The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Jorge Luis Borges · El hacedor · a book of prose pieces and poems, under a dedication to Leopoldo Lugones, with the brief texts of “Museo” and an epilogue · Emecé, Buenos Aires, 1960 · scored on Borges’s Spanish, read from knowledge, with Dreamtigers (prose translated by Mildred Boyer, poems by Harold Morland, 1964) and Andrew Hurley’s version of the prose (1998) beside it for sense; no text in hand, Spanish quoted only where its words are certain, and no translation quoted
Mode
The miscellany: parable, false citation, prose poem and lyric in fixed forms, turned on the maker and what he makes
Mythos
The archetypes of making: the blind Homer, Shakespeare as everyone and no one, Cervantes and his dreamer, Dante and his leopard, the poet beheaded for his poem, the tiger that language cannot reach; beside them Argentine myth, the gaucho and the grandfathers’ wars
Phase
Pieces from the 1930s to 1960, gathered in the years Borges’s sight failed; each piece its own time, from Homer’s war and Caesar’s death to the Argentina of Perón
Presentation
A dedication, some two dozen prose pieces, most under a page, some thirty poems, the brief texts of “Museo”, and an epilogue; the whole well under a hundred pages
Register
Cool and grave: a compressed, Latinate prose exact in its names and numbers, and verse in hendecasyllables, sonnets and rhymed quatrains
Scale
A map the size of an empire, and one page that does not know who writes it
Governing Proposition
A book of parables, false citations, prose poems and poems in fixed forms, most of them under a page, gives the blind Homer the war that will be his poem, Shakespeare a God who is no one either, Dante’s leopard a word in a poem, and a writer named Borges a double to whom things happen; in its epilogue a man sets out to draw the world and finds he has drawn his own face. The wager of the book is that the one who makes is not the one who lives, that what is made outlasts its maker and takes his place, and that a disordered gathering of brief pieces can say this as a self-portrait.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The book begins with a meeting that did not happen. In the dedication Borges imagines giving the book to Leopoldo Lugones in the library, and then remembers that Lugones is dead; he had killed himself in 1938. The gift is made to a dead man, and the book is offered to the poet whose Modernista lyric it inherits and leaves.
El hacedor was published by Emecé in Buenos Aires in 1960, in Borges’s sixty-first year, five years after his appointment as director of the Biblioteca Nacional, in the years his sight failed. Its contents run from pieces first printed in the 1930s to pieces written for the book. The order is fixed: the dedication; some two dozen prose pieces, most under a page and the longest a few pages; some thirty poems, among them sonnets, hendecasyllabic blank verse and longer pieces; “Museo”, a handful of brief texts given as quotations from sources real and imaginary; and the epilogue. The whole is well under a hundred pages.
The epilogue names what the book is: “colecticia y desordenada silva de varia lección”
a miscellaneous and disordered silva de varia lección, after the Silva de varia lección of Pero Mexía. Borges calls it the most personal of his books. It is scored as he gathered it, prose, poems, “Museo” and epilogue together, as one book. In English it is best known as Dreamtigers, the title of one of its pieces, which stands in English in the Spanish book; the version of 1964, the prose translated by Mildred Boyer and the poems by Harold Morland, keeps the book whole, and Andrew Hurley’s The Maker (1998) gives the prose alone.
Movement II
“El hacedor”, the piece that gives the book its title, is Homer going blind. As his sight goes he descends into memory, and finds there a girl and a dagger, and in them the war that will be his poem. Blindness is not the loss of the poem but its condition. The book opens its prose on a blind maker, in the years its own author’s sight failed.
The other makers follow. In “Inferno, I, 32” God tells Dante’s leopard, in its captivity, that its captivity will furnish a word in a poem: whether the poem redeems the creature it uses is left open. In the “Parábola del palacio” a poet makes a poem that contains the palace whole, and is beheaded for it. In the parable of Cervantes and Quixote the dreamer and the dream end in one oblivion.
“Dreamtigers” and, among the poems, “El otro tigre” pursue the tiger, and the tiger is made a figure for what language cannot reach. The devices are those of Ficciones and El Aleph, the false citation, the mirror, the double, here at their briefest, and the archetypes they serve are the archetypes of making. Each holds a page, and each is built rather than evoked.
Movement III
“Borges y yo” is under a page. A writer sets himself beside the other one, the Borges of the public name: “Al otro, a Borges, es a quien le ocurren las cosas”
it is to the other one, Borges, that things happen. The piece ends: “No sé cuál de los dos escribe esta página”
I do not know which of the two of us is writing this page. A writer famous for impersonal fictions had put his own name into the book, and made confession through the mask of the parable. The page has since become the standard text on the author divided from his name.
