The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Nikos Kazantzakis · Ο Τελευταίος Πειρασμός · a novel with a prologue in the author’s voice · 1955 · scored on Kazantzakis’s Greek as published in Athens in 1955, read from knowledge, with Peter A. Bien’s English (1960) beside it for sense; no text in hand, no sentence quoted, and the Greek given for the title only
Mode
Novel of the life of Jesus told from within; Passion narrative, novel of vocation and visionary allegory in one book
Mythos
The Passion bent at its points of stress: the carpenter who makes the occupier’s crosses, the betrayer commissioned by the betrayed, the temptation in the wilderness moved to the cross and made a temptation by goodness, a whole life lived in the space of a swoon
Phase
One life told in order, from the carpenter’s shop in Nazareth to the cross, and on the cross a vision of the years he did not live, ending as Jerusalem burns, and the waking
Presentation
Fiction; a prologue in the author’s voice, then third-person narration in chapters, the closing vision told in the same realist manner as the ministry and not announced as a vision until the waking
Register
Ecstatic almost throughout: blood, sun, flesh and the cry, from the disciples’ comic quarrels and a queue at a brothel door to the raising of a rotting body, the crucifixion and an apocalypse
Scale
One man and the twelve, his mother and Magdalene, a village, a lake and a desert, Rome and the priests, and a city that falls in a dream
Governing Proposition
A carpenter in Nazareth who makes crosses for the Romans is called by a God he resists, gathers disciples, asks the strongest of them to betray him, and is crucified; on the cross an angel leads him into a whole ordinary life, of marriage, work, children and age, and he wakes on the cross to find he has refused it. The wager of the novel is that the last temptation of a vocation is not sin but the good life, that the divine is reached only by refusing that happiness at a cost others pay, and that a faith is made out of a life by those who have no need of the man who lived it.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
“Ο Τελευταίος Πειρασμός”
(The Last Temptation) The book begins outside its story. In a prologue in his own voice Kazantzakis sets out the dual nature of Christ as the struggle of every man between flesh and spirit, and offers the novel as an exercise in that struggle, one man’s spiritual exercise in the life of another. The prologue names the conflict before a single scene has shown it, and the narration that follows keeps naming it. The book is a novel that says what it means, and then sets out to make what it means felt.
Kazantzakis published it in Athens in 1955, in his last decade, after Βίος και Πολιτεία του Αλέξη Ζορμπά (Zorba the Greek, 1946) and Ο Χριστός Ξανασταυρώνεται (Christ Recrucified, 1948), and before Ο Φτωχούλης του Θεού (Saint Francis, 1956) and the posthumous Αναφορά στον Γκρέκο (Report to Greco, 1961). It is a finished book, seen into print by its author. After the prologue the life of Jesus is told in order, in the third person, from the carpenter’s shop in Nazareth to the cross. Its last chapters are a vision on the cross, told in the same manner as everything before them, in which Jesus lives out a whole ordinary life; then he wakes.
The persons are the Gospel’s, bent. Jesus is a carpenter tormented by a God who will not let him go. His mother, Mary, grieves that her son will not marry. Magdalene, the woman he refused, keeps a house at Magdala where men wait at the door. Judas is red-bearded and the strongest of the twelve; Peter is the weak heart; Matthew is the one who writes. Around them stand Rome and its centurion, the Zealots, the priests and the Sanhedrin, a lake with Zebedee’s boats on it, and the desert. Peter Bien’s English of 1960 is the standard version in English; the book scored is the Greek.
Movement II
The young carpenter makes crosses for the Romans. It is his trade. In the first chapters a Zealot is crucified on a cross he has made. From the first, then, the instrument of his end is the work of his hands, and every cross in the shop is a rehearsal of the one at the close. The book does not need to say so. It is there in the shavings on the floor.
