The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Caspar David Friedrich · Der Mönch am Meer, the German title by which the canvas is known · oil on canvas, about 110 by 171.5 cm · one small figure in a dark habit on a pale strip of shore, a band of dark sea, and a sky over the rest of the field · painted 1808 to 1810, shown at the Berlin Academy in the autumn of 1810 · Alte Nationalgalerie, Berlin (Staatliche Museen zu Berlin) · the work scored is the single canvas, its pendant context
Mode
Landscape emptied to three horizontal bands and one figure; no repoussoir, no coulisse, no middle ground, the horizon unbroken from edge to edge
Mythos
The figure at the edge of the world: the shore as threshold between land and water, the known and the boundless; the contemplative alone before God
Phase
One moment of weather over a Baltic shore; painted 1808 to 1810, shown in Berlin in 1810 beside its pendant
Presentation
Oil on a canvas of about 110 by 171.5 cm, wider than high; the sky built in thin layered glazes, the sea held near black, the shore summary; one figure, a few gulls, no ship, no tree, no building
Register
Cold, single and held: the sublime of magnitude and void, desolation and awe, with no consolation offered and none refused
Scale
One man on one shore before one sea and one sky, under two square metres
Governing Proposition
On a pale strip of shore at the bottom of a wide canvas a monk in a dark habit stands with his back to us, a few centimetres tall, left of centre; beyond him a band of sea so dark it is nearly black runs from edge to edge, and above it a sky climbs from darkness through grey and mist to a pale opening high up. There is no ship, no tree, no building, nothing at the sides to stand behind. The wager of the canvas is that a landscape can be made of almost nothing, three bands and one upright, and that a person set before the boundless with nothing between can put the viewer in the same place, with no edge to hide behind and no way out of the picture but up.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The canvas is oil, about 110 by 171.5 centimetres, painted from 1808 to 1810, and it hangs in the Alte Nationalgalerie in Berlin. It is known by its German title, Der Mönch am Meer. The format is wide, about one and a half times as broad as it is high, and the picture area is close to two square metres. The work scored is this one canvas. Its pendant, The Abbey in the Oakwood, was shown with it at the Berlin Academy exhibition in the autumn of 1810 and hangs beside it now; it supplies a burial, a ruin and a procession that the Monk does not hold, and it is context, not credited here.
What it shows takes a sentence. At the bottom of the field lies a pale strip of dune or shore; above it a narrow band of sea so dark that it is nearly black; above that, sky, which takes the greater part of the canvas. The horizon runs from edge to edge without a break. On the shore, left of centre, stands one figure, a monk in a dark habit, seen from behind and a few centimetres tall at the canvas’s scale. A few gulls wheel over the shore. There is no ship, no tree, no building, and nothing at either side to stand behind.
The picture is made by removal, and what remains resists removal almost entirely. Take the monk and the canvas becomes a weather study, a sea with no one to face it. Take the shore and he has nowhere to stand, and the viewer has no ground. Take the dark sea and the sky has no depth to fall into. The scale is compelled with them: smaller, the emptiness would be a vignette; much larger, a decoration. Only the gulls and the exact disposition of the cloud could be otherwise, and the gulls give the air its only scale and its only motion. Accounts of the picture’s making hold that ships in an earlier state were painted out; that is not established here, and nothing on this page rests on it.
Movement II
The inheritance is the composed landscape and the marine as Claude and the Dutch had fixed them. A tree or rock at the side, the repoussoir, gives the viewer an edge to stand behind; coulisses step back into depth; a middle ground carries the eye to a framed horizon; ships give the sea its measure. The canvas keeps none of it. There is no repoussoir, no coulisse, no middle ground, nothing at the sides, and the horizon is run unbroken from one edge to the other. A landscape is made of three bands and one small figure, and the field at its centre is nearly empty. No painting in the European tradition before it had dared that emptiness at this size.