“Everything and nothing” tells the same of Shakespeare: “Nadie hubo en él”
there was no one in him. Shakespeare is everyone and no one, and when at the end he speaks to God, God’s voice answers from a whirlwind, “Yo tampoco soy”
I too am not. The piece goes from a man with no one in him to the voice of God in five paragraphs.
In “Paradiso, XXXI, 108” the face of Christ is lost, and may lurk in every mirror. “La trama” builds the pattern of Caesar’s death into a gaucho’s, and gives the gaucho, for “Tu quoque”, the words “¡Pero, che!”: history repeats a form. “Ragnarök” and “El simulacro”, of Perón and Eva and a man in mourning, make myth of Argentine matter.
Movement IV
Borges returned to verse in this book, in fixed forms, at the height of his fame as a writer of prose, and his work after it follows from the turn. “Poema de los dones” opens on his blindness and refuses to grieve it:
“Nadie rebaje a lágrima o reproche / esta declaración de la maestría / de Dios, que con magnífica ironía / me dio a la vez los libros y la noche”
Let no one lower to tears or reproach this declaration of the mastery of God, who with magnificent irony gave me at once the books and the night.
The command is of the hendecasyllable and the rhymed quatrain, and the refrain of ironies is turned without strain. “Ajedrez” is two sonnets. “Arte poética” and “Límites” are unrhymed hendecasyllables, and “Arte poética” sets the art of poetry beside “Mirar el río hecho de tiempo y agua”
to look at the river made of time and water. “Alusión a la muerte del coronel Francisco Borges” gives the poet’s grandfather riding to his death in 1874, and “Los Borges” the family behind him.
Not every poem is of that order. Some of the occasional pieces, among them elegies and an ode for 1960, read as the work of a public poet doing his duty, correct and idle, and “Ajedrez” and “El reloj de arena” would mean what they mean in any other collection. A third of the book is of the first rank, and the rest is competent. Among the prose, “Las uñas”, “Un problema” and “Diálogo sobre un diálogo” could leave without loss.
Movement V
“Museo” gathers brief texts given as quotations. “Del rigor en la ciencia” is a single paragraph ascribed to Suárez Miranda, Viajes de varones prudentes, 1658, and set in the capitals of such a book, “Desmesurados Mapas”: an empire’s cartographers make a map the size of the empire, and its tatters survive in the deserts of the West. At length it would refute itself; as a paragraph it is complete.
The map has been read far beyond literature. Baudrillard opens Simulacres et simulation (1981) with it, Eco answered it with an essay on the impossible map at one to one, and it entered cartography and the theory of simulation. “Borges y yo” became the model for a family of texts on the divided self, and the Spanish American minificción, Monterroso and those after him, names these brief pieces among its sources. In English the book is split, its prose in Hurley’s Collected Fictions and its poems in the Selected Poems, and its pieces are read more often than the book.
The epilogue closes it. A man sets out to draw the world, and finds that “ese paciente laberinto de líneas traza la imagen de su cara”
that patient labyrinth of lines traces the image of his face. The disorder of the book is offered as a self-portrait, announced at the end rather than built through the order. One law holds the whole, from Homer to the colonel and from the map to the page that does not know who writes it: what is made outlasts its makers and becomes the form in which they are remembered, or replaces them.
Act III · The Twelve
The best pieces could lose nothing. “Del rigor en la ciencia” is a single paragraph in which no clause could be cut, and “Borges y yo” turns on its last sentence, “No sé cuál de los dos escribe esta página” (I do not know which of the two of us is writing this page). But the unit is the book, and the book declares its own assembly: the epilogue calls it “colecticia y desordenada”. Several pieces could leave without loss: “Las uñas”, “Un problema”, “Diálogo sobre un diálogo”, and among the poems some of the occasional elegies and the ode for 1960, which read as a public poet doing his duty. Perhaps two thirds of the contents pass the subtractive test. The axis stays well above the floor because the book’s centre, the maker unknown to himself, is in nearly every piece.