The call comes as torment. God seizes him, will not release him, and he cries out, runs, and returns; and the book tells the seizure again, and again, through its first third. The restatement is the book’s great cost, and it is also its method. Each return of the torment adds to a weariness the reader comes to share, and the weariness will matter at the end, when a gentler voice offers him peace.
His refusal has a victim from the first. Magdalene, the woman he would not take, has fallen because he would not, and at Magdala men queue at her door. Between Nazareth and the ministry he goes among the ascetics, to a monastery in the desert, where the flight from the flesh is found as wanting as the flesh. And at the Jordan the Baptist waits, and the carpenter comes to him.
Movement III
The disciples gather: fishermen from Zebedee’s boats, Peter with his weak heart, Matthew with his pen, Judas with his red beard. They follow him, and they quarrel over places in the kingdom. The bickering is comic, and it is also the book’s measure: every man’s distance from the refusal Jesus is learning to make can be read in what he hopes to gain.
The ministry passes through the episodes the Gospels gave it, in their order, and the book’s form is here mostly a container: the scenes could be carried by another telling. What it adds is weight and smell. Galilee is wood and sweat, fish and light; the sacred stands among bodies. When Lazarus is raised, he comes back as a rotting body, and the miracle is dreadful. Magdalene’s house is warm. The narration often says what a scene has just shown, and the disciples’ quarrels return when their work is done.
Through all of it the law of the book holds. Spirit is reached only by refusing the flesh it loves, and every rest is a temptation: the brothel and the monastery, the disciples’ hopes and the mother’s grief, all are found wanting by it. The comedy and the theology obey the same law. Sometimes the narrator enforces it, where the events alone would not; but the range it covers, from a queue at a door to the end of the world, is wide, and it does not break.
Movement IV
Jesus asks Judas to betray him. The strongest of the twelve is given the hardest task, and accepts it. This is the book’s most consequential bend in the oldest story: the traitor of tradition becomes the disciple who obeys hardest, and the betrayal becomes a service done at the master’s word. Whether Judas is the most faithful of the twelve or only the most used, the book does not say.
Then Jerusalem: the priests and the Sanhedrin, Rome and its centurion, the occupation and the insurrection the Zealots want. The supper. The book does not soften crucifixion, which it treats as policy, the state’s instrument, the same object the carpenter made in his shop. The cross is at once a trade, a punishment and the centre of the sacred, and the novel holds those orders in one beam.
On the cross, at the height of the pain, the book appears to go on. An angel, a child, stands beside him and leads him down from it. The narration does not change its manner, and nothing marks the passage: the next chapter follows the last as every chapter has, and the reader goes with him.
Movement V
The life on offer is not a fall. It is a decent life. He marries Magdalene; after her, he makes a household with Mary and Martha; there are children, work, years, a village, the seasons. The angel who leads him into it is the tempter, and the temptation is goodness: to be an ordinary man, to grow old, to be loved. Because the vision is told in the same realist manner as the ministry, chapter after chapter and year after year, its reality is accepted, and its sweetness is felt rather than asserted.
The world goes on outside it. Paul comes preaching the crucified and risen Christ to the man who did not die, and tells him he has no use for the real one: a faith is made by its apostle out of a life it does not need. Then the old disciples come to the deathbed while Jerusalem burns, and Judas, who obeyed, accuses the master who did not. It is the book’s grandest scene, and the refused history breaks in on the good life at last.
He wakes on the cross. He has not come down, he has not betrayed, and the life was a temptation dreamed in a swoon. His last cry follows, and the narration takes the end as a beginning. Nothing in the book is settled by it: whether the vision was Satan’s deceit or God’s last trial, whether the cry is Christian victory or the ascent of spirit the prologue announced. What it has shown is the cost of a vocation, measured in the life it refuses, and paid by others.
