The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Lyric poems in six sections, chiefly alexandrines and sonnets · 19th c. · Paris under the Second Empire, its rooms, streets, taverns and gaming houses, and the voyages of the mind, in the edition of 1861

Les Fleurs du mal

Charles Baudelaire · poems in six sections, with a prefatory poem · “Au lecteur” and 126 numbered poems · the second edition, Poulet-Malassis et de Broise, Paris, 1861 · scored on Baudelaire’s French, read from knowledge; no text in hand, French quoted only where its words are certain, with the desk’s own English beneath, and Richard Howard’s complete translation (1982) for sense

The Plate · the book of 1861 on one line, ticked into its six sections at their true lengths, with a small ring before it for the prefatory poem; over the long first section a wave that rises toward a dotted rule of the ideal and falls back to the line seven times, each crest lower than the last, closing at a small ring for the clock; over the city section a close row of eighteen uprights of uneven height; three dots for wine, a ring for the flowers of evil, one upright for revolt; from the last section the line turns down below the ground and ends in a dot at the foot, for the voyage to the bottom of the unknown, and a fine arc runs back from it to the ring at the start, for the close that answers the opening; and beneath the first section, apart from the line, six dashed crosses for the six poems the court removed

Mode

Lyric poems arranged as one trajectory, from a curse at birth to death as the last voyage; the strict classical line held against the matter of the modern city and the modern vice

Mythos

The poet cursed at birth; the exiled winged creature that cannot walk; the descent through spleen into a city as underworld; Andromache in exile; Cain and Satan in revolt; Death as the old captain of the last voyage

Phase

From the first edition of 1857, its prosecution and the judgment of 20 August 1857, to the rebuilt edition of 1861 with its new section of the city and its new close

Presentation

“Au lecteur”, then six sections in numbered order: “Spleen et Idéal”, “Tableaux parisiens”, “Le Vin”, “Fleurs du mal”, “Révolte” and “La Mort”, dedicated to Théophile Gautier

Register

From the incantation of the love poems and the litany to the plain notation of the streets, the drunk ragpicker and the gaming table; the alexandrine dominant, the sonnet the commonest form, with refrain, chained repetition and shorter measures beside them

Scale

One consciousness in its moods, memory and self-division, its loves, the great city and its poor, the inverted sacred, and death

Governing Proposition

A poet prosecuted for outrage to public morals, with six of his poems struck from his book by a court, rebuilds the book four years later as a single journey: from a birth under a curse, through the alternation of the ideal and of spleen, down into the city, the false paradise of wine, the flowers of evil, revolt and death, to a last voyage into the unknown. The wager of the book is that the modern self lives in complicity with what it condemns, that its master vice is boredom, and that the reader shares it; and that the strictest classical verse can take in what lyric poetry had excluded and draw beauty out of what decays.

My Likeness, My Brother

9.1 / 10
Tier V · Epochal

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Hypocrite Reader

“Hypocrite lecteur, mon semblable, mon frère!”
“Hypocrite reader, my likeness, my brother!” The prefatory poem, “Au lecteur”, stands outside the numbered sequence and before it. It names the master vice, not lust or cruelty but boredom: “C’est l’Ennui!”, “It is Boredom!”. Then it turns on the one holding the book. The reader is not addressed as a judge of the poems that follow but named as their accomplice, the poet’s likeness and brother, as guilty of the vice as the voice that confesses it.

The book first appeared in June 1857: “Au lecteur” and a hundred poems in five sections, with no section of the city. Under the Second Empire it was prosecuted for outrage to public morals; the prosecutor was Ernest Pinard. The judgment of 20 August 1857 struck six poems from it, “Les Bijoux”, “Le Léthé”, “À celle qui est trop gaie”, “Lesbos”, “Femmes damnées: À la pâle clarté des lampes languissantes” and “Les Métamorphoses du vampire”, and fined the author three hundred francs. The six were reprinted in Les Épaves at Brussels in 1866, and in 1949 the Cour de cassation annulled the judgment.

The work scored here is the second edition, published by Poulet-Malassis et de Broise in Paris in 1861: “Au lecteur” and 126 numbered poems in six sections. Baudelaire did more than cut. He added new poems, built a new section, “Tableaux parisiens”, of the city, and closed the book with “Le Voyage”, and in a letter of 1861 he claimed that the book was not a mere album but had a beginning and an end. The six condemned poems are absent from it by order of the court and weigh only as context, on the cost of the departure and on the survival of the work. The poems added after his death in the edition of Asselineau and Banville (1868) are not part of it.

