The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
David Foster Wallace · a novel in untitled sections, with 388 endnotes · Little, Brown, 1996 · scored on Wallace’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain
Mode
Encyclopedic novel as a tragicomedy of addiction; family novel, sports novel, recovery narrative, political satire and thriller in one book
Mythos
Hamlet built into a family: a son named Hal, a father dead by his own hand, a mother who keeps the father’s successor close, a ghost who appears to a stranger; and the fatal pleasure of the lotus and the siren, as a film and its veiled actress
Phase
A short span in November of the Year of the Depend Adult Undergarment, around Interdependence Day, opened by a section set later, in the Year of Glad, with the events between withheld
Presentation
Fiction; untitled sections set off by a small circular glyph, many headed with a date in Subsidized Time, with no chapters or parts; 388 endnotes, some with notes of their own; a first-person opening, then a narration that takes on the speech of each strand, and a dialogue in instalments
Register
From Hal’s formal, cold first person to Gately’s speech and the speech of the recovery rooms, the translated English of Marathe and Steeply, an academic catalogue, slapstick and the long subordinate sentence
Scale
One family and two institutions on one hill, and a continent reorganised around them
Governing Proposition
In a near future whose calendar years are sold to corporate sponsors, a family’s tennis academy on a hill above Boston and a recovery house at the foot of the same hill keep their disciplines, while Quebecois separatists and an American agency hunt for the master copy of a film so pleasurable that its viewers will do nothing else until they die. The wager of the novel is that a culture organised around pleasure has made addiction its normal condition and irony one of its drugs, and that a book of a thousand pages, built so that it cannot be consumed without work, can show what a person chooses to serve and what the choice costs.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
“I am seated in an office, surrounded by heads and bodies.” The first sentence belongs to Hal Incandenza, the gifted son of the family that runs a tennis academy on a hill above Boston, and the section it opens is dated the Year of Glad. Hal sits before a group of deans. The voice that reports the room is precise, formal and cold, the voice of a mind in full command of itself. When he answers them, what he says to himself is plain: “I am in here.” What reaches the deans is noise, which they take for the sound of an animal. The book’s first scene is a mind intact inside a person who can no longer make himself understood.
The Year of Glad is the latest point in the book’s time. Most of what follows falls earlier, in November of the Year of the Depend Adult Undergarment, in a short span around Interdependence Day. In this near future the calendar years are sold to corporate sponsors, and many sections are headed with a date in Subsidized Time. So the novel begins at its end. It will close earlier than it opens, and what lies between, how Hal came to sit in that office beyond speech, is withheld. The reader carries the first scene through a thousand pages and is never shown the road to it.
The form announces itself at once. There are no numbered chapters and no parts: the text runs as a long sequence of untitled sections, each set off by a small circular glyph. The first edition runs to 1,079 pages, and roughly the last hundred are endnotes, 388 of them, some with notes of their own. The main text sends the reader to them, and several carry narrative that appears nowhere else. The title comes from Hamlet’s speech over Yorick’s skull, “a fellow of infinite jest”, and it is also the title of the last film made by Hal’s father, James O. Incandenza: the film around which the whole book turns.
Movement II
The Enfield Tennis Academy stands on its hill, and the Incandenzas live by its disciplines. The father is dead before the action begins, by his own hand. The mother, Avril, keeps close a man of the family, Charles Tavis, who now runs the father’s academy. There are three sons, among them Hal and Orin, whose long run of seductions the book follows at length. The boys of the academy give themselves to tennis as to a vocation, to its drills and its sayings. Discipline is the hill’s answer to the appetite the book will find everywhere below it, and the book never says whether the answer is a cure or another form of the disease.
The Eschaton is a game the boys play across four tennis courts laid out as the map of the world: a game of global nuclear war, with the nations and their arsenals set out on the courts. It collapses into violence when the players fall to arguing whether snow on the map is snow in the world. The map is mistaken for the territory, and a war that was a model becomes a real fight among boys. It is one of the book’s comic set pieces and one of its most exact: the confusion of the representation with the thing it represents is the culture’s disorder, played out on four courts by children.
Around the hill the continent has been rearranged. Its nations are joined in the Organization of North American Nations, and part of it has become the Great Concavity, a poisoned territory where waste is catapulted and feral creatures and outsized infants live. The future is the 1990s imagining itself forward, with its cartridges and its videophones, and in it the entertainment economy has come to the point at which a pleasure can be complete. The set pieces of this future are broad and comic. The hill and the house below it are drawn close, and the continent around them in caricature.
