The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Euripides · a tragedy for performance · about 1,466 lines in the standard numbering · Athens, City Dionysia, 428 BC, where by the ancient hypothesis it took the first prize · in Euripides’ Greek, read from knowledge with Barrett’s edition; Greek quoted only where its words are certain, in transliteration, with the desk’s own close English beneath
Mode
Tragedy of passion and of speech; a divine prologue and a divine epiphany framing a human action that thinks itself free
Mythos
The chaste youth, the stepmother’s desire, the false accusation and the father’s curse; the meadow untouched by the scythe; a death turned into a rite
Phase
From Aphrodite’s declaration of vengeance to Artemis’ departure: the queen’s sickness and her secret drawn out, the oath, her death and her tablet, the curse and the exile, the bull from the sea, and the son’s release of the father
Presentation
Drama for the City Dionysia; a prologue with a brief chorus of huntsmen, a parodos of the women of Troezen, three episodes divided by odes, and an exodos; about 1,466 lines in the standard numbering
Register
From a goddess’s cold speech of vengeance to a queen’s delirium, sophistic persuasion, a young man’s tirade, a father’s forensic dispute, a messenger’s terror and a quiet last exchange of forgiveness
Scale
One house in one day, two goddesses above it, and the sea that answers a father’s curse
Governing Proposition
A goddess slighted by a chaste young man sets his stepmother burning for him; the queen resolves to die in silence, her nurse breaks the silence for her, the young man is bound by an oath not to tell, and the dead woman’s written lie brings down his father’s curse. The wager of the play is that a passion known and resisted can still destroy, that purity made into an identity is its own disorder, and that between the gods’ indifference and the human failure of speech the only grace left is the one human beings give each other.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
“Pollē men en brotoisi kouk anōnymos / thea keklēmai Kypris”
“Mighty among mortals and not without a name, I am called the goddess Cypris.” The goddess of love speaks first, alone, and her business is vengeance. Hippolytus, the son of Theseus by an Amazon, honours Artemis and will have nothing to do with her, and for that he will die; his stepmother Phaedra will be the means, and Phaedra will die too, with her good name. The outcome is given away in the first speech. What the play withholds is not what happens but how, and what the human beings inside it cannot know.
Then Hippolytus comes in with a band of huntsmen singing to Artemis, and offers her a garland from a meadow untouched by the scythe. It is the image of the life he has chosen, unmated and kept apart, and the play sets it at the start so that it can be seen not to last. A servant warns him about Cypris, and prays to her. The warning is brief and earns its place: the slight has been given before the audience, and the goddess has already said what it will cost.
This is Euripides’ second play on the story. An earlier Hippolytus, called Kalyptomenos, “veiled”, is lost but for fragments, and ancient report held that its Phaedra declared her love to the young man herself and offended the audience. The surviving play, sometimes called Stephanephoros, “the garland-bearer”, after the offering of the first scene, was produced at the City Dionysia in 428 BC, and by the ancient hypothesis it took the first prize. Its text has come down whole, among the plays read and taught without a break.
Movement II
The women of Troezen enter singing of the queen’s sickness. Phaedra is brought out by her Nurse, and in her delirium she longs for the mountain, the hunt and the meadow, the places of the young man she will not name. The longing is his world spoken in her fever. The first thing the play shows of her passion is that she fights it, and that it speaks through her anyway.
The Nurse draws the secret out in an exchange of single lines. She names Phaedra’s mother, Pasiphae, and her sister, Ariadne, and Phaedra takes up their names as a family fate, a Cretan house with an inherited curse. She will not say the name of the man. She lets it be said by another, and so the name “Hippolytus” is spoken, but never by her. The play’s law of speech is laid down here: nothing true passes between these people directly.
