The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Television · produced by Andy Johns and Tom Verlaine · Elektra · about 46 minutes
Mode
Guitar rock in composed counterpoint: two electric guitars as equals over bass and drums, the blues vocabulary left out
Mythos
The night city as a field of signs: a moon over a marquee, a statue, a graveyard, a detective, a rent veil, and a journey toward a revelation that does not quite arrive
Phase
Eight songs on two sides of four; the first rises from nervous drive to the title track’s ten minutes, the second runs from Elevation to the slow dread of Torn Curtain
Presentation
Album of eight songs, about forty-five to forty-six minutes, the title track faded early as first issued
Register
Two electric guitars in clean or lightly overdriven tones, plain bass, loose drums, piano or organ on one or two songs, a thin and strained lead voice, a dry room
Scale
One consciousness in one city at night
Governing Proposition
A New York band answers a scene that had made the short song its creed with long songs built on two guitars in composed counterpoint, clean, angular and free of the blues, and makes eight songs that hold the city at night as a field of signs, an expectancy half ecstasy and half dread. The record climbs higher and more often than it speaks, discloses a state and a way of playing together more than a meaning, and keeps one law across a narrow palette without a break.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The record opens at speed. See No Evil, under four minutes, is nervous and rising, and its riff is not a riff in the usual sense: it is two guitar parts built to interlock, each incomplete without the other, so that the figure exists only where they meet. Neither guitar leads for long. The voice comes in over them, thin and urgent. So the first song states the record’s method before any other has begun: two players making one line between them, at speed, in a city that is already waiting for something.
Elektra released the album on 8 February 1977: eight songs on two sides, about forty-five to forty-six minutes, recorded in New York in 1976 and produced by Andy Johns and Tom Verlaine. The band was Tom Verlaine on vocals, guitar and keyboards, Richard Lloyd on guitar and vocals, Fred Smith on bass and vocals, and Billy Ficca on drums. The title track faded early on the first pressing; later reissues give it at full length, about ten minutes forty. The album as first issued is the object judged here, and the full-length title track, the bonus tracks and the earlier single Little Johnny Jewel are evidence, not the work.
The architecture is plain to measure. The two sides are near equal, each a little over twenty-two minutes. Five of the eight songs run over five minutes, and the title track, near ten minutes as first issued, takes about a fifth of the whole. The palette does not change: two electric guitars, bass, drums and voice, with piano or organ on one or two songs. The guitars play mostly clean or lightly overdriven tones, and most songs carry composed lead lines and at least one extended solo. A record built on one ensemble and one method takes the risk of any such record: that the method will hold because the field is small.
Movement II
Venus begins as See No Evil does, with two guitars that make one part between them, and then it lifts in its chorus. Its figure is the goddess met as the armless statue, “Venus de Milo”: an old image of love, broken and admired, met in the middle of a night in the city. The song does not tell her story. It glimpses her and moves on, and that is how the record handles every old figure it summons.
The figures are many. The moon over a marquee is the night city’s own light. A car leaves a graveyard in the title song, death and return seen as a scene. Torn Curtain is the title of a film and carries the rent veil of the temple; Prove It brings in the detective, the investigator of the city at night. Beneath them runs a pattern, the night journey toward a revelation that never quite arrives. But no person carries it from song to song, and the particular is withheld as much as the archetype. The record works by allusion and atmosphere, and works well by them.
The inheritance is close at hand: the Velvet Underground and the garage rock of the 1960s, the New York club scene of 1974 to 1976 at CBGB, and behind them the long improvisations of the West Coast bands and the modal jazz Verlaine admired. The scene around the band had made the short song and the refusal of the solo its creed. The record answers it with long songs built on composed and improvised guitar lines, clean and angular, with none of the blues vocabulary every rock guitar solo had used, so that it sounds like neither punk nor the jam bands. The stake was the band’s place in its own scene and its commercial life, and the record sold modestly. The Velvet Underground’s interplay and the San Francisco bands had opened the path; none had taken it this way, inside a scene whose creed refused it.
Movement III
The title track closes the first side and is its summit. Verse and chorus come first; then the guitars climb through a long solo, stage by stage, while the drums gather beneath them, and the climb breaks into a cascade of bright figures that holds and then falls back to the verse. The verse returns as it was. It is a transport as complete as any in its kind, and it is built, not stumbled on: each stage gives the next its ground, and none could go without the climax losing its height.