Act III · The Twelve
The spine is required. The carpenter who makes crosses for the Romans, the call he resists, the ministry, Judas’s commission, the cross, the vision and the waking: take any one away and the argument breaks. Without the vision there is no last temptation; without the commission the vision has no accuser when the old disciples come. What fails the subtractive test is repetition, and it holds the axis lowest of the twelve. The torment of a God who will not let him go is restated through the first third; the wanderings rehearse a conflict the prologue has already named; the disciples’ quarrels return in scenes whose work was done once; the narration states what a scene has just shown. Something near a fifth, mostly in the first half, could go without losing a turn. It stands just above the cap because the long approach is the weight the vision must lift: weariness with the torment is what makes the offered peace plausible.
Score: 7.6 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds. The hardest temptation is not to sin but to be good in the ordinary way, to marry, work, raise children and grow old, and a man reaches the divine only by refusing that happiness, at a cost others pay: Magdalene, his mother, the children he does not have. The vision makes this felt rather than asserted. The life on offer is not a fall but a decent life, and the angel who leads him to it is the tempter. Beside it stands a second disclosure, sharp and lasting: that a faith is made by its scribes and its apostle out of a life they do not need, as Paul in the vision preaches the risen Christ to the man who did not die and has no use for him. Both truths hold without the author’s metaphysic. Where the metaphysic of spirit ascending through matter, announced in the prologue and enforced by the narration, takes their place, it costs: as creed it does not hold, and the women are its instruments.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Elevation is frequent and of both kinds. The dreadful: a Zealot crucified on a cross the young carpenter has made; Lazarus raised as a rotting body brought back; the crucifixion itself. The warm: Magdalene’s house; the Baptist at the Jordan; the slow sweetness of the vision, years passing in a village; and the end, the waking on the cross to find he has not betrayed, and the last cry, which the narration takes as a beginning rather than an end. Between them, the old disciples arriving at the deathbed as Jerusalem burns is the book’s grandest scene. What holds the axis here is the register. It is ecstatic almost throughout, blood, sun, flesh and the cry, so that elevation becomes the book’s resting pitch and loses height by constancy, and some of it is reached by rhetoric rather than by event.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Myth built, not evoked, and built by bending the oldest myth of the West at its points of stress. The carpenter makes the occupier’s crosses, so that the instrument of his end is his trade. Judas, red-bearded and the strongest of the twelve, is charged by Jesus to betray him, and the archetypal traitor becomes the one who obeys hardest. Magdalene, the woman he refused, falls because of his refusal, so that his calling has a victim from the first. The temptation in the wilderness is moved to the cross and made a temptation by goodness, with Satan as a child angel. And the vision is a myth built inside the old one: a whole life in the space of a swoon. Each bend carries the plot; none is allusion. The particular stays particular: the shop and its shavings, Zebedee’s boats, the queue at Magdala. Held off the very top because the figures lean to allegory, Judas the deed, Peter the weak heart, Matthew the scribe, and because the archetype arrives from the Gospels at full strength before the book bends it.
