The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Nas · produced by DJ Premier, Large Professor, Pete Rock, Q-Tip and L.E.S. · Columbia · about 40 minutes
Mode
New York hip hop of the early 1990s: dense first-person verse over short sampled loops of jazz and soul
Mythos
The prodigy of the ruined city: the child who sees, and the witness a place cannot hear
Phase
Ten tracks on two near-equal halves; a collage for a beginning, then a night, a morning, a grant of the world, a retrospect, letters to the absent and a close on pure skill
Presentation
Album; ten tracks, about forty minutes, a debut spread across five producers, with one guest rapper and a cornet
Register
One rapped voice, level, watchful and exact; short loops of piano, bass and horn at a walking tempo; hard drums
Scale
One consciousness holding one housing project, its corners, its prison and its dead
Governing Proposition
A twenty-year-old raised in a public housing project lays dense, level verse over short loops that never resolve, across ten tracks and five producers, and makes the clarity of his seeing the claim: the place has a mind, and it is precise. The record perfects an inherited path more than it leaves one, and its myth of the child who sees is carried by the voice and the cover more than built by the sequence.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The record begins by recording where it came from. Before the first song there is a subway train, a stretch of film dialogue and an old verse played back, a voice heard first as an echo of itself. The title names a beginning, and what begins is a place and a mind inside it, set down as sound before either has said a word to the listener. The cover makes the same claim in one image: a photograph of Nas as a small boy laid over the street, the child and the place printed on each other. Everything that follows is that child grown, looking back at the street and saying what it is.
Columbia released Illmatic on 19 April 1994. Nas, Nasir Jones, was twenty, and it is his first album: ten tracks, about forty minutes. Five producers made it. DJ Premier made three tracks, Large Professor three, and Pete Rock, Q-Tip and L.E.S. one each, and the intro is the tenth track. There is one guest rapper, AZ, on Life’s a Bitch, and Nas’s father, Olu Dara, plays the cornet at its close. One track is older than the record: Halftime was issued in 1992 on the soundtrack of Zebrahead, before the album was sequenced.
The architecture is two near-equal halves. After the intro come nine songs, a little over four minutes on average, the shortest above three minutes and the longest under six, and nothing on the record is interlude but its first track. The hook carries little. The unit of the record is the verse, long, dense with internal rhyme, laid over a short loop that repeats and drops out and does not resolve. It is a debut in which nothing waits: the first song arrives at full density, and the last closes on pure skill. Between them the record holds one neighbourhood in one voice.
Movement II
The first song states the night and its danger at once. Premier’s dark piano figure loops without a seam under hard drums, and the first verse runs long and unbroken, with no chorus to release it. The rapper places himself in the “dungeons of rap” and then gives the city as it is after dark, its corners and its danger, at full density. The tension is close to terror, the dreadful kind of height, and it is held by refusal: the song will not let the listener breathe where a song usually lets him. The city at night is given in one breath.
What the record discloses can be stated, and it holds. A young man raised in a public housing project lives inside a city that treats him as disposable, and he sees it whole: the economy of the corner, the police, the prison that has taken his friends, death so near that rest feels like “the cousin of death”. He sees it with a clarity the place did not expect of him, and the clarity is the claim. The projects have a mind, and it is precise. The vantage is one: the women and the elders of the place are seen only in passing, and the disclosure is bounded by what it does not see.
Change the form and the record loses part of what it knows. What it knows is that a mind can hold a whole neighbourhood at once, and the form is the dense verse itself, sixteen bars and more of internal rhyme over a loop that never resolves. The pressure of the place is the pressure of the form, and the short repeating loop is the city’s sameness. The voice is an instrument as much as a speaker: syllables placed across and against the beat, breath held through long lines, rhyme inside the line heard as rhythm, every word clear at speed, and almost no strain to be heard.
