The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Arthur Conan Doyle · twelve stories · first printed in The Strand Magazine, July 1891 to June 1892, and published as a book by George Newnes, London, October 1892 · scored as one book of stories on Doyle’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and English quoted only where its words are certain
Mode
Detective story told as a companion’s record; puzzle, comedy, sensation tale and tale of dread in one first-person register
Mythos
The reasoner as knight-errant of the modern city, who restores the hidden order; the companion who narrates what he cannot do; the ogre’s house and the girl to be saved; Bluebeard’s locked wing; the one adversary of equal wit
Phase
One case to a story, from the client’s arrival in Baker Street to the explanation after the fact, in London and the country of the 1880s and 1890s
Presentation
Fiction; twelve stories of roughly even length, each complete in one monthly number, all narrated in the first person by Watson, the client’s statement set at the centre of most
Register
Clear, quick and even, from the comedy of the Red-Headed League and the noble bachelor to the dread of the vigil at Stoke Moran and the closing press
Scale
A city and its country seen one household at a time, from a king and a peer to a typist, a governess and a beggar
Governing Proposition
Twelve stories, one to a monthly number of a magazine, in each of which a client crosses the threshold of rooms in Baker Street with a problem, a reasoner reads the client and the problem together, and a companion who sees but does not observe writes it down. The wager of the book is that the world is legible to trained attention, that whatever is hidden yields to it, and that what it most often uncovers is not the criminal of the alley but the respectable household, where a father, a stepfather or a suitor means to keep a woman’s money for himself.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The book opens on a sentence about a woman: “To Sherlock Holmes she is always the woman.” She is Irene Adler, and in “A Scandal in Bohemia”, the first of the twelve stories, she beats him. The client is a King of Bohemia; the woman is the one person in the book who escapes, by her own wit, the control that men in it mean to keep over a woman’s marriage or money. The hero of a series meant to run month after month begins his run defeated, and the narrator records the name he gives her afterwards. She is the only adversary of equal wit the book allows him, and the first story spends her.
The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes was published by George Newnes in London in October 1892. It gathers twelve stories first printed in The Strand Magazine from July 1891 to June 1892, in this order: “A Scandal in Bohemia”, “The Red-Headed League”, “A Case of Identity”, “The Boscombe Valley Mystery”, “The Five Orange Pips”, “The Man with the Twisted Lip”, “The Adventure of the Blue Carbuncle”, “The Adventure of the Speckled Band”, “The Adventure of the Engineer’s Thumb”, “The Adventure of the Noble Bachelor”, “The Adventure of the Beryl Coronet” and “The Adventure of the Copper Beeches”. Each was sized to one monthly number, and all are told in the first person by Watson. Holmes and Watson were already made, in A Study in Scarlet (1887) and The Sign of Four (1890); those novels and the later collections are not this book.
In the first story Holmes gives Watson the book’s lesson: “You see, but you do not observe.” It is a method, and it is also the book’s form. Watson sees, records and does not observe, and so the reader holds every clue Holmes holds and is still surprised; the reasoning appears as a gap between two minds, measured by the one who cannot cross it. Told in the third person, or by Holmes himself, the stories would keep their puzzles and lose their finding, that intelligence is visible chiefly to the one who lacks it. The companion who narrates and admires is the instrument of the book, and the reason it can be read again for him.
Movement II
Jabez Wilson, a pawnbroker, answers an advertisement and is paid to copy out the Encyclopaedia. “The Red-Headed League” spends its long first half on this comedy, and every comic detail is a clue: the notice that the League is dissolved, the knees of Wilson’s assistant, the cellar of the pawnshop. Holmes calls it “quite a three pipe problem”, and the problem is a tunnel. It is the only one of the twelve stories to close on an arrest made and a prosecution coming. Within a story of this kind there is nothing to cut; the subtractive test finds every joke carrying weight.
