The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Long poem · 20th c. · A bridge over a harbor, a Manhattan dawn, a railroad and the Mississippi, a chief burned at the stake, Columbus on the homeward sea, a subway at midnight, and a vision of Atlantis

The Bridge

Hart Crane · a poem in a Proem and eight numbered parts, fifteen poems in all · Liveright, New York, April 1930 · scored as the book as published in 1930, in the Liveright text, on Crane’s English, read from knowledge; no text in hand, and quoted only where the words are certain

The Plate · a level deck between two piers, each opened by a pointed arch, the right taller than the left, for the Proem and Atlantis; a heavy cable falling from the left pier in a long curve to its lowest point near the right, then climbing steeply, for the day and the descent that runs from the harbor dawn to the midnight of The Tunnel and the rise out of it; thirteen hangers in small groups for the poems between, four of them broken for the poems the book carries rather than requires

Mode

The visionary lyric sequence as epic: Romantic ode and Elizabethan density in the line, joined by what Crane called the logic of metaphor, images linked by association rather than by syntax

Mythos

The bridge as harp and altar, a sacred arc from the ground to God; Pocahontas as the body of the continent; Columbus opening the quest and Atlantis or Cathay closing it; Rip Van Winkle asleep through his history; Poe as the poet damned in the city

Phase

One day, from The Harbor Dawn to the midnight of The Tunnel, and a journey westward and backward into the land, held between two arches, the Proem and Atlantis

Presentation

Fifteen poems in nine headed divisions: quatrains in the Proem, long verse paragraphs in The River, Cape Hatteras and The Tunnel, rhymed octaves in Atlantis, short songs and ballad measures elsewhere; marginal glosses beside The River; typographic counterpoint in Cutty Sark

Register

Exaltation, prayer and transport, and their dreadful counterpart in the subway; elsewhere sentiment, moralizing and apostrophe

Scale

A continent and its history, a modern city and its machines, held in one designed span of lyric

Governing Proposition

A sequence of fifteen poems, written across six years by an American poet with a banker’s help, that sets out to answer the most admired poem of its decade: where The Waste Land gave the modern city its verdict, this book would find in that city a myth, and the myth would be a bridge. Between a Proem addressed to Brooklyn Bridge and a closing vision of Atlantis it runs a single day, from a harbor dawn to a subway midnight, and a journey westward and backward through the continent’s past, to Columbus, to the Indian bride who is the body of the land, to a chief burned at the stake. The wager is that lyric, compressed to the point of private logic, can carry an epic of assent; the book wins it in its greatest poems and asserts it in its weaker ones.

A Myth to God

8.5 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

How Many Dawns

Hart Crane worked on The Bridge from 1923 to 1929. Atlantis, the last poem, was begun first, in 1923; most of the book was written in a burst on the Isle of Pines, off Cuba, in the summer of 1926. The work was financed in part by the banker Otto Kahn. It was published in 1930 in two editions: by the Black Sun Press in Paris early in the year, with three photographs by Walker Evans, and by Liveright in New York in April. The desk scores the book as published, in the Liveright text; the two editions differ little, and the photographs are context, not the work. Crane died in 1932.

The book is fifteen poems in nine headed divisions: the Proem, To Brooklyn Bridge; I Ave Maria; II Powhatan’s Daughter, in five poems, The Harbor Dawn, Van Winkle, The River, The Dance and Indiana; III Cutty Sark; IV Cape Hatteras; V Three Songs, Southern Cross, National Winter Garden and Virginia; VI Quaker Hill; VII The Tunnel; VIII Atlantis. The forms change with the parts: quatrains for the Proem, long verse paragraphs for The River, Cape Hatteras and The Tunnel, rhymed octaves for Atlantis, short songs and ballad measures for Indiana and the Three Songs. It is weighed most on the poems that carry it: the Proem, The River, The Dance, The Tunnel and Atlantis.

The Proem opens on a seagull, “How many dawns, chill from his rippling rest”, and becomes a prayer. The bridge is addressed as “O harp and altar, of the fury fused”, and asked to “of the curveship lend a myth to God”. The whole wager is in that request: that a made thing of steel and cable, in a city of machines, can be the sacred object a nation lacks. The Proem and Atlantis are the two arches of the book, and everything between them is the road from one to the other.