Score: 9.0 / 10
The inheritance is the Gospels and Orthodox Christology, and the modern novel of the human Jesus: Renan’s Vie de Jésus (1863); George Moore’s The Brook Kerith (1916), in which Jesus survives the cross and lives on as a shepherd; D. H. Lawrence’s The Man Who Died (1929), in which he survives and lies with a priestess of Isis. The human Christ, and a life after the cross with a woman, were not new in 1955. The turn is in placement. Kazantzakis keeps the Gospel outcome and makes the other life a temptation dreamed on the cross and refused, so that the heresy is lived inside an orthodox ending and the cross is chosen, not suffered; and he gives Judas the commission. The stake was real and paid: a novelist past seventy put his standing in his own church and country on the book. Held below the summit bar because the life with a woman belongs to Moore and Lawrence, and the obedient Judas had precedent, in Borges’s “Tres versiones de Judas” (1944) and the Gnostic tradition: the swerve is of arrangement more than of invention.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Change the form and the book stops knowing what it knows. The life is told in order, and it ends in a vision that the reader takes for the narrative until the waking. Because the vision is told in the same realist manner as the ministry, chapter after chapter and year after year, the reader lives the temptation as Jesus does, accepts its reality, and loses it with him on the cross. Announce the vision as a vision and the book no longer knows how plausible, and how good, the refused life is. The prologue, in the author’s voice, frames the whole as one man’s spiritual exercise, so that the form is offered to the reader as the struggle it describes. Held where it is because before the vision the form is mostly a container: a sequence of Gospel episodes retold in an order the Gospels gave, whose shape another telling could carry. The instrument works fully in the last tenth, and the rest of the book is built to make it work.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Evidence rather than promise: seventy years of argument have not closed the book. Theologians have read it both as heresy and as a deep orthodoxy of kenosis, a Christ who empties himself and must choose the cross as a man. The critics of Kazantzakis, Peter Bien chief among them in English, have read it through Bergson, Nietzsche and Ασκητική (The Saviors of God, 1927). And the text keeps its questions open: whether the vision is Satan’s deceit or God’s last trial; whether Judas is the most faithful of the twelve or simply used; whether the final cry is Christian victory or the author’s ascent of spirit. Held a step down because the author answers much himself, in the prologue and in narration that names the struggle as it happens; because the criticism is concentrated in a narrow field, and much of the controversy rereads the scandal more than the text; and because the book yields its force on the first reading more than on return.
Score: 8.2 / 10
The field is Greek prose fiction of the twentieth century and, as the book entered it in translation, the European novel of its decade, with the novel of Christ as the narrower field. The intrinsic force is real and bounded: the book made the inner life of a Christ tempted not by evil but by happiness the substance of a novel, written from a sensibility formed by Nietzsche, Bergson and Orthodox monasticism. It did not reorganise how novels are made, and Greek fiction after it largely went other ways; that holds the axis below the summit bar. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: with Zorba the book carried the modern Greek novel to readers abroad, and its premise and its figure of a Christ tempted by happiness were taken whole by Martin Scorsese’s film of 1988. Much of its fame runs through that film and through the scandals around the book and the film, which are presence rather than influence; the line often drawn to later novels of Jesus, Saramago’s and Mailer’s, is asserted more than documented and is not counted.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Weighed on form, then presence, then fabric. Form: the text survives whole, as its author published it in 1955; nothing is lost or assembled, and there is nothing to charge. Presence: seventy-one years of continuous print in Greek and, since 1960, in Bien’s English, with translation into many languages; steady reading in Greece, where Kazantzakis is a national author; renewed reading abroad after 1988. Fabric: its surface is not fixed to the 1950s, since its matter is first-century Galilee and a perennial theology. Held at the foot of the figure its span can show, not above it: part of its presence is borrowed from scandal and from the film, and fame is presence, not proof; outside Greece it is read more than taught; and its standing among Kazantzakis’s books rests partly on its notoriety.
Score: 9.0 / 10
Judged on Kazantzakis’s Greek as far as it can be judged here. Its sound, and its demotic vocabulary, are beyond this reading and are neither credited nor charged; what is judged survives any translation. The command of the set scene is strong: the Zealot’s crucifixion in Nazareth, Magdala, the Baptist, the monastery in the desert, the supper, the cross. Galilee is rendered through the senses, sweat, wood, fish and light, so that the sacred stands in a world of bodies. The making is load-bearing in the vision, which must be told without a seam, and is. Charged, and in the design rather than in any rendering: the characters speak in one voice, the author’s; the narration explains what scenes have shown; the exclamatory pitch flattens contrast; and the construction before the vision is episodic.