Most of the twelve share one course. A conversation in Baker Street; the client’s arrival, and Holmes’s reading of the client; the client’s statement, often the longest block of the story; an excursion; a vigil or a confrontation; the explanation after the fact. “The Speckled Band”, “The Copper Beeches”, “The Red-Headed League” and “The Engineer’s Thumb” keep it closely, and “A Scandal in Bohemia” and “The Blue Carbuncle” bend it. The course is an engine, and it is well made: exposition by dialogue that entertains as it informs, the client’s testimony carried in a voice not Watson’s, the display of inference that draws Holmes and the client at once, the reveal timed to the last pages.
The engine repeats, and that is the book’s limit as a book. By the ninth story the reader knows where the client’s statement will fall. The long statements, Hatherley’s and Violet Hunter’s among them, run as set pieces in a borrowed voice. “The Noble Bachelor” and “The Engineer’s Thumb” add nothing the book lacks, and the second leaves Holmes almost nothing to do. The prose is clear, quick and even, and serviceable rather than distinguished: its sentences carry the plot and rarely do more. Twelve numbers each complete in itself could stand in another order, and a collection so made gathers rather than compels.
Movement III
In “The Blue Carbuncle” Holmes reads a man’s history off a hat: his intellect from its size, his decline from its want of brushing. The jewel is found in a goose’s crop, and the thief is found, and Holmes lets him go, at Christmas: “I suppose that I am commuting a felony, but it is just possible that I am saving a soul.” The sentence is the book’s law in small. Holmes acts as a private court: the reasoner hears the case and finds, and the finding, not the law of the land, decides what follows. Here, and in one other story, it is mercy.
The endings bear this out. Only “The Red-Headed League” closes on an arrest and a prosecution. Holmes is beaten in “A Scandal in Bohemia”; in “The Five Orange Pips” the client is killed and the killers lost at sea; the guilty man is let go in “The Blue Carbuncle”, and Turner in “The Boscombe Valley Mystery”; there is no crime at all in “The Man with the Twisted Lip” or “The Noble Bachelor”; in “A Case of Identity”, “The Engineer’s Thumb”, “The Beryl Coronet” and “The Copper Beeches” the culprit is out of the law’s reach or escapes it; in “The Speckled Band” he dies by his own instrument. The law of the land is beside the point in eleven endings of twelve.
“The Man with the Twisted Lip” finds no crime and a whole economy. Neville St. Clair, a gentleman of Lee, earns more begging in Upper Swandam Lane than he did in the City, and keeps it from his wife; the case runs through an opium den, the Bar of Gold. It is the book’s second disclosure, beside its first: the city has a hidden economy, and respectability is a costume worn over it. It is also the story of the book’s best known slip, in which Watson’s wife calls him “James”. The slip survives with the text, and the Game of reconciling such slips, kept since 1934, has never stopped.
Movement IV
“The Speckled Band” is the book’s height. Roylott, a ruined baronet with an Indian past, has killed one stepdaughter and means to kill the other before their marriages can take their money. The story plants a whistle, a ventilator, a bell-pull that rings nothing and a bed clamped to the floor, and spends them all in a vigil in the dark at Stoke Moran: the low whistle, Holmes lashing at the bell-pull, the scream, and Roylott found with the band about his brow. “Violence does, in truth, recoil upon the violent.” It is an ogre’s house with a stepfather and a girl to be saved, and the old pattern carries the plot.
The book’s elevation is of this one kind, dread, and it comes often in small measure. “The Five Orange Pips” opens in an equinoctial gale that sets the fatality of the tale, and it ends with the client drowned and the ship of his killers lost. In “The Engineer’s Thumb” a hydraulic press closes on Hatherley. The opium den of the Bar of Gold and the locked wing at the Copper Beeches each rise. These are the thrills of a well made tale, not transport, and about half the book, “A Case of Identity”, “The Noble Bachelor”, “The Beryl Coronet” among it, never rises at all.
The height is also where the book’s law bends. The snake of “The Speckled Band” is a swamp adder that drinks milk and answers a whistle, which no snake does. One law governs the twelve stories, that the world is legible to trained attention, and the comedy of the Red-Headed League and the dread of Stoke Moran obey it in one register; but here the world’s physics gives way where the plot needs it, and elsewhere Holmes guesses where he claims to deduce. The slips of date and name are small. A bent physics is the law of the book bent.