Movement III
At the foot of the same hill stands Ennet House, a recovery house, and its centre is Don Gately, a man in recovery who now works there. Gately is sober by the force of Alcoholics Anonymous, a programme whose slogans the clever characters of the book despise, and the slogans keep him alive. He prays to a Higher Power in which he does not believe. The book sets this house, the one institution it shows working, against everything on the hill above it, and gives it a sympathy that the encyclopedic novel before it had kept for its ideas.
The residents come with their case histories, and the book gives many of them at length, together with the jobs they hold to stay in the house. The speech of the recovery rooms is taken down without condescension, its clichés and its plain truths together. Recoveries and relapses are both shown: the slogans work, and they fail, and the book records both. Elsewhere Kate Gompert gives her account of clinical depression, and it is dreadful in the old sense, a suffering the book refuses to make comic.
One night outside Ennet House Gately fights a group of Canadians, and the fight is a set piece of physical terror. He is shot. The hill and the house have been braided from the start, the sections passing between the academy and the recovery house, between boys giving themselves to a sport and adults giving themselves to a programme in place of a drug; the distance between them is a distance of class as well as of height. The fight brings violence to the house’s door and sends Gately to the hospital bed where the book will keep him to its last page.
Movement IV
Somewhere there is a master copy of a film, called in the book the Entertainment, so pleasurable that whoever watches it will do nothing else until they die. It is hunted by Quebecois separatists, the wheelchair assassins, who want it as a weapon, and by the American Office of Unspecified Services. The separatists understand the American appetite exactly: their weapon is nothing but that appetite, given what it asks for. At the film’s centre is a veiled actress, and its pleasure is the old fatal one of the lotus and the siren, made into an object that can be copied and sent.
Through the whole book, in instalments, Remy Marathe and Hugh Steeply talk on a mountainside outside Tucson. Their English is written as a translation, its idioms faintly wrong. The conversation is about freedom, and it comes down to what a person chooses to worship: a person is what he gives himself to, and the free choice to serve one’s own pleasure ends in slavery to it. It is the book’s theory, spoken outright on a mountain far from the hill, of what Gately and Hal live out below.
The father, James O. Incandenza, made films, and an endnote gives his filmography: a parody of an academic catalogue that becomes, entry by entry, the portrait of a man. The last of the films is the Entertainment. And the father returns. As in Hamlet he comes back as a ghost, but he does not come to his son. He comes as a wraith to the bedside of Gately, a stranger, and the son never hears from him what the ghost knows.
Movement V
Gately lies in hospital with a gunshot wound, a man in recovery from narcotics, and he refuses Demerol. The refusal is held across many pages under pain. The wraith sits by the bed and speaks words into his head. It is the strangest scene in the book: a dead father’s ghost keeping company with a stranger, while the stranger refuses the one pleasure he knows best and will not take the drug that would end his pain.
The strands are never brought together. What happened to Hal between November and the Year of Glad is not said, and the book leaves open whether the Entertainment, the mould he ate as a child or a drug is the cause. The events that connect the end of the book to its beginning, the digging up of the father’s head among them, are left for the reader to reconstruct. What Gately and Hal did at the father’s grave is a question the book plants and does not answer. The thousand pages close in November, and the Year of Glad, where they began, lies beyond them.
The last pages are Gately’s memory, from his bed, of a binge and its punishment years before. It ends on a cold beach, and its last phrase is a plain report of the sea: “the tide was way out”. The book that opened on a mind sealed in silence closes on a man remembering the bottom he reached, and leaves the reader at the water’s edge, with the first scene waiting to be read again in the light of everything the book would not show.
Act III · The Twelve
The test is subtractive, and no book on this desk is more exposed to it. The case for the length is real: a novel about a culture that will tolerate nothing but pleasure must make its reader work, and its thousand pages and hundred pages of notes are the opposite of the film at its centre. The core is required. The Eschaton must stay, the map mistaken for the territory on four tennis courts; the Marathe and Steeply dialogue must stay, since it states the book’s question about what a person chooses to serve; Gately’s hospital chapters must stay. But much could go without the knowledge changing: several of the residents’ case histories, the long run of Orin’s seductions, the Wardine section, a good part of the tennis drills and the set pieces of the satirical future. A tenth or more of the main text is permitted rather than compelled, and that holds the axis lowest of the twelve.
Score: 8.0 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: a culture organised around pleasure has made addiction its normal condition, and the escape from the self, by drug, screen, sport or irony, is what it sells. The Entertainment is the limit case, a film whose viewers die watching. Against it the book sets the one institution it shows working, Alcoholics Anonymous, whose slogans the clever characters despise and which keep Gately alive. The harder disclosure is that irony, the defensive cool of the clever, is itself a drug, and that a culture of knowing detachment has no way to say what it means. The action carries both: Gately, shot, refuses narcotics in hospital across many pages of pain; Hal, the gifted son, is found unable to make himself understood. Held off the top because much of the meaning is spoken outright, by Marathe and in the recovery rooms, rather than found.