Movement III
The night turns to morning. Life’s a Bitch is a twentieth birthday, “my born day”, and with it the ethic the condition produces: live today, because the day is not guaranteed. AZ, the record’s one other rapper, has a verse, and the song is the one place where the voice of the album shares the floor. It is a song of survival counted as a gift, and it is the second step of a sequence that has moved, in three tracks, from a beginning to a night to the first light.
Then the song keeps going after the words stop. Olu Dara, Nas’s father, improvises on the cornet over the fading loop, and the record’s second height is there: warm, unexpected, a horn in a record of samples, played by a man of another generation. It is the father answering the son. The family on this record is held only in moments, a birthday, a mother mentioned with love, and this is the fullest of them, given without a word. The coda is short. It changes what the song is, and the record could not lose it.
The sequence is argued here, once. A beginning, a night, a morning, then a grant of the world, a retrospect in Memory Lane, letters to the absent in One Love, and a close on pure skill. On the first side the arc from night to day is legible. The second side’s order is looser, and the subtractive test bites twice: One Time 4 Your Mind is the slightest song, a relaxed restatement of what Memory Lane does better, and Halftime, made before the rest, sits as a showcase more than a step. Both contain the skill more than they enact the knowledge. One soft track and one inherited one in ten.
Movement IV
The summit is the fourth track. Pete Rock sets a piano phrase over a drum that rolls rather than hits, filters the bass under it so the track breathes, and the hook asks “whose world is this?” and answers it with a grant of the world to a boy who owns nothing. The title is taken from Scarface, the gangster’s boast that the world is his for the taking, and the song turns it toward a claim made by mind rather than by force. A modern myth is inverted in a hook, and the inversion is the height: the boy owns the world because he sees it.
The myth of the record is built in one figure, the prodigy of the ruined city, the child who sees. The cover sets it, The Genesis names its beginning, and across the record he is the young witness of a place that cannot hear him, the voice that says what others do not say. One Love takes an old form, the letter to the prisoner. But the figure is carried by the voice and the cover more than built by the sequence, and the prodigy, the prophet and the underworld are summoned more than given structure. That is the record’s plainest limit: the myth is everywhere in the stance and nowhere in the architecture.
The inheritance is the New York rap of the preceding years: Rakim’s interior rhyme and composure, Kool G Rap’s crowded narrative, the jazz-sample production of Pete Rock and of A Tribe Called Quest, the hard drums of the Juice Crew and Gang Starr. The record joins the densest rhyming of its day to first-person reportage of one place, in a voice level rather than boastful, and every element was proven before it. It perfects a path more than it leaves one. The reach is large within its kind: the record became the measure of the New York lyric album, Mobb Deep, the Wu-Tang solo albums and Jay-Z’s Reasonable Doubt worked in the space it marked, and the many-producer debut became the standard method of the major-label rap album.
Movement V
One Love is the one place the record speaks to the absent. Over Q-Tip’s loop it is a letter to men inside, the news of the block told to someone who cannot see it: who was shot and who had a child. It is the most intimate track, and Represent, two tracks later, the most aggressive, and they are the same observer facing two ways. Memory Lane looks back with a nostalgic lift. The record ends on It Ain’t Hard to Tell, where Large Professor turns a pop record into a hard, bright frame and the voice closes on brilliance rather than height, a power earned by the nine tracks before it.
One law governs the whole: one voice, level and watchful, over a short loop of jazz or soul at a walking tempo, saying what the place is. The collage that opens the record and the boast that closes it obey that law, the first giving the voice its origin and the last its power, and five producers do not break it. The palette is narrow, one voice, one tempo band, one kind of loop, and narrowness is not coherence. The feeling of the record runs from dread to pride with little outside it. The law holds because so little is asked to obey it.