One law governs the field. Everything in it is a band or a point against a band: horizontal extension against a single upright, light above against dark at the horizon. The gulls are points of that kind and the monk is the largest of them. Take the two most distant things on the canvas, the pale opening high in the sky and the small dark figure on the light shore at the bottom, and they obey the same rule. Nothing is drawn by another law; there is no ornament, no anecdote, no detail rendered for its own sake. The range runs from the near black sea to the pale sky, from the void to the one human. The territory is deliberately small, and the law governs it completely.
The form is the knowledge. The missing repoussoir leaves the viewer no edge to stand behind, and the unbroken horizon means the eye cannot leave the picture by a side; the only way out is up. The proportion of sky to land is the proportion of the unknown to the known. The figure’s size is the argument: double it and he is a figure in a landscape; halve it and he is lost, and there is no one to stand with. The wide format against the one upright is the meeting of a person and the infinite. Put the same subject in another form and what the picture knows, that a person is exposed to the boundless with nothing to hold, goes with it.
Movement III
On 13 October 1810 the Berliner Abendblätter printed a text under the title “Empfindungen vor Friedrichs Seelandschaft”
“Feelings before Friedrich’s seascape”. It was drafted by Brentano and Arnim and recast by Kleist, and it is the first account of a painting that will not let the viewer look away. Kleist wrote that to look at the picture is “als ob einem die Augenlider weggeschnitten wären”
“as if one’s eyelids had been cut away”. The text says, in effect, that the picture has no foreground but its frame.
Kleist’s response is evidence that the canvas was seen at once as a disclosure about the viewer and not only about the monk. What can be stated is this: a human being stands before the boundless with nothing between, no church, no ship, no foreground, no frame of convention, and the picture puts the one who looks in the same place. The monk, the figure of an order that exists to mediate between man and God, stands at the end of the land with his back to us, with no rite and no text, only the sky. The religious relation is shown as a solitary, unmediated exposure, and the viewer is made to share it. That was new, and it holds.
It is held short of the highest disclosure on two counts. Much of what the canvas gives is a state, desolation, awe and suspension, and a state ranks below a meaning. And the picture will not say what the sky is: whether a presence or an absence, whether this is faith or its loss. The disclosure is half suspended, and The Unconcealment stands at 8.3 for that. The archetype is built more firmly than the meaning is stated. The shore is the threshold between land and water, the known and the boundless, life and what lies beyond it; the three bands are its structure; and the monk, the contemplative alone before God, stands on the last of the land, his habit the one dark upright against the horizontals.
Movement IV
The sublime of the canvas is the cold sublime of magnitude and void, Kant’s mathematical sublime made a picture. The sky rises from the dark sea in a gradation from near black at the horizon through grey and mist to a pale clearing high up, and the eye climbs the whole canvas without finding a place to rest. The monk’s smallness against it is the measure of terror. The register is single and held across the whole field. There is one elevation, total and unbroken, and no second summit within it; it is one sublime instant, not a work that rises again and again, and that is both its form and the reason The Sublime stands at 8.8 and not higher.
The making bears the load in the sky. The gradation is built in thin layered glazes, so that the air reads as depth without a single drawn form, and the transitions are the picture. The sea is held at the edge of darkness without going dead. The figure is laid in with economy and placed exactly. The craft is careful, slow and glaze-built rather than virtuoso; no passage of drawing or touch carries the work as the stroke carries a Van Gogh sky. Its costs are visible. The surface, worked and reworked over two years, carries the marks of the labour; the dune and shore are summary; and parts of the sky read as atmosphere won by labour more than by the form.