Movement V
In “The Copper Beeches”, the last story, a governess, Violet Hunter, takes a post in a country house where there is a wing she must not look into, and the master, Rucastle, has shut his daughter up there to keep her from marrying. It is Bluebeard’s locked wing with a governess at the door. Holmes says that the “smiling and beautiful countryside” holds a worse record of sin than the alleys of London, because no one is near enough to hear. The book has been saying it from the start, and here says it outright.
Five of the twelve turn on a woman whose money or marriage a father, a stepfather or a suitor means to control. Windibank courts his own stepdaughter in disguise to keep her income; Roylott kills one stepdaughter and tries for the other before their marriages can take their money; Rucastle locks up his daughter; “The Noble Bachelor” and, in its way, “The Beryl Coronet” turn on the same arrangement. The respectable household is the book’s scene of crime, and money its motive. The finding is stated, and it holds. But it is made in passing, and the form closes each case it opens; no woman it rescues is entered from within.
The book’s inheritance is Poe’s three tales of Dupin, Gaboriau and the sensation novel. Its own turn was a series of complete stories around a recurring pair, and that shape, here the fortune of the Strand, became the shape of popular fiction and then of radio and television. The pair of reasoner and admiring narrator passed to Christie’s Poirot and Hastings, to Chesterton’s Father Brown, written in answer, and to Stout’s Wolfe and Goodwin; Borges and Bioy Casares wrote in the line, and Eco named his friar William of Baskerville. The book has been in print in every decade for 134 years, and the twelve stories survive whole.
Act III · The Twelve
Two tests, and they part. Within a story the subtractive test mostly fails to find waste. “The Red-Headed League” spends its long comic first half on Jabez Wilson, the advertisement and the copying of the Encyclopaedia, and every comic detail is a clue: the notice of dissolution, the assistant’s knees, the pawnbroker’s cellar. “The Speckled Band” plants a whistle, a ventilator, a bell-pull that rings nothing and a bed clamped to the floor, and spends all four. Across the book the test succeeds too easily. The twelve were made as monthly numbers, each complete, and any one could go without loss to the rest; “The Noble Bachelor” and “The Engineer’s Thumb” add nothing the book lacks. The shape repeats. A book whose order could be shuffled is assembled, not compelled.
Score: 7.4 / 10
Two disclosures hold. The first is the book’s real subject: the respectable household as the site of crime, and money as its motive. Windibank courts his own stepdaughter in disguise to keep her income; Roylott kills one stepdaughter and tries for the other before their marriages can take their money; Rucastle shuts his daughter up to keep her from marrying. In the last story Holmes says it outright: the “smiling and beautiful countryside” holds a worse record of sin than the London alleys, because no one is near to hear. The second is the city’s hidden economy, in a gentleman who earns more by begging than in the City. Both can be stated and both hold. Held back because the disclosures are made in passing, and the form restores order each time: the condition is shown and then closed.
Score: 7.5 / 10
Elevation is real and of one kind, dread, and it comes often in small measure. The vigil in the dark at Stoke Moran, the low whistle, Holmes lashing at the bell-pull and Roylott found with the band about his brow, is the book’s height, and the scream that follows it carries. “The Five Orange Pips” opens in an equinoctial gale that sets the tale’s fatality and ends with the client drowned and the ship lost. The opium den of the Bar of Gold, the locked wing at the Copper Beeches and the hydraulic press closing on Hatherley each rise. What holds the axis at the foot of the twelve is that these are the thrills of a well made tale, not transport; about half the book never rises at all, and its other pleasure, the mind at work, is delight rather than the sublime.
Score: 7.2 / 10
The myth is built, not evoked, and argued from the stories rather than from the fame. The reasoner is the knight-errant of the modern city, who reads a man’s history off his hat and so restores the hidden order; the companion narrates what he admires and cannot do; the rooms in Baker Street are the threshold every client crosses. Older patterns bear weight in the plots: “The Speckled Band” is an ogre’s house with a stepfather and a girl to be saved, “The Copper Beeches” Bluebeard’s locked wing, with a governess who must not look. “A Scandal in Bohemia” gives the hero his one adversary of equal wit and makes her “the woman”. Held a tenth under the gate: the figure was founded in two earlier novels, and Holmes is rarely changed by the myth he carries; he is an emblem more than a fate.