Score: 7.9 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: the one who makes is not the one who lives, and the made outlasts and absorbs its maker, who finds at the end that his labour has drawn his own face. “Borges y yo” says it of a writer and his public name: “Al otro, a Borges, es a quien le ocurren las cosas” (it is to the other one, Borges, that things happen). “Everything and nothing” says it of Shakespeare, in whom there was no one, and of God, who answers that He too is not. The epilogue closes it. “Poema de los dones” discloses blindness without self-pity, as an irony of gift. Held off the top because the condition disclosed is the writer’s more than the human condition at large, though the book finds it too in a blind poet, a captive and a man in mourning.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The book rises often for its length, in a cool and grave register. In “El hacedor” the blind Homer descends into memory and finds a girl, a dagger and the war that will be his poem. “Everything and nothing” goes from a man with no one in him to God’s voice from a whirlwind in five paragraphs. “Paradiso, XXXI, 108” turns on the lost face of Christ, which may lurk in every mirror. “Poema de los dones” rises on a declaration of the mastery of God, who with magnificent irony gave the poet at once the books and the night, and “Arte poética” rises again on the river made of time and water. Held below the top because the elevation is brief by nature, and a third of the book does not attempt it.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Myth is built, in miniature. The book’s figures are the archetypes of making: Homer, whose blindness is the condition of the poem; Shakespeare as everyone and no one; Cervantes and Quixote, the dreamer and the dream ending in one oblivion; Dante’s leopard, told by God that its captivity will furnish a word in a poem; the poet whose poem contains the palace whole, and who is beheaded for it. The tiger of “Dreamtigers” and “El otro tigre” is made a figure for what language cannot reach. “La trama” builds the pattern of Caesar’s death into a gaucho’s, so that history is seen to repeat a form, and “Ragnarök” and “El simulacro” make myth of Argentine matter. The structures are load-bearing, but each holds a page: held for scale, not depth.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The inheritance is plain and named: the silva de varia lección of Pero Mexía, the commonplace book, the parable as Kafka had made it, the Modernista lyric of Lugones, to whom the book is offered, and Borges’s own Ficciones and El Aleph, whose devices, the false citation, the mirror and the double, are here at their briefest. The turn is in two moves. A writer famous for impersonal fictions put his own name, blindness and family into the book, and made confession through the mask of the parable; “Borges y yo” is the hinge. And he returned to verse in fixed forms at the height of his fame in prose, which set the course of his later work. The stake was real but bounded: a gathering of brief pieces risked being taken for a sweeping of the workshop. The book departs from his own manner more than from the tradition.
Score: 8.1 / 10
Where the form is the knowledge, it is entirely so. “Del rigor en la ciencia” must be a paragraph presented as a citation, because its subject is the map that grows to the size of what it maps; at length it would refute itself. “Borges y yo” must be under a page, because it is a page that does not know who writes it. The epilogue turns the miscellany into the drawing that becomes a face, and offers the book’s disorder as a self-portrait: a real formal idea, and it lifts the unit. Held down because the idea is announced at the end rather than built through the order, and much of the verse would mean what it means in any other collection: “Ajedrez” and “El reloj de arena” lose nothing read alone.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Evidence rather than promise, and the evidence is concentrated. “Del rigor en la ciencia” has been read by semioticians and philosophers of representation: Baudrillard opens Simulacres et simulation (1981) with it, and Eco answered it with an essay on the impossible map at one to one. “Borges y yo” is the standard text on the author divided from his name, read in theory after Barthes and Foucault on the author. “Everything and nothing” keeps returning in Shakespeare criticism and in theology, and the parables of Dante leave open whether the poem redeems the creature it uses. Held where it is because the depth lies in a handful of pages: the book as a book is less returned to than its pieces.
Score: 8.6 / 10
The field is literature in Spanish in the mid twentieth century and, through translation, the literature of the West. The intrinsic force is real: the book made the very short prose piece, the parable, the false citation and the prose poem a single instrument capable of philosophical weight, and joined it to a classical lyric in one volume. That is an enlargement, not the reorganisation Ficciones had made some fifteen years before, and much of its force is the earlier book’s applied small. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the map fable entered philosophy, cartography and the theory of simulation; “Borges y yo” became the model for a whole family of texts on the divided self; and the Spanish American minificción, Monterroso and those after him, names Borges’s brief pieces among its sources.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Weighed on form, then presence, then fabric, over sixty-six years. Form and fabric take no charge: the text survives whole, as Borges left it, and has been in print in Spanish throughout. Presence is real and continuous: the book is taught wherever Borges is, translated with his complete works, and two of its pieces are among the most anthologised short texts of the century, read as from El hacedor, by that name. The charge is that presence belongs more to the pieces than to the book. In English the unit is split, the prose carried in Hurley’s Collected Fictions and the poems in the Selected Poems, and few readers meet the book as a book. That is not the charge of a neglected text, and it is taken at a step.