Thirty-two years have tested it. It has stayed in print and been reissued with the ten tracks intact; it is still heard whole, its lines quoted in speech and in later records, its verses annotated line by line and taught in university courses, its making the subject of a documentary. The sampler, the drum machine and the muffled low end of 1993 date the surface, which has become the classic sound of its kind. What it holds is one consciousness and one neighbourhood: friends, corners and parks, the street economy, the police and the prison, a family in moments, and death everywhere. The sacred is evoked, the natural order absent, and the world beyond the city a dream of escape.
Act III · The Twelve
Ten tracks in about forty minutes, and the subtractive test finds little, though not nothing. The Genesis must open: a train, film dialogue and an old verse played back set the record as a beginning and as a recording of a place. N.Y. State of Mind must follow, the night and its danger stated at full density. Life’s a Bitch turns the night to morning, a twentieth birthday, “my born day”, and its cornet coda is the father answering the son. One Love is the one place the record speaks to the absent. The test bites twice, and on a record of ten it bites hard. One Time 4 Your Mind is the slightest song, a relaxed restatement of what Memory Lane does better, and Halftime, made before the record, sits as a showcase more than a step. One soft track and one inherited one, a fifth of the record that could leave with little loss, hold the figure below the eight.
Score: 7.9 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds. A young man raised in a public housing project lives inside a city that treats him as disposable, and he sees it whole: the economy of the corner, the police, the prison that has taken his friends, death so near that rest feels like “the cousin of death”. He sees it with a clarity the place did not expect of him, and the clarity is the claim: the projects have a mind, and it is precise. One Love keeps account, from outside the walls, of who was shot and who had a child; Life’s a Bitch states the ethic the condition produces, to live today. The sound discloses too, jazz loops heard as a mind at night. It stops short of the bar, and not narrowly, because the vantage is one: the women and the elders of the place are seen only in passing, and what is disclosed is one neighbourhood seen through one consciousness, a condition reported with precision more than opened beyond its block.
Score: 7.9 / 10
Elevation is real, cool and intermittent. The World Is Yours is the summit: Pete Rock’s piano phrase over a drum that rolls rather than hits, and a hook that asks “whose world is this?” and answers with a grant of the world to a boy who owns nothing. The cornet that closes Life’s a Bitch, Olu Dara improvising over the fading loop, is a second height, warm and unexpected. N.Y. State of Mind reaches the dreadful kind: Premier’s dark piano figure and the long unbroken first verse hold a tension close to terror. Memory Lane has a nostalgic lift. Halftime, One Time 4 Your Mind and Represent drive more than rise, and It Ain’t Hard to Tell is brilliance rather than height. Four heights in ten, of two kinds, reached in moments and not sustained: the record’s mode is the street at eye level, and between its heights it holds the ground rather than climbs. That holds the figure below the eight.
Score: 7.8 / 10
Myth is evoked often and set in one figure: the prodigy of the ruined city, the child who sees. The cover sets it, a photograph of Nas as a small boy laid over the street, and The Genesis names a beginning. Across the record he is the young witness of a place that cannot hear him, the voice that says what others do not say. The World Is Yours takes its title from Scarface, the gangster’s boast, and turns it toward a claim on the world made by mind rather than by force: a modern myth inverted in a hook. One Love is the old form of the letter to the prisoner. What holds the axis well below the bar, and lowest among the record’s axes: the figure is carried by the voice and the cover more than built by the sequence, and the prodigy, the prophet and the underworld are summoned more than given structure. The myth is everywhere in the stance and nowhere in the architecture, and myth firmly evoked is what the figure scores.