The fabric has aged with the technique. The surface is cracked and darkened, the glazes have changed, and the sky’s first tone is in part a matter of inference; the restoration of the canvas and its pendant together removed yellowed varnish and recovered much of it. The form has come through whole: the field, the figure and the three bands are all legible, and the darkening of the glazes is partly the method’s own. The Rothko Chapel, at 8.6, gives up the figure and the meaning that the Monk keeps and gains an environment and a scale the Monk does not have; the two stand level. Turner’s The Fighting Temeraire and Rain, Steam and Speed stand at 8.6 as well: both are surer in the making, at 8.9 on The Made, and neither swerves as far from the inherited marine.
Movement V
The stake was public. The canvas was shown at the Berlin Academy in 1810, where the absence of the expected structure was the talk around it, and the risk was taken in the open. It was not paid for. King Friedrich Wilhelm III bought the canvas and its pendant, and the painter was elected to the Academy. The picture entered the Prussian royal collection and passed to the national collection in Berlin; it has never been dispersed, and it came through the Second World War. The painter’s own later Wanderer above the Sea of Fog, at 8.4, gathers the same device in a fuller and more balanced composition; this canvas is where the device first emptied the world.
The first reach was literary and immediate: the Abendblätter text, a founding document of Romantic response to painting. In painting the following was narrow, Dahl, Carus, Kersting and a circle in Dresden, and after the painter’s death in 1840 his name fell into neglect for some sixty years, until the Berlin Centenary exhibition of 1906 and the rereadings after it. In 1975 Robert Rosenblum’s Modern Painting and the Northern Romantic Tradition: Friedrich to Rothko made this canvas the ancestor of the field painting of Rothko and Newman. That line is a critic’s genealogy rather than a documented debt, and the reach is delayed; Pressure on Tradition stands at 8.6 for force that is high and reach that came late and was in part constructed.
The questions stay open after two centuries: devout picture or picture of God’s absence; the monk as the painter or not, looking out or meditating with head bowed; whether the pendant must be read with it, and in which order; whether this is the first abstract landscape or a theological picture read backward through modernism. What is held is narrow: the natural order, the boundless sky, the sacred in the monk and what he faces, and a consciousness that is the work’s medium. There is no family, no labour, no city, no state, no history, and The Encompassed stands at 6.5 for that. One man stands on the last of the land with nothing between him and the sky, and the viewer stands there with him.
Act III · The Twelve
The picture is made by removal, and what is left resists removal almost entirely. Take the monk and the canvas becomes a weather study, a sea with no one to face it. Take the strip of shore and he has nowhere to stand and the viewer no ground. Take the dark band of sea and the sky has no depth to fall into: it is that band, nearly black, that makes the sky’s height felt. The scale is compelled: smaller, the emptiness would be a vignette; much larger, a decoration. The test bites in one place, the gulls, which could go though they give the only scale of the air and its only motion. They and the exact disposition of the cloud are permitted rather than required.
Score: 8.8 / 10
What can be stated: a human being stands before the boundless with nothing between, no church, no ship, no foreground, no frame of convention, and the picture puts the viewer in the same place. The monk, whose order exists to mediate between man and God, stands at the end of the land with no rite and no text, only the sky. That proposition holds and was new: the religious relation as solitary, unmediated exposure, shared by the one who looks. Held below the bar on two counts. Much of what the canvas gives is a state, desolation, awe and suspension, which ranks below a meaning. And whether the sky is a presence or an absence, faith or its loss, the picture does not decide.
Score: 8.3 / 10
The sublime is the subject, and it is the cold sublime of magnitude and void, Kant’s mathematical sublime made a picture. Height is at the top of the medium. The sky rises from the dark sea in a gradation from near black at the horizon through grey and mist to a pale clearing high up, so that the eye climbs the whole canvas without finding a resting point, and the monk’s smallness against it is the measure of terror. The register is single and held across the whole field. What keeps the axis below the top is frequency: there is one elevation, total and unbroken, and no second summit within the picture. It is one sublime instant, not a work that rises again and again.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The archetypes are present and some are built. The figure at the edge of the world, the shore as the threshold between the known and the boundless, between land and water, life and what lies beyond it: the composition is that threshold, the three bands are its structure, and the figure stands on the last of the land. The monk is the contemplative, the soul alone before God, his black habit the one dark upright against the horizontals. That much bears load, and the particular stays particular: a Baltic shore, a real sea and weather. What holds the axis below the gate is that the myth is one figure and one gesture, and its deeper readings, the monk as the painter himself, the pendant’s burial completing the life, are brought from outside the canvas.