Movement II

His Giant’s Wings

“Spleen et Idéal” is two thirds of the book, eighty-five poems from “Bénédiction” to “L’Horloge”. It opens with the poet’s birth under a curse: in “Bénédiction” his own mother curses him. In “L’Albatros” the exiled great-winged creature, unable to walk on the deck, is the poet: “Ses ailes de géant l’empêchent de marcher”
“His giant’s wings prevent him from walking.”

Then the poems of art and of the ideal. “Correspondances” makes the world a field of signs: “La Nature est un temple où de vivants piliers / Laissent parfois sortir de confuses paroles”
“Nature is a temple where living pillars / sometimes let out confused words.” Beside it stand “Les Phares” and “La Beauté”. After them come the cycles of the loves, read against one another as the critical tradition groups them: the dark Venus, the white, the green-eyed woman. “Le Balcon” remembers a love in its warmth, “Mère des souvenirs, maîtresse des maîtresses”
“Mother of memories, mistress of mistresses”; “L’Invitation au voyage” calls in its varied measure and refrain, “Mon enfant, ma sœur, / Songe à la douceur”
“My child, my sister, / think of the sweetness”, where “tout n’est qu’ordre et beauté, / Luxe, calme et volupté”
“all is order and beauty, / luxury, calm and pleasure.”

The ideal and the abyss stand side by side. In “Une Charogne” the poem sets a rotting carcass before the beloved and turns to her: “Et pourtant vous serez semblable à cette ordure”
“And yet you will be like this filth.” The horror and the tenderness are one movement. In “Harmonie du soir” lines return in a chain of repetitions, like a pantoum, and the poem circles like the waltz and the incense it names: “Valse mélancolique et langoureux vertige!”
“Melancholy waltz and languid vertigo!”

Movement III

Like a Lid

As the section goes on, spleen gains on the ideal. The four poems called “Spleen” stand together near its end (LXXV to LXXVIII). Memory itself is a weight: “J’ai plus de souvenirs que si j’avais mille ans”
“I have more memories than if I were a thousand years old.” In the fourth “Spleen” the low and heavy sky weighs on the mind “comme un couvercle”, “like a lid”, and Hope weeps while Anguish plants its black flag in the bowed skull.

Spleen is not given as a weather of the soul. The book gives it causes, objects and a moral structure, and in “L’Héautontimorouménos”, the self-tormentor, it shows the self that keeps its own wound open and takes pleasure in it: “Je suis la plaie et le couteau!”
“I am the wound and the knife!” The boredom named in “Au lecteur” is here a moral state, with the self as both its victim and its agent.

“L’Horloge” closes the section on time. The clock is the last voice of “Spleen et Idéal”. Not every poem of the section bears this weight. Some, “Le Mauvais Moine”, “La Muse vénale”, “Bohémiens en voyage”, “Châtiment de l’orgueil”, “Le Flambeau vivant”, could go without the book noticing, and the architecture is loose in the middle of the section; but the line from the cursed birth through the loves to the lid of the sky and the clock is the first stage of the journey, and it holds.

Movement IV

The Shape of a City

“Tableaux parisiens” was new in 1861: eighteen poems from “Paysage” to “Le Crépuscule du matin”, the section that gives the spleen a world. In “Le Cygne” a swan escaped from a menagerie drags its wings through the dust of the Carrousel, in a Paris being rebuilt, and the poem turns to another exile: “Andromaque, je pense à vous!”
“Andromache, I think of you!” The particular becomes the figure, and the figure is the argument. The poet sees the city change around him: “la forme d’une ville / Change plus vite, hélas! que le cœur d’un mortel”
“the shape of a city / changes faster, alas, than a mortal’s heart.”

The city is an underworld and a crowd. In “Les Sept Vieillards” seven identical old men file past as if out of hell. “Les Petites Vieilles” gives the old women of the streets with compassion. In “À une passante” a woman passes in the street and is gone: “Ô toi que j’eusse aimée, ô toi qui le savais!”
“O you whom I would have loved, O you who knew it!” It is the encounter that only a great city can make, with the stranger who will not be seen again.

“Le Crépuscule du soir” watches the evening come down on the city’s thieves and workers alike. “Le Jeu” sits among the gamblers, and “Danse macabre” and “Rêve parisien” follow. The section is the book’s answer to the charge that spleen is a private mood: here it has streets, labour, poverty and history, and the lyric stands at the centre of the modern city, not at its margin.