Score: 7.2 / 10
The inheritance is the New York rap of 1987 to 1993: Rakim’s interior rhyme and composure, Kool G Rap’s crowded narrative, the jazz-sample production of Pete Rock and of A Tribe Called Quest, the hard drums of the Juice Crew and Gang Starr. The turn is real but small, smaller than its fame. The record joins the densest rhyming of its day to first-person reportage of one place, in a voice level and observant rather than boastful or militant, while the West Coast’s gangsta records held the commercial centre. Its method was a wager in one respect, a debut spread across five of the city’s leading producers, and even that wager was placed with proven hands. What holds it well below the bar: every element was proven before, the producers brought their own established sounds, and the stake was a debut’s, not a standing risked. A wager placed on a proven path is not a swerve, and the record perfects a path more than it leaves one.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Change the form and the record loses part of what it knows. What it knows is that a mind can hold a whole neighbourhood in one breath, and the form is the dense verse, sixteen bars and more of internal rhyme with almost no hook, over a short loop that never resolves. In N.Y. State of Mind the first verse runs long with no chorus to release it, and the pressure of the place is the pressure of the form; the short repeating loops are the city’s sameness. The sequence is counted here, once: a beginning, a night, a morning, a grant of the world, a retrospect, letters to the absent and a close on pure skill, over two near-equal halves. Side two’s order is looser, and Halftime and One Time 4 Your Mind contain skill more than enact the knowledge: the form is the knowledge in the verse and in the strongest tracks, and nearer a container across the sequence. That holds it below the eight.
Score: 7.8 / 10
Evidence over thirty-two years, of an unusual kind for a popular record. The verses have been annotated line by line and taught in university courses, and a documentary, Time Is Illmatic (2014), was made of the record’s making. In the recording, return repays: the internal rhymes keep yielding sound patterns not heard at first, and the place names, nicknames and references open a social map of one housing project. Return yields less in the form: the loops are short, and the production does not reorganise on hearing. The depth is semantic more than formal, the reverse of Kind of Blue’s, and much of the semantic yield is reference, the names and places of one project, a map that once read stays read. The narrow formal yield and the finite map hold the figure below the eight.
Score: 7.9 / 10
The field is the hip hop of the 1990s and, within it, New York rap. Intrinsic force is moderate and real: the record set a standard of density and observation in the verse against which the decade’s rapping was measured, and showed that an album could be built from several producers’ best work without losing a single voice. It fixed more than it reorganised: Rakim and Kool G Rap had made the verse, and the jazz-loop sound was in place. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the record became the measure of the New York lyric album; Mobb Deep, the Wu-Tang solo albums and Jay-Z’s Reasonable Doubt worked in the space it marked, a long line of later rappers followed, and the many-producer debut became the standard method of the major-label rap album. The reach is strong within its kind and narrower than the field’s epochal works: the record set a standard inside a music it did not redirect, and that holds it below the bar.
Score: 8.2 / 10
Survival is weighed over thirty-two years, on form, then presence, then fabric. The form is whole: the recording survives as issued, in print since release, remastered and reissued in anniversary editions that leave the ten tracks intact. Presence is continuous and wide within its kind: the record is still bought, streamed and heard whole, its tracks played in clubs and on radio, its lines quoted in common speech and in later records. The fabric is fixed in part to its moment: the sampler and drum machine of 1993, the muffled low end of the mix, and the crack era and its weapons date the surface, and that surface has become the classic sound of its kind, a survival as the emblem of a period as much as past it. Form whole, presence wide but bounded by its kind, fabric dated: that holds the figure below the bar.
Score: 8.2 / 10
Command of the recorded medium, with the sense of the words weighed elsewhere; the rapped voice is counted as a rhythmic and sonic instrument. Nas’s delivery is exact: syllables placed across and against the beat, breath held through long lines, internal rhyme heard as rhythm, enunciation clear at speed, with almost no audible strain. Premier cuts his source into a figure that loops without seam; Pete Rock filters the bass under the piano so the track breathes; Large Professor turns a pop record into the hard, bright frame of It Ain’t Hard to Tell. Five producers hold one sound. The faults fall across a real share of it: loops arranged by repetition and drop-out only, a dull low end, a voice that sometimes sits in front of a thin track, and One Time 4 Your Mind plainly made. The voice is a master’s; the frame around it is sometimes only adequate, and the figure weighs both.