Score: 8.4 / 10
The inheritance is the composed landscape and the marine as Claude and the Dutch fixed them: a repoussoir at the side, coulisses stepping back, a middle ground, ships to measure the sea, a framed horizon. The departure is total. There is no repoussoir, no coulisse, no middle ground, nothing at the sides; the horizon runs unbroken from edge to edge; the foreground is, in effect, the frame itself. No painting in the European tradition before it had dared a field so nearly empty at this size. The stake was public: it was shown at the Berlin Academy, where the absence of the expected structure was the talk around it. Held below the top because the cost was risked rather than paid: the king bought it, and the painter was elected to the Academy.
Score: 9.2 / 10
Substitute a different form and the knowledge goes. The work knows that a person is exposed to the boundless with nothing to hold, and it knows it only as this field: the missing repoussoir leaves the viewer no edge to stand behind, and the unbroken horizon means the eye cannot leave the picture by a side. The proportion of sky to land is the proportion of the unknown to the known. The figure’s size is the argument: double it and he is a figure in a landscape; halve it and he is lost, and there is no one to stand with. The wide format against the one upright is the meeting of a person and the infinite. Held below the top because the dark, worked surface, glazes laid and relaid over two years and now darkened, is not wholly the instrument.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Evidence over promise: two centuries, and the questions remain open. Whether the picture is devout or a picture of God’s absence. Whether the monk is the painter, and whether he looks out or meditates with head bowed. Whether the pendant must be read with it, and in which order. What the text of 1810 in the Berliner Abendblätter, Kleist’s recasting of others’ words, says about the picture and what about Kleist. Whether the canvas is the first abstract landscape, as the line from Friedrich to Rothko claims, or a theological picture read backward through modernism. The restoration of the pair renewed the discussion of its surface and tone. Held a step below the highest because the central experience is agreed, and a share of the literature turns on the pendant and the later reception more than on the field.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Shown publicly in 1810, so force and reach are scored together. The intrinsic force is high: a reorganisation of what a landscape could be, the subject become the field itself, a near empty field, and the viewer’s relation to it the content. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: an immediate literary response, the Abendblätter text of October 1810, a founding document of Romantic writing on painting; a narrow following in painting, Dahl, Carus, Kersting and a Dresden circle; the painter’s name in neglect from his death in 1840 until the Berlin Centenary exhibition of 1906; and Robert Rosenblum’s Modern Painting and the Northern Romantic Tradition: Friedrich to Rothko of 1975, which made this canvas the ancestor of the field painting of Rothko and Newman. The reach is delayed, and in part a critic’s genealogy rather than a documented debt; it is credited and discounted.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Survival weighed on form, presence and fabric. The form is whole and legible: the field, the figure and the three bands are all there. Presence: in the Prussian royal collection from 1810 and then the national collection in Berlin, never dispersed, and through the Second World War; but for some sixty years after the painter’s death it was little regarded, and its standing now is a recovery. The fabric is charged: the surface is cracked and darkened, the glazes have changed, and the sky’s first tone is in part a matter of inference, though the restoration of the pair removed yellowed varnish and recovered much of it. At 216 years it sits just past the band of two centuries. Wide presence earns its tenth; the long neglect and the fabric take it back.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Judged as command of oil on canvas at a middle scale. The making bears the load in the sky: a gradation from near black at the horizon through misted grey to a pale opening above, built in thin layered glazes so that the air reads as depth without a single drawn form. The transitions are the picture. The sea band is held at the edge of darkness without going dead, and the figure is laid in with economy, its placement exact. The craft is careful, slow and glaze-built, not virtuoso: no passage of drawing or touch carries the work as the stroke carries a Van Gogh sky. The costs: the surface, worked and reworked over two years, carries the marks of that labour; the dune and shore are summary; the darkening of the glazes is partly the technique’s own.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: the pale opening high in the sky and the small dark figure on the light shore at the bottom. They obey one law. Everything in the field is a band or a point against a band, horizontal extension against a single upright, light above against dark at the horizon. The gulls are points of the same kind, the monk the largest of them. Nothing in the picture is drawn by another law: no ornament, no anecdote, no detail rendered for its own sake. The range is real, from the near black sea to the pale sky, from the void to the one human. But narrowness is not coherence, and the territory the law governs is deliberately small: one shore, one figure, three bands.