Then Phaedra speaks at length, gravely, of how lives go wrong. “ta chrēst’ epistamestha kai gignōskomen, / ouk ekponoumen d’”
“We know and understand what is good, but do not labour it through.” Shame, she says, is a two-edged thing. She has chosen silence, and death. Then the Nurse turns. In a speech of sophistic persuasion she makes ethics an argument for yielding, and the one who loves the queen best becomes the agent of the catastrophe.
Movement III
The chorus sings to the god whose work this is: “Erōs Erōs” (525). The ode calls up his victims, Semele and Iole, and the power that gives desire and ruin together. It stands between the Nurse going in and the cries coming out, and it sees what the human figures do not, that the plan is already in the goddess’s hands.
Cries are heard behind the door. The Nurse has spoken to Hippolytus, and he comes out in outrage. He has sworn to keep silent, and now he would break the oath. His answer is the play’s most famous line: “hē glōss’ omōmoch’, hē de phrēn anōmotos”
“My tongue swore; my mind is unsworn” (612). Aristophanes quoted it against Euripides in Frogs, as a licence to perjury. In the play it is not one: Hippolytus keeps the oath he says he could break, and keeping it kills him.
He launches a long tirade against women, which runs past what the plot needs and is his, not the play’s; its excess is part of what Aphrodite punishes. Phaedra, who has heard it pass through the door, resolves to die. The chorus then sings the escape ode, wishing for the wings of a bird, to fly to the Adriatic, the Eridanus and the garden of the Hesperides, and then turning back to the Cretan ship that brought Phaedra. The song leaves the earth and returns to the house.
Movement IV
Phaedra is found hanged. Theseus comes home to grief, and finds a written tablet. It accuses Hippolytus. The dead woman, who would not speak her love, speaks at last in writing, and what she writes is a lie. The play turns at this midpoint: the first half was a woman’s silence about a truth, the second is her written lie and a man’s sworn silence about the truth. The halves mirror each other.
Theseus had been given three wishes by Poseidon. He spends the first on a curse against his son, and adds a sentence of exile. Then comes the dispute of father and son, and in it innocence speaks badly, because it cannot speak the truth. Hippolytus is bound by the oath, and the one witness who could clear him is dead; whatever he says, he cannot say what happened. The scene is forensic, as it must be: two men contending over evidence neither can test.
Hippolytus goes into exile, his oath kept. The chorus sings of the gods’ care for men. The audience knows what neither father nor son knows, because a goddess told it at the start: that the curse will be answered, and that the truth will come too late.
Movement V
A messenger comes. A wave rose so high it hid the Isthmus, and out of it came a bull. The horses panicked, and the young man was dragged on the rocks. The bull from the sea answers the bull of Crete, Phaedra’s family fate, and the father’s curse has been answered. The speech is one of the great set pieces of the theatre, terror told in order.
Artemis appears, and tells Theseus the truth: the tablet lied, and his son kept his oath. She can tell the truth and cannot save. She founds a rite at Troezen in which girls before marriage will cut their hair for Hippolytus, so that his death becomes their custom, and she promises revenge on some favourite of Aphrodite. Whether that redeems the gods’ indifference or simply repeats it, the play does not say.
Hippolytus is dying, and the goddess may not look on death; she leaves him. In the last exchange the son releases the father from the guilt of his blood. The play’s one grace is human, given in the face of a goddess who has gone: the young man who refused the shared condition of human life enters it at the end, in forgiveness. The two goddesses who framed the play at its first line and its last have never met, and neither has been just.
Act III · The Twelve
The subtractive test bites on rhetoric, not on structure. Remove the Nurse and the catastrophe has no agent: Phaedra has chosen silence and death, and only someone who loves her can break the silence for her. Remove the oath and Hippolytus has every reason to clear himself before Theseus, so the dispute of father and son has no lock. Remove the tablet and the dead woman cannot speak against the living man. The two halves are required as well: Aphrodite promises both deaths in the prologue, the woman’s and the young man’s, and the diptych is that promise kept. The servant’s prayer to Cypris in the first scene, asking her to forgive the young man’s pride, holds the whole play in a few lines. Held below the top by the length of Hippolytus’ tirade against women and of the dispute with his father, which say more than the action needs, and by a prologue that makes part of the first episode an exposition of what is already known.