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Judged on Borges’s Spanish. The prose is his most compressed: adjectival, Latinate in its syntax, exact in its numbers and names, with the false erudition carried at the level of the clause, down to the capitals of a seventeenth century book, “Desmesurados Mapas”. The verse returns to fixed forms with command: the hendecasyllables and rhymed quatrains of “Poema de los dones”, whose refrain of ironies turns without strain; the two sonnets of “Ajedrez”; the unrhymed hendecasyllables of “Arte poética” and “Límites”. In the brief prose a single adjective or date carries the turn. Charged for a sameness of device across the prose, the mirror, the labyrinth, the inversion in the last line, and for occasional poems in which the craft is correct and idle. The sound of the verse beyond what is known with certainty is neither credited nor charged.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: “Del rigor en la ciencia”, a mock citation about an empire’s cartographers, and “Alusión a la muerte del coronel Francisco Borges”, for the poet’s grandfather riding to his death in 1874. One law governs both: what is made outlasts its makers and becomes the form in which they are remembered, or replaces them. The map survives in tatters in the deserts of the West; the colonel survives as verse. The same law holds Homer and the blind librarian, Shakespeare and God, Caesar and the gaucho, across parable, false document, metaphysical sonnet, family elegy and political fable. Charged for the few pieces outside the law, “Las uñas” among them, and because a miscellany coheres by temperament as much as by design.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Judged on what a short book of brief pieces holds, not charged for being short. Consciousness, fully: the self divided from its name, the blind man’s memory. Literature and its making, the book’s ground. The sacred: God’s answer to Shakespeare, Christ’s lost face, the “Argumentum ornithologicum”, the thief of “Lucas XXIII”. History: Rosas and Quiroga in the “Diálogo de muertos”, the grandfathers’ wars, Perón and Eva in “El simulacro”, the Saxon pagans of “El testigo”, Rome in “La trama”. The family, in “Los Borges” and the elegies; the body, in blindness and the nails. What holds the axis at the foot of the twelve is what is missing or thin, labour, the city as lived, the state except as myth, and love, and that each order is held for a page, joined by idea rather than by structure.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.4 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Made at 8.9, then The Imperishable at 8.7. Borges’s most compressed Spanish prose, exact in its names and numbers, with a single adjective or date carrying the turn, joined to a return to fixed verse in the hendecasyllables and quatrains of “Poema de los dones” and the sonnets of “Ajedrez”; and a text that survives whole and in print, two of whose pieces are among the most anthologised short texts of the century.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 7.3: consciousness, the making of literature, the sacred, history, the family and the body are touched by one theme, each for a page, joined by idea rather than structure, with labour, the city as lived, the state except as myth, and love missing or thin. Next above it, The Inevitable at 7.9: pieces in which no clause could be cut, in a book that calls itself miscellaneous and disordered, about a third of whose contents could leave without loss.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.9 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Made at 8.9, The Inner Law at 8.5, The Living Form at 8.3, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 8.7 clears the bar of 8.5, and The Unconcealment and The Archetypal Deep clear it at 8.6, but Pressure on Tradition at 8.4 and The Swerve at 8.1 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 7.9, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.3.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Jorge Luis Borges’s El hacedor, Emecé, Buenos Aires, 1960, scored as one book as it is read: the dedication “A Leopoldo Lugones”, the prose pieces, the poems, the section “Museo” and the epilogue, in that order, in the text Borges kept in his Obras completas (Emecé, 1974). Pieces weighed most: the dedication, “El hacedor”, “Dreamtigers”, “Borges y yo”, “Everything and nothing”, “Parábola del palacio”, “Paradiso, XXXI, 108”, “Inferno, I, 32”, “La trama”, “El simulacro”, “Ragnarök”, “Poema de los dones”, “Arte poética”, “Ajedrez”, “El otro tigre”, “Límites”, “Del rigor en la ciencia” and the epilogue. The occasional poems are known in outline and are not argued closely. Every axis is judged on Borges’s Spanish. No text, Spanish or English, was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. Spanish is quoted only where its words are certain: the epilogue’s description of the book and its last image, the two sentences of “Borges y yo”, the two of “Everything and nothing”, the first quatrain of “Poema de los dones”, the line of “Arte poética”, the gaucho’s words in “La trama” and the capitals of “Del rigor en la ciencia”; each is followed by its sense in plain words, unquoted, and events are paraphrased. Translation · Dreamtigers (University of Texas Press, 1964), the prose translated by Mildred Boyer and the poems by Harold Morland, read beside for sense because it keeps the book whole; Andrew Hurley’s The Maker, in Collected Fictions (1998), which gives the prose only, read beside it as the closer version for sense. No translation is quoted, and none is charged to the book. The sound of Borges’s verse beyond the lines known with certainty is neither credited nor charged. Facts that could not be verified, among them how the text of the Obras completas differs from the first edition and which pieces entered later printings, the date of the epilogue beyond its year, an exact count of pages, and the later reception of the occasional poems, are not given. Citations are by piece.