Movement V

Old Captain

Then the descent continues by stages. “Le Vin”, five poems, is the false paradise and the weakest section: “L’Âme du vin” and “Le Vin des chiffonniers”, with its drunk ragpicker, are good; “Le Vin du solitaire” and “Le Vin des amants” are slight, and their genial drinking sits loosely under the law of the rest. “Fleurs du mal”, nine poems, gives the book its title in the flowers of evil proper. “Révolte”, three poems, takes the side of Cain and of Satan, and in “Les Litanies de Satan” prays to him: “Ô Satan, prends pitié de ma longue misère!”
“O Satan, take pity on my long misery!” Here the book states more than it discloses.

“La Mort” is six poems, from “La Mort des amants” to “Le Voyage”, the longest poem in the book, written for its close. Its knowledge is the knowledge of the whole book: “Amer savoir, celui qu’on tire du voyage!”
“Bitter knowledge, that which one draws from travel!” And what the world shows the traveller is this: “Une oasis d’horreur dans un désert d’ennui!”
“An oasis of horror in a desert of boredom!”

Then the last voyage. “Ô Mort, vieux capitaine, il est temps! levons l’ancre!”
“O Death, old captain, it is time: let us weigh anchor!” The close goes “Au fond de l’Inconnu pour trouver du nouveau!”
“To the bottom of the Unknown to find the new!” The boredom named in “Au lecteur” is answered at the end by the only cure the book allows. The journey that began with a curse at birth ends in a voyage past the edge of the known, and the reader called a brother on the first page has made it too.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The subtractive test on a body of 126 poems has two parts: does the sequence require its sections, and does each section require its poems. The sections pass. Take away “Tableaux parisiens” and the book loses the city, where its spleen is given a world; take away “La Mort” and “Bénédiction” has no answer. The poems do not all pass. “Le Vin” is the weakest section: “L’Âme du vin” and “Le Vin des chiffonniers” are good, “Le Vin du solitaire” and “Le Vin des amants” slight. Poems such as “Le Mauvais Moine”, “La Muse vénale”, “Bohémiens en voyage”, “Châtiment de l’orgueil” and “Le Flambeau vivant” could go without the book noticing: perhaps an eighth to a sixth of the whole. The design is required; not every poem in it is.

Score: 8.4 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure can be stated and it holds: the modern self lives in complicity with what it condemns, its master vice is not lust or cruelty but boredom, and the reader shares it. “Au lecteur” names the vice, “C’est l’Ennui!”, “It is Boredom!”, and ends on the charge “Hypocrite lecteur, mon semblable, mon frère!”
“Hypocrite reader, my likeness, my brother!”. Beside it the book discloses a second condition: that the great city makes a new kind of experience, the stranger passed once and not seen again, and the grief of a world that changes faster than a heart can follow. Spleen could be read as a mood; the book refuses that reading by giving it causes, objects and a moral structure. Held off the top by the self-dramatising strain in the Satanism of “Révolte”, which states more than it discloses.

Score: 9.3 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height and frequency both. The elevations come warm: “Le Balcon”, “Mère des souvenirs, maîtresse des maîtresses”, “Mother of memories, mistress of mistresses”; “L’Invitation au voyage”, with its refrain of order and beauty, luxury, calm and pleasure. They come dreadful: the fourth “Spleen”, where the low and heavy sky weighs “comme un couvercle”, “like a lid”, and Hope weeps while Anguish plants its black flag in the bowed skull. “Une Charogne” reaches terror and tenderness at once in the turn to the beloved, “Et pourtant vous serez semblable à cette ordure”, “And yet you will be like this filth”. “Les Phares”, “Harmonie du soir”, “Les Sept Vieillards”, “Le Cygne” and the close of “Le Voyage” rise in turn. Few lyric bodies in any language rise this often. Held from the very top by the flatter stretches of “Spleen et Idéal” and by “Le Vin”.

Score: 9.4 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth built, not only evoked. The order of 1861 makes the book a descent and a voyage: the poet cursed at birth by his mother in “Bénédiction”; the exiled creature of “L’Albatros”, “Ses ailes de géant l’empêchent de marcher”, “His giant’s wings prevent him from walking”; the fall through spleen; the city as an underworld, where seven identical old men file past as if out of hell; the false paradise; revolt with Cain and Satan; and death as the captain of the last voyage. In “Le Cygne” a swan escaped from a menagerie, dragging its wings in the dust of the Carrousel, becomes Andromache in exile, and the figure carries weight: exile is the poem’s argument. Held a step down because the Satanic poems summon myth more than they build it, and the beloveds are emblems as often as persons.