Score: 8.9 / 10
The disclosures can be stated and they hold. First, against the view that to know the good is to do it, Phaedra: “ta chrēst’ epistamestha kai gignōskomen, / ouk ekponoumen d’”
“we know and understand what is good, but do not labour it through” (380 to 381). The scene shows it as well as says it: her reason stays lucid, and the end it reasons to is her death and his. Second, that the care for a good name, which she calls a two-edged thing, can kill as surely as desire: the lie on the tablet is that care turned to murder. Third, that speech once uttered cannot be recalled, and an oath that binds the tongue binds a life. Fourth, that the gods cannot do what human beings can: Artemis may not look on the dying, and the son forgives the father. What holds the axis where it stands is how the theology arrives: spoken from above, by one goddess at the opening and another at the close, rather than found in the action, and tried in the world of a single house.
Score: 9.0 / 10
It rises often and in several registers. Hippolytus’ prayer with the garland from “akēraton leimōna”
“the untouched meadow” (about 73 to 74), where only the reverent may cut; Phaedra’s delirium, longing for the mountain, the hunt and the meadow; the ode to Eros, with Semele and Iole as the god’s victims; the escape ode, wishing for the wings of a bird to the Adriatic, the Eridanus and the garden of the Hesperides, then turning back to the Cretan ship that brought Phaedra; the messenger’s bull rising from a wave that hides the Isthmus, and the horses’ panic. The height is the last scene, where the goddess must leave the dying man, “emoi gar ou themis phthitous horan”
“it is not lawful for me to look on the dead” (about 1437), and the son releases the father from blood-guilt: tender, cold and exact. Held below the top by the long level stretches in the middle of the play, the Nurse’s counsel, the tirade and the forensic dispute of father and son, where the argument keeps to the ground.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Myth built, and the build bears weight at every joint. The two goddesses stand as images on either side of the door, the poles between which the action is drawn, and they frame it: Aphrodite opens the play, “Pollē men en brotoisi kouk anōnymos / thea keklēmai Kypris”
“mighty among mortals and not without a name, I am called the goddess Cypris” (1 to 2), and Artemis closes it. The name is the death: the horseman is killed by his own team, panicked by a bull that Poseidon sends from the sea at a father’s word, and the bull from the sea answers the bull of Crete. The meadow untouched by the scythe is the unmated life that cannot last. The end is a founding: the girls of Troezen will cut their hair for him before marriage, so that the youth who refused marriage enters every marriage, and the myth closes into the city’s rite. The particular stays particular: Phaedra names her mother Pasiphae and her sister Ariadne as a family fate. Held below the highest figures because the gods are present as persons, which makes the pattern clear at some cost to depth beneath the surface, and because the chaste youth and the slandering wife are old stock, cousin to Joseph and Potiphar’s wife.
