s death in the sun, and then a release. What holds the figure is the repetition of one means, the swell, so that by the middle the heights are anticipated, and several of the shorter pieces stay level, held in atmosphere without ascent.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Myth is evoked and not built. The title lays out a field of archetypes, the ruined city, the sea turned red, the ghosts that remain, and the titles of the pieces add the church, the lake beneath a mountain, the cyborg, the birds: a landscape after the end, half sacred and half science fiction. The music gives these a weather, not a structure. No figure bears them and no passage moves between them as stages of a story; In Church is a mood of reverence, not a rite, and Cyborg a texture, not a body. One frame is real: an arc from flight in Birds to dying into light at the close, from the morning of the record to its sunset, which gives the whole its shape. It remains atmosphere laid over the order of the pieces.
Score: 6.9 / 10
The inheritance is twofold: the guitar walls of British shoegaze, My Bloody Valentine, Slowdive and Ride, and the synthesiser pop and film music of the 1980s, with the French electronic music of the late 1990s as the immediate setting. The turn was to build the shoegaze wall chiefly from synthesisers, to let a drum machine drive it, and to aim the whole at the grand emotional scale of film scores rather than at the introversion of the indie record. That is a real departure from both sources, audible from Unrecorded onward. The stake was modest. The duo had made one quiet album on a small label and had no public to lose, and the move was not lonely, since others in the same years were making shoegaze from electronics. A turn of real distance on paths already open.
Score: 7.4 / 10
Change the form and much of what the record knows goes, because it knows size through sound: the stacked synthesisers, the compression that makes the mass press on the ear, the voices sunk so deep that they become part of the weather. Run Into Flowers as a plain guitar song would know only its melody; its meaning is the scale of the arrangement around a small voice. The close needs its length, since the knowledge is in the accumulation. The sequence is counted here once: Birds’ short ascent, Unrecorded’s statement, a middle of drifts and interludes, and the long end. The arc holds at its ends and sags in the middle, where the form becomes a container for pieces that could be reordered without loss: a form that is the content at its peaks and arbitrary in its interior.
Score: 7.8 / 10
The evidence over twenty-three years is modest. The record has kept a devoted audience and is often returned to as the duo’s high point, before M83 became Gonzalez’s larger and more popular project, and the mixes repay attention: layers of synthesiser and guitar separate on close listening, and buried voices surface. But the formal depth is mainly density, and density is not yield; once heard, the swell and its release are known. The semantic depth is thin, since the words are few and the titles give images without a meaning to return to. No book-length study, no reworking across idioms and no tradition of reinterpretation is known to have reopened it. The record means on the tenth hearing roughly what it meant on the first, felt more fully.
Score: 7.1 / 10
The field is the electronic and indie music of the early 2000s. The intrinsic force is real and bounded: the record showed that the shoegaze wall could be made from synthesisers and a drum machine and pitched at cinematic scale, and in that it widened the idiom; it did not reorganise it, since the elements were known and others were joining them at the same time. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the plainest line runs through M83 itself, whose later work as Gonzalez’s project carried this sound to a far larger public, but that reach belongs to the later records and only part of it passes back here; beyond the band the record is often named among the sources of the electronic strand of the later shoegaze revival, but no particular record can be shown to have turned on it, and unnamed reach is credited little.
Score: 7.0 / 10
Survival is weighed over twenty-three years, on form, then presence, then fabric. The form is whole and legible: the recording survives as released and has been reissued, and nothing of the work is lost. Presence is continuous but narrow. The record has stayed in print and in listening, sustained more by the later fame of M83 than by its own reach, and its public is devoted rather than wide; that narrowness holds the figure below what the span alone would give. The fabric carries its moment: the synthesiser timbres and heavy compression of the home studio of the early 2000s are audible as such, and the cinematic epic manner has since become common, so that parts of the record sound like the anticipation of a later cliché. That is not charged heavily: the form and the feeling have outlasted the timbres.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Command of the recorded medium, with the words weighed elsewhere. The duo built large, layered sound with limited means, and the layering is skilled: in Unrecorded the beat and the synthesiser mass are set so that the wall rises without swallowing the rhythm, and the close is paced so that each addition is heard. Run Into Flowers balances a fragile voice inside a large arrangement. The costs are several. The mix is often crowded and compressed to the point of fatigue, so that dynamic range, the means of the sublime in a long build, is spent early; the palette is narrow, the same pads and swells across many pieces; some interludes sound like unfinished sketches rather than made things; and the live drums, where used, are less exact than the machine. Load-bearing at the peaks, not throughout.