Score: 9.1 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance was the Romantic lyric of Lamartine, Hugo, Musset and Vigny, and the formal impeccability of Gautier, to whom the book is dedicated. Baudelaire kept the alexandrine and the sonnet and filled them with what the lyric had excluded: carrion, the prostitute, the gambling den, the drunk ragpicker, lesbian love, a litany to Satan, and the bored self that enjoys its own wound, “Je suis la plaie et le couteau!”
“I am the wound and the knife!” (“L’Héautontimorouménos”). The swerve is the pairing: classical form held against the modern city and the modern vice. The stake was paid in full: prosecution, conviction, six poems struck, a fine, and the name of a pornographer that followed him to his death. Held off the top because the form itself is conservative; the formal departure came in the prose poems, which are not part of this book.

Score: 9.3 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Change the form and the work stops knowing something. The strict line is the instrument: the order of the alexandrine and the closure of the sonnet press against disorder, decay and boredom, and the tension between them is what the poems know. “Harmonie du soir”, whose repeated lines circle back like the waltz and the incense it names, “Valse mélancolique et langoureux vertige!”, “Melancholy waltz and languid vertigo!”, knows its theme only through that recurrence. The second level is the architecture of 1861, which turns a body of lyrics into a trajectory: the arrangement carries an argument, the descent and the voyage, that the poems taken singly do not. Held below the top because the architecture is loose in the middle of “Spleen et Idéal”, and because many poems would lose little in another regular form.

Score: 9.1 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence, not promise. Over a century and a half the book has sustained readings that do not exhaust one another: Valéry’s “Situation de Baudelaire” (1924), Proust’s essay, Eliot’s essay (1930), Benjamin’s work on Baudelaire and the city of the Second Empire, Sartre’s Baudelaire (1947), Auerbach on the book’s aesthetic dignity, Bonnefoy, and the scholarly edition of Claude Pichois. Each found a different book: the poet of correspondences, the poet of the crowd and the commodity, the moralist of sin, the man of bad faith, the classical craftsman. The poems hold on return at the level of the line as well: “Correspondances”, “La Nature est un temple où de vivants piliers / Laissent parfois sortir de confuses paroles”, “Nature is a temple where living pillars sometimes let out confused words”, is still argued over both as theory and as poem.

Score: 9.4 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is the French lyric of the nineteenth century and, by its reach, the poetry of Europe after it. The force is a reorganisation of what lyric poetry could take as its matter and its stance: the city, the crowd, boredom and the complicit reader enter the lyric as its centre, not its margin, and the modern idea of a beauty drawn from the ugly and the transient takes its first full form here. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: in French, Verlaine, Rimbaud, Mallarmé and the whole Symbolist and Decadent line; beyond French, Swinburne, Stefan George, who translated the book, the Russian Symbolists, Rilke, and Eliot, who set “Hypocrite lecteur! mon semblable, mon frère!” into The Waste Land. Modern poetry in Europe is commonly dated from this book, and few books of any century moved their field further.

Score: 9.5 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Weighed on form, then presence, then fabric. Form: the text of 1861 survives whole and settled, with no fragment, no recovered text and no crux of consequence. The court removed six poems from the book of 1857, but the edition of 1861 never held them, and the six themselves survived in Les Épaves (Brussels, 1866) and in every complete edition since; the charge on form is nil. Presence: continuous since publication, taught in French schools and universities, in the Pléiade, translated into every major language and repeatedly into English, quoted in common speech. That is the widest presence a span of a hundred and sixty-five years can show, and it earns the tenth above the usual figure, and no more: the book does not stand level with texts that have lasted millennia.

Score: 9.2 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on the French. The command of the line is at its highest in the great poems: the weight of the alexandrine and the placing of its caesura, rhyme used as argument, the sonnet’s turn, the long syntax that runs through the quatrains of “Le Cygne”, the varied measure and refrain of “L’Invitation au voyage”, “Mon enfant, ma sœur, / Songe à la douceur”
“My child, my sister, / think of the sweetness”. The making carries weight: the impeccability is what lets the matter shock rather than merely offend. The command is not even across 126 poems. Some lean on capitalised abstractions, stock apostrophe and the exclamation mark, and some rhymes are forced. The finest gradations of the French metre are not judged here past what can be heard with certainty, and nothing is charged for that.

Score: 9.2 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Take the two most distant poles: the order, luxury and calm of “L’Invitation au voyage” and the rotting carcass of “Une Charogne”; or the compassion of “Les Petites Vieilles” and the revolt of “Les Litanies de Satan”, “Ô Satan, prends pitié de ma longue misère!”, “O Satan, take pity on my long misery!”. They obey one law: the double pull toward the ideal and toward the abyss, in a soul for whom boredom is the ground state and beauty is wrung from what decays. “Le Voyage” restates the law at the end, “Une oasis d’horreur dans un désert d’ennui!”, “An oasis of horror in a desert of boredom!”, and its last line answers “Au lecteur”. The range is wide and the law holds. Held a little lower by “Le Vin”, whose genial or sentimental drinking sits loosely under it.