Movement II

Powhatan’s Daughter

The day begins in a Manhattan bedroom, at The Harbor Dawn, and goes back. Van Winkle returns the speaker to childhood, and the American who has slept through his history stands over the passage. The River boards the railroad: the train’s talk of advertising runs beside the hoboes who ride it, the last carriers of the land’s knowledge, and the poem slows into the long blank verse of the Mississippi. Marginal glosses run beside it, in the manner of the Ancient Mariner, so that the page itself sets the advertising against the land’s silence. The shift from the train to the river is the book’s best modulation.

The Dance goes furthest back. Pocahontas, Powhatan’s daughter, is the body of the continent, and the speaker seeks her through the burning of the chief Maquokeeta, passing through his death into the land. The poem is told from inside the vision, in short quatrains of driven rhythm: “I could not pick the arrows from my side”. It is a sustained transport, the burning at the stake become the speaker’s own, and it carries the book’s ascent. The archetype here bears load: without it there is no way into the land, and the rest of the quest has nowhere to go.

Then Indiana, the pioneer mother’s farewell, in a ballad measure. It is sentimental, and it adds nothing The Dance has not already paid for; its form knows nothing its content does not state. The descent through Powhatan’s Daughter is compelled, each poem a stage further back, until this last one, which could go without loss. The pattern holds through the book: where the vision is enacted, nothing can be removed; where it is reported, a good deal can.

Movement III

Performances, Assortments, Résumés

The Tunnel is the book’s descent into hell. The commuter’s ride is run as a damnation: the crowd’s chatter heard as “Performances, assortments, résumés”, Poe’s head swinging from the strap. Poe is the poet damned in the city, a Virgil without a road out. The city’s night is a damnation it does not know it is in, and the poem shows this as a condition, not a mood. It is the book’s strongest disclosure and its elevation of terror, the dreadful counterpart of the Proem.

What the book brings into the open is here: that a modern American consciousness, among machines, subways and advertising, has no myth adequate to it, and that the continent’s past is available only as a vision recovered against the grain of the present. The Tunnel and the Proem are inverse images under one law, the same city seen from above and from below. The poem ends with a climb out to the harbor, and the book turns toward its close.

The limit of the disclosure is set by the book’s own claim. The Tunnel shows the want of a myth; the book claims to supply one, and that claim is sung, not shown to hold. Disclosure of longing ranks below disclosure of meaning, and much of what the book discloses is a mood of longing. That is why The Unconcealment stands at 8.2, below the bar the summit sets, while the poems that sing the claim stand among the highest in American verse for elevation.

Movement IV

O Walt!

Whitman is the father the book acknowledges, and Cape Hatteras addresses him directly: “O Walt!”. The poem takes on flight, the Wright brothers and early aviation, in apostrophe and in mechanical catalogues the verse does not hold, and it is a third longer than its argument. Here the book asserts what it elsewhere earns. The turn from Whitman is real, a diction compressed to the point of private logic, what Crane called the logic of metaphor, in which images join by association rather than by syntax; but the turn is more of idiom than of form, and in Cape Hatteras the idiom swells.

The turn from Eliot is the larger one. The Waste Land (1922) was the age’s verdict, and Crane set out to answer it with an affirmation: an epic of assent written in the same modern city and with the same machinery. The stake was real. Crane staked years, a patron’s money and his reputation on the form, and Allen Tate and Yvor Winters, among the most respected readers of 1930, judged it a failure. The book was read for decades as a magnificent mistake. Failure as an epic is not failure on the desk’s twelve axes, and the major poems are a body of verse few long poems match.

The unevenness is the book’s limit. Cutty Sark sets a drunk sailor’s talk against a vision of clippers in typographic counterpoint, and the counterpoint is form at work, though the clippers remain allusion. The Three Songs are uneven: Southern Cross and Virginia are slight, and National Winter Garden, a burlesque dancer in a Broadway house, can be made to obey the quest’s law only by reading the dancer as the Indian bride’s modern shadow, the body as the debased form of the desire that rises in the vision. Quaker Hill states the New England decline that the book elsewhere enacts. The range is wide; the law that holds it is strained, and The Inner Law stands at 8.0.