Score: 8.4 / 10
The inheritance is Poe’s three tales of Dupin, Gaboriau’s Lecoq and the sensation novel. Two departures are the book’s own. The first is of form: a series of complete stories, each one number long, around one recurring pair, so that the character is the continuing thing and the plot is not. The magazine story and later the series on radio and television inherited that shape, and it is made here. The second is quieter, of content: a detective beaten in the first story, who loses his client in the fifth, finds no crime in two, and lets a thief go at Christmas. Held in the sevens because the method, the display of inference and the narrating companion are Poe’s, and because the stake was small: the venture was commercial, and it paid at once. A swerve that risked little.
Score: 7.6 / 10
Change the form and the book loses what it knows. Watson’s narration is the instrument. A narrator who sees, records and does not observe lets the reader hold every clue and still be surprised, and lets the book show reasoning as a gap between two minds. Told in the third person, or by Holmes, the stories would lose their finding, that intelligence is visible chiefly to the one who lacks it. The short form is matched to the case: one problem, one hearing, one solution, the client’s statement set at the centre as testimony to be read. Held off the top because the form is the same in all twelve and frames the plot more than it thinks, and the long statements of clients, Hatherley’s and Violet Hunter’s among them, run as set pieces in a borrowed voice. A form fitted to its content, not one that is its content.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Evidence over 134 years, of two kinds, weighed apart. There is a vast literature of play: the Game of treating the stories as a record and reconciling their dates and slips, kept by the Baker Street Irregulars since 1934 and never stopped. It is evidence of return, but it returns to the inconsistencies and the world, not to the depth. There is serious criticism too, among it Carlo Ginzburg’s essay on the evidential paradigm, which sets Holmes beside Morelli and Freud. On return the puzzles are spent; what yields is the London, the map of class and the cruelty of households under the plots, and these yield less than a novel’s. The reader comes back for Holmes, not for questions the stories leave open.
Score: 7.6 / 10
The field is English fiction of the late nineteenth century, popular and literary. The intrinsic force is moderate: the book did not reorganise what prose fiction could do, but took a form already made by Poe and gave it a shape fit for the magazine and the series. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the reach is among the widest of any English book of its decade, and it is named. The pair of detective and admiring narrator governs the genre that followed: Christie’s Poirot and Hastings from The Mysterious Affair at Styles (1920), Chesterton’s Father Brown, written in answer, Rex Stout’s Wolfe and Goodwin; Borges and Bioy Casares wrote in the line, and Eco named his friar William of Baskerville from a later Holmes novel. The series of self-contained stories became the shape of popular fiction. Reach counts; force holds it under the gate.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Survival is weighed over 134 years, and it is shown. The text is whole: the twelve stories as printed, never lost or recast, and the one known slip of a name is part of what survives. Presence has been continuous, in print in every decade, translated, taught in schools, read by children and by adults, and adapted without end; it is among the most widely read books of its century. Two charges hold it below the widest presence. Fame is not proof, and much of the presence is of the figure rather than of this book: the deerstalker, which the text does not give him in Baker Street, and “Elementary, my dear Watson”, which these stories never print. And the surface is fixed to its moment, gas-lamp, hansom and telegram, though it has outlived its conditions and become part of the charm.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Judged on Doyle’s English, with no translation between. The command is of the story’s engine, and it is high: exposition by dialogue that is itself entertainment; the client’s statement, which carries the plot in a voice not Watson’s; the display of inference, which characterises Holmes and the client at once, the hat in “The Blue Carbuncle”, the typist’s sleeves in “A Case of Identity”; and the timing of the reveal. The prose is clear, quick and even, and the openings are built to hook: “To Sherlock Holmes she is always the woman.” Three charges. The prose is serviceable rather than distinguished, its sentences rarely doing more than carry. The plots fail physics and law in known places, a swamp adder that drinks milk and answers a whistle among them. And the formula repeats. A perfectly made engine, not a prose that carries the argument.