The form is the song’s meaning. It knows what it is to wait, to break and to return, and it makes the listener know it by passing through it. That is what the record discloses most fully: not a statement about the city but the shape of anticipation, how expectancy gathers, spends itself and comes back to where it began. The record’s words come as images, oblique and exact, “the darkness doubled”, “lightning struck itself”, and they suggest more than they state. A meaning is touched and left; the state is given whole.
The making carries the climb. Verlaine and Lloyd play parts that are exact and composed to interlock, and solos that are built rather than run: Lloyd’s compact and melodic, Verlaine’s long and climbing, the title track’s placed stage by stage. Ficca drums with a jazz looseness that pushes the climbs; Smith’s bass holds the ground plainly. Andy Johns’s production keeps each guitar separate and clear across the stereo field, which the interplay requires. The guitar playing is of the highest order, and the whole record stands on it.
Movement IV
The second side opens on a title that names what the record reaches for. Elevation lifts in its chorus, and the lift is wanted and feared at once: the reach toward a height is also the edge of a fall. The sacred is glimpsed here, and again in the rent veil at the close, glimpsed more than held. The record’s heights come often, on six or seven of its eight songs, and they are of two kinds, the bright climb of the title track and the slow dread of the close; between them See No Evil and Friction have a nervous, rising drive, and Guiding Light reaches a fragile, tender height.
Guiding Light, the tenderest song, slows the side, and Prove It, a detective song set to a lighter figure, keeps it level. Both keep the interlocking guitars and the night, and both hold the record’s manner rather than extend it: Guiding Light softens the second side without turning it, and Prove It uses a familiar verse and chorus as a container for the guitars rather than as a form that knows. They are the places where the record could lose a song with least lost, and a hostile listener would name one of them.
The costs fall throughout. Verlaine’s voice is thin and strained, and it carries every song: it strains where the guitars soar, and it keeps the heights from the very top. The sound is dry and light in the low end, which serves the guitars and starves the whole, and the bass and some of the arrangements are plain. The palette never changes, and so the heights, however often they come, come in one colour. These are faults in a share of the making, set against a command of the highest order in its central element.
Movement V
The record ends slow and heavy. Torn Curtain, about seven minutes, is its dread given room, a dark height reached by weight rather than by climbing, and its title carries both a film and the rent veil of the temple. It is the compelled end. See No Evil opened the record with under four minutes of nervous drive; Torn Curtain closes it at the opposite speed and temperature, and the two are the same interplay, one reaching up, one weighed down. Nothing between them breaks that law. It is tested over a modest field, one instrumentation, one voice, a register largely nocturnal, and it is kept without a break.
The field the record entered was the rock album of the later 1970s, punk and what followed it. It showed that rock guitar could leave the blues behind without leaving rock, and that two guitars could play as equals in composed counterpoint rather than as lead and rhythm. Its reach was slow and lay among musicians: it is commonly credited with shaping the guitar playing of post-punk and of the alternative and indie rock that followed, and later bands from the 1980s to the 2000s name it among their models. The public reach was small, and much of what travelled was a general idea of clean, interlocking guitars rather than the record’s own method. Guitarists still transcribe and study its parts.
Forty-nine years on, the album survives as issued and in print, with the full-length title track beside it. Its fabric carries little date, clean guitars in a dry room, though some hear the thin sound as of its year. Its presence is continuous and narrow: it was little played on radio in its time, no song from it has entered common circulation, and it lives among musicians, critics and devoted listeners. What it holds is one consciousness in one city at night: expectancy, nerves and dread; the city as light and signs; love glimpsed in Venus and Guiding Light, death in the graveyard and the close, the sacred in Elevation and the rent veil. Labour, the family, the state, history and the natural order beyond the night sky are absent. The narrowness is chosen, and the record holds what it chose.
Act III · The Twelve
Eight songs in about forty-six minutes, and the subtractive test finds little slack. Inside the songs almost nothing is idle: each guitar line is required by the other, and the riffs of See No Evil and Friction are built as interlocking parts that collapse if one is taken away. The title track’s length is compelled rather than permitted: its long instrumental passage climbs by stages to a climax and a return to the verse, and no stage could go without the climax losing its ground. See No Evil must open, the method stated at speed, and Torn Curtain is the compelled end, the record’s dread given room. The test bites lightly twice, and that holds the figure off the top: Guiding Light, a ballad, softens the second side without turning it, and Prove It restates the record’s manner more than it extends it.