Score: 9.2 / 10
Elevation comes often, through comedy and dread, in a book whose usual register is not elevated. The Eschaton degenerating into violence is the comic sublime, a world war on four tennis courts. Gately’s fight with the Canadians outside Ennet House is a set piece of physical terror. Kate Gompert’s account of clinical depression is dreadful in the old sense. The wraith at Gately’s bedside, speaking words into his head, is the strangest height. Hal in the opening section, saying to himself “I am in here” while the deans hear only noise, is the book’s coldest moment, and the last pages, Gately’s memory of a binge and its punishment, end on a beach where “the tide was way out”. Held below the higher reaches because long stretches are deliberately flat, procedural or comic, and the heights are spaced across a thousand pages.
Score: 8.4 / 10
The built myth is Hamlet. The title is Yorick’s, “a fellow of infinite jest”; the son is Hal; the father has died by his own hand before the action begins; the mother, Avril, keeps close a man of the family, Charles Tavis, who now runs the father’s academy; and the father returns as a ghost, though to Gately, not to his son. These are load-bearing: the family plot runs on them. The second myth is the fatal pleasure, the lotus and the siren, built into the plot as the Entertainment and its veiled actress. The two built myths carry the axis over the bar. What holds it near the bar is that the Hamlet frame is left open: the son never hears the father’s secret from the ghost, no revenge is taken, and the usurper is a comic figure. The satirical future, the Great Concavity and its feral creatures, is myth evoked as atmosphere more than built.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The inheritance is the encyclopedic American novel of Pynchon and Gaddis, DeLillo’s systems and Barth’s metafiction, with Joyce behind them all. Much of the apparatus is inherited: the acronyms, the alternative geopolitics, the paranoid plot around a lethal object, as in Gravity’s Rainbow. The turn is in what the apparatus is used for. Wallace had argued in “E Unibus Pluram” (1993) that postmodern irony had been absorbed by television and could no longer resist anything, and the novel turns the encyclopedic form against irony: its moral centre is a recovery house and a set of slogans, and its sympathy goes to the people the systems novel would have treated as specimens. The endnotes make the reader’s attention part of the form. The stake was real: a thousand-page book from a writer whose first novel had been received as clever and young. Held below the top because the instrument is largely Pynchon’s, and the swerve lies in purpose more than in means.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Change the form and much of the knowledge goes. The endnotes interrupt the reading every few pages and send it to the back of the book and back, so that reading becomes a recursion, the motion of a habit. The chronology is broken and the climax withheld: the book begins in the Year of Glad, with Hal already beyond speech, and ends earlier, leaving the events that connect them, the digging up of the father’s head among them, for the reader to reconstruct. A novel about a pleasure that asks nothing is built so that it cannot be consumed without work. The braiding of the academy on the hill and the recovery house below it makes the parallel between discipline and addiction structural. Held off the top because many episodes inside the frame are containers rather than instruments, and the satirical future could be stripped out with less loss than the form’s defenders claim.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Evidence rather than promise, and thirty years supply it. The book has drawn a literature of its own: Stephen J. Burn’s reader’s guide (2003), Greg Carlisle’s Elegant Complexity (2007), the essays gathered as The Legacy of David Foster Wallace (2012). Readers reread it together in the Infinite Summer of 2009. The questions it plants are still argued: what happened to Hal between November and the Year of Glad; whether the Entertainment, the mould he ate as a child or a drug is the cause; what Gately and Hal did at the father’s grave; whether the book’s sympathy for recovery is its faith or its irony. Held below the top because thirty years is a short test, and part of the scholarship is reconstruction of the plot, which is difficulty before it is depth.