Score: 8.2 / 10
One law governs the book: the world is legible to trained attention, and whatever is hidden, a tunnel under a pawnshop, a beggar’s face, a goose’s crop, yields to it. Take the two most distant elements, the comedy of “The Red-Headed League” and “The Noble Bachelor” and the dread of “The Speckled Band” and “The Engineer’s Thumb”. They obey the same law, and Watson’s voice holds them in one register. The moral law is also one: Holmes acts as a private court, and the law of the land is beside the point in eleven endings of twelve. Held because the law is narrow, a genre’s range, and narrowness is not coherence; and because the book’s own law is broken in places, where Holmes guesses while claiming to deduce and the physics fails where the plot needs a snake.
Score: 7.9 / 10
Judged on what one book of twelve stories holds, and it holds more of its world than its form promises. Clients and culprits run the scale of city and country: a King of Bohemia, a peer and an American heiress, a City banker, a pawnbroker and his assistant, a typist, a governess, a hydraulic engineer, a gentleman turned beggar, a lodger in an opium den, a ruined baronet with an Indian past. Empire runs under the plots, in the Australian goldfields of “The Boscombe Valley Mystery”, the American South of “The Five Orange Pips” and the India of “The Speckled Band”. Family and money are held together. What it does not hold: consciousness, since no mind is entered beyond Watson’s surface and Holmes’s method; the state as more than a policeman; the sacred; the inner life of any woman it rescues. A wide map at the scale of the anecdote.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
7.9 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier III · Major
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 9.1, then The Archetypal Deep and Pressure on Tradition at 8.4 and The Made at 8.2. A text that survives whole and has been read in every decade for 134 years; a myth built into the plots, the reasoner who restores the hidden order, the ogre’s house and Bluebeard’s wing, the one woman of equal wit; a reach that governs the genre that followed and the shape of the series; and an engine of story made with high command, the client’s testimony, the display of inference and the timed reveal.
Limiting Dimension
The Sublime at 7.2: an elevation of one kind, dread, real at Stoke Moran and in the gale and the press, but the thrill of a well made tale rather than transport, and absent from about half the book. Next above it, The Encompassed at 7.3: a wide map of a city and its country held at the scale of the anecdote, with no mind entered and the state no more than a policeman. Then The Inevitable at 7.4: stories that waste nothing within themselves, gathered as twelve monthly numbers that could stand in another order and repeat one course.
The Necessity Cap is unmet: The Inevitable at 7.4 falls a tenth short of the threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Made at 8.2, The Living Form at 8.0, The Inner Law at 7.9, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet on four axes: The Imperishable at 9.1 clears the bar of 8.5, but The Archetypal Deep at 8.4, Pressure on Tradition at 8.4, The Swerve at 7.6 and The Unconcealment at 7.5 each fall short of it. The Universal Minimum is unmet at The Sublime, 7.2, and The Inevitable, 7.4, both below 7.5; The Encompassed, which it exempts, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.3. Two of the five summit conditions are met. The work stands where its aggregate places it: 7.9, in the band of Tier III, short of the 8.0 at which Tier IV begins and of the 9.0 that the summit requires.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Arthur Conan Doyle’s The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes, published by George Newnes, London, in October 1892: twelve stories first printed in The Strand Magazine from July 1891 to June 1892, scored as one book of stories in the order of first publication. Sidney Paget’s drawings for the Strand are context and not part of the work. The two earlier novels, A Study in Scarlet (1887) and The Sign of Four (1890), and the later collections are named only where the book depends on them or is continued by them, and are neither credited nor charged to it. The stories weighed most are “A Scandal in Bohemia”, “The Red-Headed League”, “The Man with the Twisted Lip”, “The Blue Carbuncle”, “The Speckled Band” and “The Copper Beeches”; least, “The Noble Bachelor” and “The Engineer’s Thumb”. No text was in hand: nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Every axis is judged on Doyle’s English, with no translation between. Events are paraphrased, and English is quoted only where its words are certain. Facts that could not be verified, among them the length of the book in words, the dates and places of the earliest studies of the stories and of later criticism, are not given. Citations are by story.