Score: 8.6 / 10
What the record brings into the open is first a state: the city at night as a field of signs to be read, an expectancy half ecstasy and half dread, and a reach for elevation wanted and feared at once. Disclosure through sound is credited in full, and here the sound discloses more than a mood. Two guitars as equals in conversation, neither leading for long, show a way of making music together that is itself a social form, and the long climb of the title track discloses what anticipation is: how waiting builds, breaks and returns. The words come as images, oblique and exact (“the darkness doubled”, “lightning struck itself”), and suggest a meaning more than state one. Held below the bar because the condition uncovered lies nearer a mood than a meaning that can be stated and held, and the words reach a meaning only glancingly.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Elevation is the record’s strongest quality, and it comes often. The title track is the summit: after the verses the guitars climb through a long solo, the drums gather, and the climb breaks into a cascade of bright figures that holds and then falls back to the verse, a transport as complete as any in its kind. Torn Curtain reaches a dark height, slow and heavy, dread made grand. Elevation and Venus lift in their choruses; See No Evil and Friction have a nervous, rising drive; Guiding Light reaches a fragile, tender height. Prove It stays nearer level. The heights are of two kinds, the bright climb and the slow dread, and they come on six or seven of eight songs. What holds the figure below the top is the voice, which strains where the guitars soar, and the sameness of the instrumentation, which gives the heights one colour.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Myth is evoked often and built hardly at all, and the evocation is consistent. The titles and images summon old figures: Venus met as the armless statue (“Venus de Milo”); the moon over a marquee, the night city’s own light; a car leaving a graveyard in the title song, death and return glimpsed as a scene; Torn Curtain, the title of a film that also carries the rent veil of the temple; the detective of Prove It, the investigator of the city at night. Beneath them runs one pattern, the night journey toward a revelation that never quite arrives, and the title track enacts it in sound, climbing, breaking and coming back. Held well below the bar because the figures are glimpsed, not carried: no person bears the pattern, nothing would fall if it were taken away, and the particular is withheld as much as the archetype.
Score: 7.8 / 10
The inheritance is the Velvet Underground and the garage rock of the 1960s, the New York club scene of 1974 to 1976 at CBGB, and behind them the long improvisations of the West Coast bands and the modal jazz Tom Verlaine admired. The turn is large. In a scene that had made the short song and the refusal of the solo its creed, the band built long songs around composed and improvised guitar lines, and did it without the blues vocabulary every rock guitar solo had used: clean, angular, interlocking lines that sound like neither punk nor the jam bands. The stake was real, the band’s place in its own scene and its commercial life, and the record sold modestly. Held from the top by precedent: the Velvet Underground’s guitar interplay and the San Francisco bands had opened the path, and the jazz model was proven.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Change the form and the record loses what it knows, because its knowledge is the interplay. Each guitar part is incomplete without the other, and the song exists only in their meeting: Venus and See No Evil are built from parts that answer each other, not from a lead over a rhythm. The title track’s form is its meaning: verse and chorus, then a long passage that climbs through stages to a climax, and then the verse again, so that the song knows what it is to wait, to break and to return. The sequence is counted here, once: the first side rises from the nervous songs to the title track’s ten minutes, and the second runs from Elevation to the slow dread of Torn Curtain. Held from the top because Prove It and Guiding Light use a familiar verse and chorus as a container for the guitars rather than as a form that knows.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Evidence over forty-nine years, and most of it formal. The record is still transcribed and studied by guitarists for its parts, and its interplay separates further on each hearing: which guitar plays which line, where the two cross, how the drums push the climb. The title track, faded early on the first issue and later given at full length, has let listeners hear the climb’s end as played. The words, oblique and imagistic, invite return and give some. Held from the top because the depth is of sound more than of sense: the formal depth is demonstrated and the semantic depth only suggested, part of what is found in the words is projection invited by obscurity, and the record has had fewer decades of argument than the most discussed records of its time, its return concentrated among musicians and critics.