Score: 9.0 / 10
The field is American fiction of the late twentieth century. The force is a reorganisation of what the encyclopedic novel was for: the systems novel, which had held its characters at a satirical distance, was made to carry sincerity, compassion and a moral seriousness the generation before had treated as naive, while keeping all its learning and comedy. What holds it below the top is that the reorganisation finished what Pynchon began rather than starting it, and that much of the reach runs through the manner more than the vision. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the book became the emblematic novel of its generation; it fixed the footnoted, maximal, discursive manner on a generation of American writers and on literary journalism; the turn away from irony that it argued became a common position in American fiction after it; and it stands on Time’s list of 2005 of the hundred best English-language novels since 1923.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Survival is demonstrated over thirty years, and the evidence is positive. The text survives whole, as published, and has been in print throughout. Presence is wide and continuous: public rereadings, a film about its author, The End of the Tour (2015), and a readership that has grown since Wallace’s death in 2008. Its surface is partly fixed to its moment: the cartridges and the videophone belong to the 1990s imagining the future, though the satire of a culture of streamed entertainment reads more pertinently now than then. Charged against it: the book’s standing has been contested in the last decade, both for the readership it gathered and for what became known of its author’s conduct, and its presence is narrower outside the United States. The contest has not removed it from print, from teaching or from readers; it bears on presence, not on form or fabric. Three decades demonstrate less than the centuries behind the summit, and the axis credits survival shown, not survival foreseen.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Judged on Wallace’s English, with no translation between. The command is of register, and the range is the widest of any American novel of its decade. The opening, “I am seated in an office, surrounded by heads and bodies.”, is precise, formal and cold; the Ennet House chapters take on Gately’s speech and the speech of the recovery rooms without condescension; the Marathe and Steeply dialogue is written as a translation, its idioms faintly wrong; the filmography of James Incandenza, an endnote, is a parody of an academic catalogue that becomes the portrait of a man. The long sentence, subordinate on subordinate, carries obsessive attention. Three charges hold it below the top: the tics recur and harden, the stacked qualifications, the coined abbreviations, the conjunctions in series; some sections are logorrhoeic, length without pressure; and the Wardine section, written in an imagined Black Boston dialect, is the book’s least controlled passage and has been justly charged with caricature.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: the Marathe and Steeply dialogue, a political conversation about freedom on a mountainside outside Tucson, and Gately in his hospital bed refusing Demerol. They obey one law: a person is what he chooses to give himself to, and the free choice to serve one’s own pleasure ends in slavery to it. The academy, where boys give themselves to tennis, and the recovery house, where adults give themselves to a programme in place of a drug, are one law seen from two sides; the separatists who want the Entertainment as a weapon understand the American appetite exactly. The range is very wide, from slapstick to theology. Charged: the satirical future, its catapulted waste and outsized infants, runs on a looser physics of comic exaggeration than the naturalism of Ennet House, and the refusal to bring the strands together leaves some of their laws asserted rather than tested in collision.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Many orders, and one question holds them: what a person will serve. Consciousness, in Hal and in the depressives. The family, the Incandenzas, three sons and two parents bound by evasion. Institutions, in the academy and the recovery house, with their disciplines and their sayings. Sport, as labour and as vocation. Work, in Gately’s duties at the house and the residents’ jobs. Class, in the distance between the hill and the house below it. The state and its geopolitics, in the Organization of North American Nations, the separatists and the American agency. The media and the entertainment economy. The natural order, poisoned, in the Great Concavity. The sacred, in the Higher Power to which Gately prays without believing. They are integrated, not listed: every order is a form of service and of addiction. Held below the top because history is thin, the past reaching the book only as family history, and because women are held less fully than men.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.8 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Unconcealment at 9.2, then The Encompassed at 9.1, then The Bottomless Well at 9.0. A disclosure that holds, that a culture organised around pleasure has made addiction its normal condition and irony one of its drugs, carried by Gately’s refusal in hospital and Hal’s silence; many orders, from consciousness and the family to the state and the sacred, held by one question of what a person will serve; and thirty years of return, a literature of guides and essays and a public rereading, that have not settled what happened to Hal.
Limiting Dimension
The Inevitable at 8.0, held by what could go without the knowledge changing: several of the residents’ case histories, the long run of Orin’s seductions, the Wardine section, much of the tennis drill and the set pieces of the satirical future, a tenth or more of the main text. Next above it, The Sublime at 8.4: heights that are many but spaced across a thousand pages of deliberate flatness. Then The Imperishable at 8.5, at the bar: thirty years of wide survival, with a standing contested in the last decade and a presence narrower outside the United States.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.0 against a threshold of 7.5, by five tenths. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.9, The Made at 8.8, The Inner Law at 8.7, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Unconcealment at 9.2, The Swerve at 8.9, Pressure on Tradition at 8.9 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, and The Imperishable meets it exactly at 8.5. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis falls below 8.0, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 9.1. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone, at 8.8.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of David Foster Wallace’s Infinite Jest, published by Little, Brown and Company, Boston, in February 1996. It is scored as one work, the main text and its 388 endnotes together, since the book sends the reader from the one to the other and several notes carry narrative found nowhere else; the first edition runs to 1,079 pages, of which the notes take roughly the last hundred. The book is in copyright and no text of it was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on Wallace’s English, with no translation between. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain: the first sentence, Hal’s four words to himself, the last phrase of the book, and the names of the two sponsored years; the title’s phrase is quoted from Hamlet, 5.1. Stephen J. Burn’s and Greg Carlisle’s guides and The Legacy of David Foster Wallace are cited as the record of the book’s reception and are not part of the work. Facts that could not be verified, among them the word count, the manner of the father’s death, the later editions and their forewords, and the institutions of Wallace scholarship, are not given.