Score: 8.3 / 10
One law governs the record: one voice, level and watchful, over a short loop of jazz or soul at a walking tempo, saying what the place is. The two most distant elements obey it. The Genesis is a collage of a train, film dialogue and an old verse; It Ain’t Hard to Tell is a boast over a pop record. The first establishes the place and the voice’s origin in it; the last shows the voice’s power, earned by the nine tracks before. One Love, the most intimate track, and Represent, the most aggressive, are the same observer facing two ways, and five producers do not break the law. What holds the figure below the eight: the palette is narrow, one voice, one tempo band, one kind of loop, and narrowness is not coherence. The law holds because so little is asked to obey it, and the feeling runs from dread to pride with little outside it.
Score: 7.9 / 10
Judged on what the record holds, with no discount for the album form. Consciousness is held fully, the watchful mind of a young man. The neighbourhood is held as a society, with named friends, corners and parks; labour as the street economy and its alternatives; the state as police and, in One Love, as the prison that holds half the record’s people. The family is held in moments: a birthday, a father’s cornet, a mother mentioned with love. Death is everywhere, and history is glimpsed in the record’s own past. What holds the figure lowest: the sacred is evoked and not held, the natural order is absent, and the world beyond the city appears only as a dream of escape. The family and history are glimpsed more than held. One neighbourhood is seen through one consciousness: several orders are joined there, and as many are only glimpsed or absent.
Score: 7.2 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
7.8 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier III · Major
Strongest Dimensions
The Made at 8.3, then Pressure on Tradition and The Imperishable at 8.2. A voice used as an exact rhythmic instrument and five producers holding one sound; a reach that made the record the measure of the New York lyric album and its method the standard for the rap debut; and thirty-two years of presence, the ten tracks intact and still heard whole, as wide as its kind allows.
Limiting Dimension
The Archetypal Deep and The Encompassed at 7.2, then The Swerve at 7.3. The child who sees is carried by the voice and the cover more than built by the sequence; one consciousness holds one neighbourhood, its economy, its police, its prison and its dead, while the family and history are glimpsed, the sacred evoked, the natural order absent and the world beyond the city only a dream of escape; and the record perfects a proven path, with a debut’s stake, more than it leaves one. They are one fact: the record is an exact report of one place in one voice, and its reach is narrower than its fame.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.9 against a threshold of 7.5, by four tenths. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 7.8, The Made at 8.3, The Inner Law at 7.9, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on all five: Pressure on Tradition at 8.2, The Imperishable at 8.2, The Unconcealment at 7.9, The Swerve at 7.3 and The Archetypal Deep at 7.2 fall short of the bar of 8.5. The Universal Minimum is unmet at The Archetypal Deep, 7.2, and The Swerve, 7.3, both below 7.5; The Encompassed, which it exempts, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.2. Three of the five summit conditions are met. The twelve sum to 93.6, an average of 7.80 that displays 7.8: the work stands in the band of Tier III, short of the 8.0 at which Tier IV begins and of the 9.0 that the summit requires.
Basis · the album as first released by Columbia on 19 April 1994, ten tracks in their original sequence, about forty minutes, on CD, cassette and LP; judged from knowledge of the recording, its documented making and its reception. No recording or lyric sheet was in hand, and running times are approximate to within a few seconds. Later anniversary editions add bonus material and demos; none of it is the unit, and none of it is scored. Those editions, the soundtrack of Zebrahead (1992) and the documentary Time Is Illmatic (2014) are used only as evidence. Songs are cited by title, and words are quoted only where certain and never beyond four words. Facts that could not be verified, among them the studios and years of recording, the titles of the LP sides, a second hand in the production of the intro and Nas’s share in that of Life’s a Bitch, the sources of the samples and of the intro’s dialogue and verse, the record’s sales and certifications, its first reviews, later honours, a published book of essays on it and its performance with an orchestra, are not given.