Score: 9.1 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

For a lyric body, much is held and integrated. Consciousness above all, in its moods, its memory, “J’ai plus de souvenirs que si j’avais mille ans”, “I have more memories than if I were a thousand years old”, and its self-division; eros in several kinds; the city and its labour, its poor, its old women, its gamblers, its evening of thieves and workers in “Le Crépuscule du soir”; history, in the rebuilding of Paris and the exile of “Le Cygne”; the sacred, inverted but present from “Bénédiction” to “Le Reniement de saint Pierre”; nature as a temple of signs; death. What holds the axis here, the lowest of the twelve: the family is thin, the cursing mother and the servant of “La servante au grand cœur”; the state barely appears; and the natural order is present more as symbol than as world.

Score: 8.3 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

9.1 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier V · Epochal

Strongest Dimensions

Pressure on Tradition at 9.5. A reorganisation of what lyric poetry could take as its matter and its stance, the city, the crowd, boredom and the complicit reader brought to the centre of the lyric and beauty drawn from the ugly and the transient, carried through Verlaine, Rimbaud, Mallarmé and the Symbolist and Decadent line and beyond French to Swinburne, Stefan George, the Russian Symbolists, Rilke and Eliot. Next to it, The Sublime and The Bottomless Well at 9.4.

Limiting Dimension

The Encompassed at 8.3, held by a lyric body’s reach: the family is thin, the state barely appears and the natural order is present more as symbol than as world, although consciousness, eros, the city and its labour, history, the sacred and death are held. Next above it, The Inevitable at 8.4: the six sections are required, but within them perhaps an eighth to a sixth of the poems, many of “Le Vin” and a number in the middle of “Spleen et Idéal”, could go without loss.

The Necessity Cap clears at 8.4 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Made at 9.2, The Living Form at 9.1, The Inner Law at 9.1, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: Pressure on Tradition at 9.5, The Unconcealment at 9.3, The Swerve at 9.3, The Imperishable at 9.2 and The Archetypal Deep at 9.1 clear the bar of 8.5. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis it covers falls below The Inevitable at 8.4, against 7.5), and The Encompassed clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.3. Every summit condition is met.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Charles Baudelaire’s Les Fleurs du mal in the second edition, published by Poulet-Malassis et de Broise, Paris, 1861: “Au lecteur”, unnumbered, and 126 numbered poems in six sections, “Spleen et Idéal” (I to LXXXV, eighty-five poems), “Tableaux parisiens” (LXXXVI to CIII, eighteen), “Le Vin” (CIV to CVIII, five), “Fleurs du mal” (CIX to CXVII, nine), “Révolte” (CXVIII to CXX, three) and “La Mort” (CXXI to CXXVI, six). It is scored as one body, as it is read. The first edition of 1857 is the book’s first state. The six poems struck by the judgment of 20 August 1857 are absent from the edition of 1861 and are weighed only as context, on The Swerve (the cost) and The Imperishable (their survival in Les Épaves, 1866); the poems added in the posthumous edition of Asselineau and Banville (1868), among them “Recueillement”, “Le Gouffre” and “Les Plaintes d’un Icare”, are not part of the work and are not credited. The prose poems are not part of it. No text was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on Baudelaire’s French. French is quoted only where its words are certain, with the desk’s own close English beneath, and cited by poem; everything else is paraphrased. The poems weighed most, “Au lecteur”, “Bénédiction”, “L’Albatros”, “Correspondances”, “Les Phares”, “La Beauté”, “Le Balcon”, “Une Charogne”, “Harmonie du soir”, “L’Invitation au voyage”, “L’Héautontimorouménos”, the four “Spleen” poems, “L’Horloge”, “Le Cygne”, “Les Sept Vieillards”, “Les Petites Vieilles”, “À une passante”, “Le Crépuscule du soir”, “Le Jeu”, “Danse macabre”, “Rêve parisien”, “Les Litanies de Satan” and “Le Voyage”, are read closely; some slighter poems of “Spleen et Idéal” and of “Le Vin” less closely. Translation · Richard Howard’s complete version (1982), which keeps the order of 1861, was used for sense, because it is close and whole. It is not quoted, and nothing in it is charged or credited to the book. Facts that could not be verified, among them the order of the sections in 1857, the number of new poems in 1861, any reduction of the fine, the addressee of the letter of 1861, the share of sonnets among the poems, the length of “Le Voyage” in lines and sections, and particular words of particular poets about Baudelaire, are not given.