Score: 7.8 / 10
One law governs the book: the divine is achieved in struggle, by spirit refusing the flesh it loves, and every rest is a temptation. Take the two most distant elements: the disciples’ comic bickering over places in the kingdom, and the crucifixion. Both measure how far each man is from that refusal. The queue at Magdalene’s door and the desert monastery are flesh and the ascetic flight from it, both found wanting. The vision’s domestic years and Jerusalem burning are the good life and the history it ignores. The range is wide, from comedy and the brothel to theology and apocalypse, and it holds under the one law. Charged: the law is sometimes enforced by the narrator rather than borne by events; and the book’s ironic view of scripture, a gospel made by its writer and a Christ made by his apostle, sits uneasily beside its own visionary claim, a tension between demystifying and mystic registers that the book does not resolve.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Held, through one man, and integrated rather than listed. Consciousness: Jesus’s torment and Judas’s, and the long interior of the vision. The family: Mary his mother and her grief that her son will not marry, Zebedee’s household, the vision’s marriage and children. Labour: the carpenter’s bench, the fishermen’s boats. The state: Rome and its centurion, the Zealots, the priests and the Sanhedrin, crucifixion as policy. History: occupation and insurrection, and the fall of Jerusalem in the vision. The sacred: the axis of the whole. The natural order: the desert, the lake, the seasons the vision passes through. The joining is the achievement: the cross is at once a trade, a state’s instrument and the centre of the sacred. What holds the axis here is that the social and political orders are figures in the spiritual drama more than agents in their own right, and much of the world beyond Jesus passes as allegory.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.4 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Archetypal Deep at 9.0 and The Imperishable at 9.0, then The Unconcealment at 8.6. A myth built by bending the Passion at its points of stress, the cross-maker, the commissioned Judas, the temptation by goodness and a life lived in a swoon, each bend carrying the plot; seventy-one years of continuous reading of a text that survives whole; and a disclosure that holds, that the last temptation of a vocation is the good life, and that faiths are made by those who do not need their founder.
Limiting Dimension
The Inevitable at 7.6, held by repetition: a spine in which every station is required, carried through a first half that restates the torment, rehearses the conflict the prologue named and explains what its scenes have shown. Next above it, The Made at 7.8: strong set scenes and a vision told without a seam, against characters who speak in one voice and a construction that is episodic before the vision. The sound of Kazantzakis’s Greek is beyond this reading, and is neither credited nor charged.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.6 against a threshold of 7.5, by a tenth. The Coherence Floor clears: The Inner Law at 8.5, The Living Form at 8.4, The Made at 7.8, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Archetypal Deep at 9.0, The Imperishable at 9.0 and The Unconcealment at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Swerve at 8.4 falls a tenth short, and Pressure on Tradition at 8.0 falls half a point short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 7.6, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.3. Four of the five summit conditions are met; the summit is withheld on the Epochal Gate, and the aggregate, at 8.4, stands below it as well.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Nikos Kazantzakis’s Ο Τελευταίος Πειρασμός (O Teleftaios Peirasmos, literally The Last Temptation, known in English as The Last Temptation of Christ), scored as the novel as published in Athens in 1955, in its prologue and chapters as Kazantzakis saw it into print. It is a finished book, published in its author’s lifetime; nothing is assembled. Every axis is judged on the Greek original. No text, Greek or English, was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no sentence of the novel is quoted. Greek is given only for titles. Passages are given in sense, and events are paraphrased. Translation · Peter A. Bien’s The Last Temptation of Christ (Simon and Schuster, New York, 1960), the standard English version and the one best known to this reading, read beside for sense. It is not quoted, and nothing in it is charged to the novel. The sound of Kazantzakis’s Greek and the texture of its vocabulary are beyond this reading, and are neither credited nor charged. Martin Scorsese’s film of 1988 is a separate work with its own page and is not the object here. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them the years of composition, the number of chapters and any correspondence between that number and the years of the life, the order in which the Greek edition and the first translation appeared, the count of translations, the particulars of the book’s demotic and regional vocabulary, Magdalene’s kinship to Jesus, the exact words of the last cry, and the scene in which Matthew’s gospel is shown being written. The book’s condemnation by the Roman Index and by the hierarchy of the Church of Greece is widely reported; its date and form are not fixed here.