Movement V

Is It Cathay

Atlantis was the first poem begun and is the last in the book. It holds its summit for eight rhymed octaves, with an orchestral sound, “Whispers antiphonal in azure swing”, and the bridge becomes a visionary absolute: “Through the bound cable strands, the arching path / Upward, veering with light, the flight of strings”. The quest Columbus opened in Ave Maria closes here, on a question: “Is it Cathay”. Plato’s Atlantis and Columbus’s Cathay stand at the two ends of one quest, and the bridge is its figure.

The affirmation closes on a question, and the vision of synthesis is not an articulated truth that holds when stated. That is the measure of the book: its greatest poems rise as often and as far as any long American poem of its century, and its myth is built, with gaps in the masonry; its central claim is sung. Ninety-six years of return have read it as a failed epic, as a triumph of visionary lyric, as a homosexual poem whose love is coded into the landscape, as a Romantic crisis-poem and as a modernist city poem, and the argument has not closed.

On this desk it stands at 8.5. The Waste Land (9.1), the poem it answers, leads it on every axis but The Encompassed, and by most on The Inevitable, The Living Form, Pressure on Tradition and The Made; Leaves of Grass (9.1), its acknowledged source, leads it on all twelve. Stevens’s Harmonium (8.6), the nearest American contemporary, stands a tenth above, level on The Swerve, with The Bridge ahead on The Sublime, The Archetypal Deep and The Encompassed. The Prelude (8.8) and Four Quartets (8.9) lead it on The Unconcealment, The Living Form and The Made, which is what the unevenness of the sequence costs. Across the desks, Brooklyn Bridge (8.7) stands level with it on The Sublime at 9.1 and leads on The Inevitable, The Made, Pressure on Tradition and The Imperishable, while the poem leads the building on The Archetypal Deep and The Swerve: the poem made the bridge a myth.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The test is subtractive, and the book answers it unevenly. The frame is required: the Proem, “How many dawns, chill from his rippling rest”, and Atlantis close one span, and the day from The Harbor Dawn to the midnight of The Tunnel is the road between. Within Powhatan’s Daughter the descent is compelled, each poem one stage further back into the land, from a Manhattan bedroom through childhood to the hoboes’ railroad, the Mississippi and the burning of Maquokeeta. What holds the axis at 7.5, the lowest of the twelve, is the rest: Indiana is sentimental and adds nothing The Dance has not paid for, Virginia and Southern Cross are slight, Quaker Hill states the decline the book elsewhere enacts, and Cape Hatteras is a third longer than its argument. The spine is necessary; a third of the book is assembled.

Score: 7.5 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

What is brought into the open: that a modern American consciousness, among machines, subways and advertising, has no myth adequate to it, and that the continent’s buried past is available only as a vision recovered against the grain of the present. The Tunnel discloses this as a condition: the subway as hell, the crowd’s chatter heard as “Performances, assortments, résumés”, Poe’s head swinging from the strap, a city in a damnation it does not know it is in. The River finds the last carriers of the land’s knowledge in the hoboes. But the book’s central claim, that the bridge can be the myth that holds this world, is sung more than shown. Atlantis is a vision of synthesis, not a truth that holds when stated, and much of the disclosure is of a mood of longing.

Score: 8.2 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

Height and frequency both, and here they are among the highest in American verse. The Proem rises in nearly every quatrain, “O harp and altar, of the fury fused”, to the prayer that the bridge “of the curveship lend a myth to God”. Ave Maria gives Columbus on the homeward sea, the Atlantic rising round a man who carries the news of a world. The Dance is a sustained transport, a burning at the stake told from inside a vision: “I could not pick the arrows from my side”. The Tunnel is the dreadful counterpart, an elevation of terror. Atlantis holds the summit for eight octaves. The slack songs and the bombast of parts of Cape Hatteras pull the frequency down; but no long American poem of its century rises so often or so far.