Score: 8.5 / 10
The field is the rock album of the later 1970s, punk and the music that followed it. The intrinsic force is a reorganisation of the instrument’s grammar: the record showed that rock guitar could leave the blues behind without leaving rock, and that two guitars could play as equals in composed counterpoint rather than as lead and rhythm. The reach was slow and lay among musicians, the public reach was small, and much of the influence travels as a general idea of clean, interlocking guitars rather than as the record’s own method; delayed reach is credited at a discount, and that keeps the figure near the bar. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the record is commonly credited with shaping the guitar playing of post-punk and of the alternative and indie rock that followed, and later bands from the 1980s to the 2000s name it among their models.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Survival is weighed over forty-nine years. The form is whole: the album survives as issued and in print, with the full-length title track available beside it. Presence is continuous but charged: the record is heard whole and placed high whenever its decade is counted, but it was little played on radio in its time and is little known beyond musicians, critics and devoted listeners, and no song from it has entered common circulation. The fabric carries little date: clean guitars and a dry room, with nothing tied to a studio fashion, though the thin, dry sound is heard by some as of its year. The span and the fabric would carry the figure higher; the narrow presence is charged against them, and the figure stands where that charge sets it.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Command of the recorded medium, with the words weighed elsewhere, and the making is load-bearing in the guitars. Verlaine and Richard Lloyd play parts that are exact and composed to interlock, and solos that are built rather than run: Lloyd’s compact and melodic, Verlaine’s long and climbing, the title track’s climb placed stage by stage. Billy Ficca drums with a jazz looseness that pushes the climbs; Fred Smith’s bass holds the ground plainly. Andy Johns’s production keeps each guitar separate and clear across the stereo field, which the interplay requires. The faults are real and fall on a share of the record: Verlaine’s voice is thin and strained, and it carries every song; the sound is dry and light in the low end, which serves the guitars and starves the whole; the bass and some arrangements are plain. A command of the highest order in one element, strong elsewhere, weak in the voice.
Score: 8.6 / 10
One law governs the record: two guitars in conversation over a steady ground, reaching toward an elevation that is wanted and feared, in a city at night. The two most distant elements obey it. See No Evil, under four minutes of nervous drive, and Torn Curtain, seven minutes of slow, heavy dread, are the same interplay at opposite speeds and temperatures, one reaching up and one weighed down. Guiding Light, the tenderest song, keeps the interlocking parts and the night, and Prove It’s detective and Venus’s statue are images from the same city. Nothing breaks the law. Held from the top by range: the instrumentation is one throughout, the voice one, the register largely nocturnal, and narrowness is not coherence. The law, never broken, is tested over a modest field.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Judged on what the record holds, with no discount for the album form. Consciousness is held, as expectancy, nerves and dread. The city is held as night, light and signs. Love is glimpsed in Venus and Guiding Light; death in the graveyard of the title song and in Torn Curtain; the sacred in Elevation and the rent veil, glimpsed more than held. The detective of Prove It brings the city’s crime and law into view as a figure, and the band’s interplay holds one social form, two players as equals. What holds the figure lowest on the page is how few orders there are and how lightly most are held: labour, the family, the state, history and the natural order beyond the night sky are absent, and one consciousness in one city at night joins the rest. The figure describes the record’s chosen narrowness.
Score: 6.8 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.4 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Sublime, The Swerve, The Living Form and The Inner Law at 8.7, then Pressure on Tradition, The Made and The Inevitable at 8.6. A title track whose climb, cascade and return make a transport as complete as any in its kind; two guitars in composed counterpoint, clean and free of the blues, set against a scene whose creed refused the solo; a form whose knowledge is the interplay; one law kept from the quickest song to the slowest; and a reorganisation of rock guitar’s grammar that later guitar music took up.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 6.8: one consciousness in one city at night, love, death and the sacred glimpsed more than held, and labour, the family, the state, history and the natural order absent. Below the rest, The Archetypal Deep at 7.8 and The Unconcealment at 8.0: old figures evoked and glimpsed, none carried, and a state and a way of playing together disclosed more than a meaning.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.6 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.7, The Made at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.7, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on two axes: The Swerve at 8.7 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5 and The Imperishable meets it exactly at 8.5, but The Unconcealment at 8.0 falls five tenths short and The Archetypal Deep at 7.8 seven tenths short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis it counts falls below 7.8, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 6.8. Four of the five summit conditions are met; the summit is withheld on the Epochal Gate, and the aggregate, at 8.4, stands below it as well.
Basis · the LP as released by Elektra on 8 February 1977, eight songs in their original order on two sides of four, about forty-five to forty-six minutes; recorded in New York in 1976 and produced by Andy Johns and Tom Verlaine; judged from knowledge of the recording, its words in fragments, and its reception. No recording or lyric sheet was in hand, and running times are approximate. The album is the unit, with the title track as first issued, faded early: the full-length version given on later reissues, the bonus tracks and the earlier single Little Johnny Jewel are evidence, not the object. Songs are cited by title, and words are quoted only where certain and never beyond four. Facts that could not be verified, among them the studio and month of recording, the year of the first full-length reissue, the photographer of the sleeve, the make of the car in the title song, the songs that carry piano or organ, and the record’s chart positions and its sales by country, are not given.