Score: 8.0 / 10
One law governs: private feeling rendered at the scale of catastrophe, through stacked synthesiser and a slow swell to release. The two most distant elements obey it. Birds is a short passage of rising air and the close is a long storm; Run Into Flowers is a small song inside a large sound, Cyborg a cold textural piece; all are the same feeling heard at different sizes. The coherence is real, and the record never contradicts itself. But narrowness is not coherence, and the range covered is narrow: one register, grand, nostalgic and nocturnal, one method and one emotional temperature from first piece to last. The law is kept because few things are asked of it. This is a consistent record more than a governed one.
Score: 7.8 / 10
Judged on what the record holds. Consciousness is held, as one young sensibility’s sense of the vastness of its own feeling. The natural order is evoked through titles and sound: birds, sea, lake, mountain, sun. The city is named in the title and given a ruin, not a life. The sacred is touched in In Church, as a mood. Technology is present as the medium and in the figure of the cyborg. What holds the figure low is that none of these is held as an order of reality with its own weight: they are images within one feeling, listed by the titles more than integrated by the music, and the family, labour, the state, history and other people are absent. One consciousness and a weather of images, which is the scale of the form as this record uses it, and above the floor.
Score: 6.2 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
7.5 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier III · Major
Strongest Dimensions
The Sublime at 8.3 and The Imperishable at 8.3, then The Made at 8.0. Elevation as the record’s purpose, coming often, from Unrecorded’s steep early climb and the bright height of Run Into Flowers to the long storm of the close; a recording whole after twenty-three years, its presence devoted if narrow; and layering made with limited means that is load-bearing at the peaks, a wall that rises without swallowing its beat and a small voice carried inside a large sound.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 6.2: one consciousness and a weather of images, nature, a ruined city, a mood of the sacred and the machine, none held as an order with its own weight, and the family, labour, the state, history and other people absent. Then The Archetypal Deep at 6.9, a landscape after the end evoked in titles and given weather rather than structure; Pressure on Tradition at 7.0, a widening of the idiom whose reach belongs largely to the band’s later work; and The Bottomless Well at 7.1, a depth of density more than of yield.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.5 against a threshold of 7.5, on the line and with no room. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 7.8, The Made at 8.0, The Inner Law at 7.8, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on all five: The Imperishable at 8.3, The Swerve at 7.4, The Unconcealment at 7.2, Pressure on Tradition at 7.0 and The Archetypal Deep at 6.9 each fall short of the bar of 8.5. The Universal Minimum is unmet at The Archetypal Deep, 6.9, Pressure on Tradition, 7.0, The Bottomless Well, 7.1, The Unconcealment, 7.2, and The Swerve, 7.4, all below 7.5; The Encompassed, which it exempts, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 6.2. Three of the five summit conditions are met. The twelve sum to 89.5, an average of 7.46 that displays 7.5, and the work stands where its aggregate places it: in the band of Tier III, short of the 8.0 at which Tier IV begins and of the 9.0 that the summit requires.
Basis · the album as first released in France in 2003 by Gooom, the duo’s edition, in its original order; judged from knowledge of the recording; no recording, track sheet or lyric sheet was in hand. The first edition is the unit; later issues and anything they add are context only and bear on survival alone. The record is mostly instrumental and its few voices are buried: no words are quoted, and pieces are cited by title. The order of the pieces between Run Into Flowers and the close is not given, and running times are not given. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them the later British and American issue, who produced the record, the number of tracks and the total running time, the exact length of the closing piece, the nature of the voices outside Run Into Flowers, the titles and dates of M83’s later records, and the names of others making shoegaze from electronics in the same years.