Score: 9.1 / 10
The swerve is real and its cost is on record. Euripides had written the story before, in the lost Hippolytus Kalyptomenos, whose Phaedra, by ancient report, declared her love herself and offended the audience. The second play wagers on the same story before the same public, and moves the offence into the act of speech: Phaedra fights the desire, will not name it, is betrayed into it by the Nurse, and kills for her name. The intermediary, the scene heard through a door, the silencing oath, the letter that speaks for the dead, and two goddesses at the frame who are neither reconciled nor just make a new tragedy of speech and silence; by the ancient hypothesis it took the first prize. What holds the axis a little above the bar is where the turn is made: inside the inherited form, with the divine prologue, the epiphany and the messenger’s speech used straight, and in part as a correction of the poet’s own earlier risk toward decorum rather than a departure from the tradition.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Change the form and the knowledge goes. The play is about what speech does and what silence costs, and its form is made of speech acts and their failures. The Nurse says the name, so that Phaedra can answer “sou tad’, ouk emou kleueis”
“you hear this from yourself, not from me” (352). Phaedra and Hippolytus never speak to each other: she hears his rage through a door, the oath shuts the one mouth that could save him, and the tablet speaks for the dead woman and is believed against the living man. The diptych is the instrument: the first half is the woman destroyed by the power she resists, the second the man destroyed by the power he refuses, and the two goddesses at the frame make the halves two faces of one law. The goddess who closes the play is the form’s last word on itself: she can tell the truth, and she cannot stay for the death. Held off the top by the joint at the tablet, where a lie and an oath, devices rather than one growing action, carry the play across its midpoint.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Evidence rather than promise. W. S. Barrett’s commentary of 1964 is one of the monuments of Greek scholarship; Bernard Knox’s essay of 1952 read the play as a tragedy of choice between speech and silence; Phaedra’s speech has been set against the Socratic claim that to know the good is to do it; Charles Segal, Froma Zeitlin and others have read its enclosures, the meadow, the hunt, the sea and the house. The questions stay open: whether Hippolytus is guilty of anything but devotion, a saint, a prig or both; what Phaedra means by her two kinds of shame, a passage still disputed; whether the Nurse acts for her mistress or against her wish; whether the gods are forces of nature or persons with spite; whether the son’s forgiveness redeems or only consoles. Held below the top because the return has been more scholarly than general: its open questions are fewer and less publicly contested than those of the tragedies on which theories of the form were built, and no such theory was built on this one.
Score: 8.9 / 10
The field is Attic tragedy of the fifth century, and Greek and European drama after it. The intrinsic force is real: the divided will made the action of a tragedy, a woman’s struggle with desire rendered from inside her reasoning, and a whole action bound to the mechanics of speech, the intermediary and the written word. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force, and it is specific: Aristophanes turned the oath line against Euripides in Frogs, within a generation; Ovid wrote Phaedra’s letter in the Heroides; Seneca rewrote the play as Phaedra; Racine built Phèdre (1677) on it and named Euripides as his source, and through Racine the story runs to Rameau’s Hippolyte et Aricie (1733), D’Annunzio, Jeffers and Sarah Kane’s Phaedra’s Love (1996). What holds it in the high eights is the channel: most of that reach passes through Seneca and Racine rather than from the play itself, and the larger reorganisations of Attic tragedy were made elsewhere.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Some twenty-four centuries, the text whole and read without a break. Hippolytus is among the ten plays of the select edition transmitted with scholia through Byzantium, so it was read and taught continuously, never lost and recovered. The form is fully legible; the losses are of the music and the dance, as for all Greek drama, and a few lines are suspected, as for every tragedy, none of them charged. Its presence is wide and kept twice: printed and taught, translated into every major European language, staged through the twentieth century and into the twenty-first, and present a second time in Racine’s version. It takes the foot of the range a text so whole and so continuously read commands, because its presence, wide as it is, is narrower than that of the most famous Greek tragedies, and outside the teaching of Greek it is read more in the academy than in common reading.
Score: 9.5 / 10
Judged on Euripides’ Greek, the music neither credited nor charged. The construction is exact. The irony is timed: the servant prays to Aphrodite just after she has announced the deaths, and the garland for Artemis is offered as they begin. The exchange of single lines draws out the secret by naming Phaedra’s mother and sister, the two women of her house ruined by love, until the Nurse says the son’s name. The Nurse’s second thoughts turn on a line that sounds like wisdom and is ruin, “hai deuterai pōs phrontides sophōterai”
“second thoughts are somehow wiser” (436). Phaedra’s long speech is grave and reasoned, the messenger’s narrative is one of the great set pieces of the theatre, and the last scene keeps the god’s voice cool and the man’s voice broken. The oath, the door, the tablet and the epiphany are machines fitted exactly. The charges are the exposition, where the prologue speaks to the audience and tells the plot, and the length of the tirade and of the dispute of father and son.