Score: 9.1 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

Myth built, not only evoked: the book’s whole wager is construction. The bridge is made a sacred object, harp and altar, an arc joining the ground to God. Pocahontas becomes the body of the continent, sought back through the railroad, the river and the burning chief. Columbus opens the quest and Atlantis or Cathay closes it, on the question “Is it Cathay”. Rip Van Winkle is the American who has slept through his history; Poe in The Tunnel is the poet damned in the city, a Virgil without a road out. These figures bear load: The Dance, where the speaker passes through Maquokeeta’s death into the land, carries the book’s ascent. The charge is the masonry. The sources, Plato, Columbus, the Indian, Whitman, the clipper ships, do not all join, and some, Cutty Sark’s clippers and the Wright brothers of Cape Hatteras, remain allusion.

Score: 8.8 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The inheritance is Whitman’s America and his long poem of the self and the nation; the Romantic ode and visionary lyric of Blake, Shelley and Keats; the Elizabethan density of Marlowe and Donne in the line; and, as the immediate pressure, The Waste Land (1922), which Crane read as the age’s verdict and set out to answer with an affirmation. The turn is twofold: against Eliot, an epic of assent written in the same modern city with the same machinery; against Whitman, a diction compressed to the point of private logic. The stake was real: years, a patron’s money and a reputation, staked on a form that Allen Tate and Yvor Winters judged a failure. Held below 9.0 because the swerve from Whitman is more of idiom than of form.

Score: 8.8 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

Would changing the form change what the book knows? In large part, yes. A continuous narrative could not do what the sequence does: the book knows America as fragments that a vision must span, and the form is a span, separate poems held between two arches, with a day and a westward and backward journey as its cables. The marginal gloss beside The River sets the train’s advertising against the land’s silence on the page itself; Cutty Sark’s typographic counterpoint sets a drunk sailor’s talk against a vision of clippers; The Tunnel runs the commuter’s ride as a descent. There form is the instrument. But the weaker poems, the ballad of Indiana and the loose paragraphs of Quaker Hill, are in forms that know nothing their content does not state, and the architecture is legible more from Crane’s letters than from the sequence.

Score: 8.3 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

Evidence first: ninety-six years of return, and an argument that has not closed. The book has been reread as a failed epic, by Winters and Tate; as a triumph of visionary lyric, by Harold Bloom, who put Crane among the great American poets; as a homosexual poem whose love is coded into the landscape; as an American Romantic crisis-poem in the line from Emerson and Whitman; and as a modernist city poem beside Eliot and Joyce. Each reading opens something the others did not see. The line itself keeps yielding, its compressed images rewarding slow decoding, and the density of the Proem and Atlantis has not been exhausted by close reading. Return is concentrated among poets and the academy rather than general readers, which bounds the evidence, and the weaker poems do not keep yielding.

Score: 8.7 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is American poetry of the twentieth century and, more narrowly, the modernist long poem in English. The intrinsic force is high. The Bridge is the major counter-statement to The Waste Land, the attempt to show that the modern long poem could affirm, could be lyric throughout and could make a national myth out of machines, and it kept open the visionary Romantic line that high modernism had closed. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Bloom’s criticism made Crane a central figure; poets have kept him as a touchstone, and Tennessee Williams took the epigraph of A Streetcar Named Desire from Crane, though from “The Broken Tower”, not this book. But the book did not redirect its field as The Waste Land or Pound’s Cantos did; its influence ran through the line rather than the form.

Score: 8.4 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

Ninety-six years, weighed on form, presence and fabric. The form survives whole, as Crane saw it into print; nothing is lost, and the two editions of 1930 differ little. Presence has been continuous since publication: in print, anthologized, the Proem and parts of Atlantis and The River above all, taught, reread by poets and championed in the criticism. But it has never been a book of general readers, and that narrowness is charged. Its surface is fixed to its moment in places: the Wright brothers and early aviation of Cape Hatteras, the subway and advertising, the jazz-age burlesque of National Winter Garden. Most of the book has outlived the conditions that produced it, and the bridge itself still stands. A tenth comes off the step for its age for a presence that is narrow and largely academic.