Score: 8.8 / 10
The orders held: the natural order, in sea, sky, shore and weather; the cosmos, as the boundless sky; the sacred, in the monk and in what he faces; and consciousness, his and the viewer’s, which is the work’s medium. They are integrated, and the single figure before the field places each. What holds the axis lowest is what is absent, which is most of what the rubric lists: no family, no labour, no city, no state, no history, the human world reduced to one man with his back to us. The monastic order is implied by the habit and by nothing more. Water Lilies holds four orders in its own empty field and stands on this axis at the same 6.5. The emptiness is the form’s choice, and the figure describes the form.
Score: 6.5 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.6 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Swerve at 9.2, with The Living Form and The Imperishable at 9.1. A landscape emptied of every inherited support, repoussoir, coulisse, middle ground and ship, to three bands and one figure, shown in public in 1810; a form in which the knowledge, that a person stands exposed to the boundless with nothing to hold, exists only because the sides are bare, the horizon unbroken and the figure exactly this small; and an image whole after 216 years, through neglect, war and the darkening of its own glazes.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 6.5: the natural order, the cosmos, the sacred and a consciousness are held, and family, labour, city, state and history are absent, the human world reduced to one man with his back to us. Above it, and below the rest, The Unconcealment at 8.3 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.4: the canvas will not say whether the sky is a presence or an absence, and much of what it gives is a state; its myth is one figure and one gesture, and its deeper readings come from the pendant and from outside the frame. The two are one fact: the picture suspends what it shows and empties what it holds, and that is its form.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.8 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 9.1, The Made at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.8, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Swerve at 9.2, The Imperishable at 9.1 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Archetypal Deep at 8.4 falls short by a tenth and The Unconcealment at 8.3 by two. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.3, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 6.5. The twelve sum to 102.8, an average of 8.57 that displays 8.6, in the band of Tier IV.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of the canvas in the Alte Nationalgalerie, Berlin (the pale shore, the dark band of sea, the sky climbing to a pale opening, the one figure and the few gulls), of how it was made, of its showing in 1810 and of its later life. No image, technical report or written source was consulted. The work scored is the single canvas, oil, about 110 by 171.5 centimetres, painted 1808 to 1810, whole in form, its surface cracked and darkened and its varnish cleared in a restoration made together with its pendant. Not in the unit, and neither scored nor credited: the pendant, The Abbey in the Oakwood, shown with it in 1810 and hung beside it; the painter’s later pictures; and the field painting of Rothko and Newman, which is evidence of the reach. Two passages are quoted from the text printed in the Berliner Abendblätter on 13 October 1810, drafted by Brentano and Arnim and recast by Kleist: its title and Kleist’s phrase about the eyelids, each in German with an English rendering beneath; the rest of that text is paraphrased. That ships in an earlier state were painted out is stated as reported and not established. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them what the underdrawing and the earlier states show, the exact proportions of the three bands, the number of the gulls, the identification of the shore with a particular coast, the part said to have been played in the purchase by a member of the royal house, and the year the restoration was completed.