Score: 9.2 / 10
One law governs the whole: the powers of the world, desire and purity, sea and meadow, are not to be refused, and whoever refuses one of them, or tries to master it by speech, is destroyed by it; the gods who are these powers do not love the human beings they move. Take the two most distant elements: the untouched meadow of the first scene and the bull out of the sea; or Aphrodite’s cold opening speech of vengeance and the last exchange, where Hippolytus frees Theseus from blood-guilt. They obey the same law. The meadow is Artemis’ and refused to Cypris; the sea is Poseidon’s and brings the refusal back; and inside that law the only grace is the one human beings give each other. The chorus’s doubt that the gods govern justly is inside the law, not against it, and the range is wide for one play. What holds the axis where it stands is the dispute of father and son, whose forensic and sophistic register argues the law more than it lets it be felt.
Score: 9.0 / 10
A single play of about 1,466 lines, not marked down for its length and weighed on what it holds. The orders are several and integrated through one house: the inner life, at the pitch of Phaedra’s reasoning about shame, knowledge and will; the family, in a father, a son born of an Amazon, a stepmother and her nurse, and a Cretan house with its inherited curse; the city, in Theseus as king and the law of oaths and evidence; the sacred at its fullest, two goddesses, Poseidon, oath and curse, purity and pollution, and a cult founded at the end; the natural order of meadow, hunt, horses and sea. What holds it lowest of the twelve is what the form leaves out: one house in one day at the margin of a city, with labour, a people, the economy and history absent, and the state present only as a king’s word and a son’s exile.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.9 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 9.5 and The Made at 9.2, with The Archetypal Deep and The Living Form at 9.1. A text whole and read without a break among the select plays of Byzantium; a construction exact in every register, from the Nurse’s persuasion to the messenger’s bull, with the oath, the door, the tablet and the epiphany fitted as machines; a myth built at every joint, from the two goddesses beside the door to the rite at Troezen; and a form made of speech and its failures, in which the play’s two halves are two faces of one law.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 8.0, held by what the form leaves out: one house in one day, without labour, a people or history. Among the gated axes, The Swerve at 8.6, because the turn is made inside the inherited form and in part corrects the poet’s own earlier play, and Pressure on Tradition at 8.7, because the play’s reach has run largely through Seneca and Racine. Elsewhere the tirade and the dispute of father and son run longer than the action needs, and hold The Inevitable and The Sublime at 8.9.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.9 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Made at 9.2, The Living Form at 9.1, The Inner Law at 9.0, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Imperishable at 9.5, The Archetypal Deep at 9.1, The Unconcealment at 9.0, Pressure on Tradition at 8.7 and The Swerve at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, the last by a tenth. The Universal Minimum is met (the lowest of the eleven axes it covers is The Swerve at 8.6, against 7.5), and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.0. Every summit condition is met; the play is held below the summit by its aggregate alone.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Euripides’ Hippolytos in the Greek, scored as the surviving text for performance: about 1,466 lines in the standard numbering, the transmitted text as edited by W. S. Barrett (Oxford, 1964), whose edition and commentary were used for the Greek and for sense. The lost first Hippolytus, the Kalyptomenos, is not scored and is named only as ancient report gives it. The first prize of 428 BC is given on the word of the ancient hypothesis. Editors have suspected a few lines, among them some in Hippolytus’ speech against women and in the scenes after the tablet; which lines, and whether any are spurious, is contested, none alters the action, and nothing is charged for them. No text was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Of the English translations, David Grene’s (Chicago, 1942) was read for the play in English, with Anne Carson’s in Grief Lessons (2006) beside it. No published translation is quoted, and none is charged to the play: Greek is quoted only where its words are certain, transliterated, with the desk’s own close rendering beneath, and cited by line in the standard numbering; all other events are paraphrased. The music and dance of the odes are lost to every reader and are neither credited nor charged.