Score: 8.9 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

Judged on Crane’s English. At its height the command is complete and load-bearing. The Proem’s quatrains are among the most finished in American verse, their pentameter weighted with Elizabethan stress. Atlantis sustains a rhymed octave with an orchestral sound, “Whispers antiphonal in azure swing”, and “Through the bound cable strands, the arching path / Upward, veering with light, the flight of strings”. The Dance moves in short quatrains of driven rhythm, and The River’s shift from the train’s talk of advertising to the long slow blank verse of the Mississippi is a master’s modulation. But the making is uneven. Cape Hatteras swells into apostrophe, “O Walt!”, and into catalogues the verse does not hold; Indiana’s ballad sentiment is flat; and the logic of metaphor at times yields lines whose sense must be supplied from outside the poem.

Score: 8.6 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

Does one physics govern? The law Crane intends is the quest: every poem a station on the way from the harbor dawn to the vision of Atlantis, the bridge its figure. Take the two most distant elements: National Winter Garden, a burlesque dancer in a Broadway house, and Atlantis, the bridge as a visionary absolute. They can be made to obey one law, the body as the debased form of the desire that rises in the vision, Pocahontas fallen and then redeemed, and the book reaches for it: the woman of Three Songs is the Indian bride’s modern shadow. The same law holds The Tunnel and the Proem as inverse images. But the tone breaks. Indiana’s sentiment, Quaker Hill’s moralizing and the apostrophes to Whitman are in a different physics from the visionary compression elsewhere. The range is wide; the law that governs it is strained.

Score: 8.0 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

Judged on what the book holds, as a lyric sequence. The continent and its history: Columbus, the Indian, the pioneers, the clipper ships, the New England decline of Quaker Hill, flight. The modern city and its labour: the harbor, the subway, the railroad and the men who ride it. Technology, as the bridge, the train and the airplane. The sacred throughout, in the Proem’s prayer and in Atlantis. Sex and the body, in the songs and The Dance. Consciousness, as the poet’s own quest, and childhood memory in Van Winkle. Death, in Poe and Maquokeeta. These are many orders, held in one structure rather than listed, at least in the central poems. What keeps the figure at 8.5: the family and the state are thin, and the integration of history and the present is intended more often than achieved.

Score: 8.5 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.5 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Sublime at 9.1, then The Imperishable at 8.9, The Archetypal Deep and The Swerve at 8.8. Elevation as frequent and as high as any long American poem of its century, from the Proem’s prayer through the burning of The Dance to the eight octaves of Atlantis; a book whole and continuously present for ninety-six years; a myth built and load-bearing; and a turn against Eliot staked on a form its first readers judged a failure.

Limiting Dimension

The Inevitable at 7.5, the lowest of the twelve: the frame and the descent are necessary, but Indiana, Quaker Hill, the slighter songs and the length of Cape Hatteras are assembled rather than required. Next, The Inner Law at 8.0, the quest’s law strained by sentiment, moralizing and apostrophe, and The Unconcealment at 8.2, its central claim sung rather than shown to hold.

The Necessity Cap is met exactly: The Inevitable at 7.5 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Made at 8.6, The Living Form at 8.3, The Inner Law at 8.0, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 8.9, The Archetypal Deep at 8.8 and The Swerve at 8.8 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Unconcealment at 8.2 falls three tenths short, the book’s disclosure of a want of myth stronger than its sung claim to supply one, and Pressure on Tradition at 8.4 falls a tenth short, its force high but its reach running through the line of later poets rather than through a changed form. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis it covers falls below The Inevitable at 7.5, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.5. The aggregate stands below 9.0 in any case, and the book is placed in the Canonical tier on its standing.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of Hart Crane’s The Bridge as published in 1930, in the text of the Liveright edition (New York, April 1930): the Proem and eight numbered parts, fifteen poems in all. The Black Sun Press edition (Paris, early 1930), with three photographs by Walker Evans, is named as context; the two differ little, and the photographs are not the work. Every axis is judged on Crane’s English; no translation stands between. The poems weighed most are the Proem, The River, The Dance, The Tunnel and Atlantis; Indiana, Southern Cross, Virginia and Quaker Hill are argued in kind and not quoted. No text was in hand, since the book was read from knowledge: nothing was measured on a text, no line counts are given, and no quotation was checked against a file. Quotations are short, given only where their words are certain, and cited by poem; everything else is paraphrased. Matters that could not be verified are not given, among them the book’s length in lines, the number of quatrains in the Proem, the epigraphs of the book and of its parts, the later reprinting of the Liveright text, and the debts of particular later poets.