The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Sei Shōnagon · Makura no Sōshi · a miscellany of list sections, reflective sections and court reminiscences, something over three hundred sections in all · scored on the Sankanbon line, the three-volume text on which most modern Japanese editions are based, in its classical Japanese, read from knowledge; no text in hand, Japanese quoted only where its words are certain, each quotation with a plain English rendering beneath, and no published translation quoted
Mode
Miscellany (later called zuihitsu, prose that follows the brush): list, reflection and court memoir in one first-person book
Mythos
The radiant sovereign lady and her household as a garden out of time; the seasons as a cosmic order; the impermanence of the age, unspoken, behind every bright scene
Phase
Empress Teishi’s household in the 990s, from the newcomer’s first nights at court to the Empress’s last years, written in part after the deaths and exiles of her house, which it almost never names
Presentation
Something over three hundred sections (dan), from a single heading and a few names to reminiscences of several pages, list, reflective and diary-like sections mixed without order of kind, and a closing colophon
Register
From the farce of an official whose gate was too narrow for the carriages and the cruel aside of the lists to the Empress’s hands in the lamplight and the yamabuki petal of the years of the fall
Scale
One household of the Heian court seen from one room and one rank: the self, the court as a state in miniature, the seasons, temples and rites, love by letter and leave-taking, labour glimpsed, and history held by omission
Governing Proposition
A lady-in-waiting to Empress Teishi, consort of Emperor Ichijō, writes in kana prose a book without a story: lists of things hateful, rare, dispiriting and heart-quickening, lists of mountains, rivers and bridges, reflections that open on the four seasons, and scenes of the Empress’s household at its brightest, set down in part after that household had fallen. The wager of the work is that a self can be made of discriminations, that taste exercised without apology on the smallest things is a form of knowledge and of loyalty, and that what the book declines to tell is part of what it knows.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The book begins with a category and a judgment. “春はあけぼの” (haru wa akebono)
(spring: the dawn). Purple-tinged clouds trail over the ridge as it brightens. Then the other three: “夏は夜” (natsu wa yoru)
(summer, the night), with fireflies in the dark; “秋は夕暮れ” (aki wa yūgure)
(autumn, evening), with crows flying home; “冬はつとめて” (fuyu wa tsutomete)
(winter, early morning), with frost and the braziers. Four judgments of two words each, and a few strokes of image apiece. The passage has been learnt by heart for centuries, and it is the method of the whole book: name a thing, judge it, and show in a few strokes why.
The writer is Sei Shōnagon, lady-in-waiting to Empress Teishi, also called Sadako, consort of Emperor Ichijō. The book is in classical Japanese kana prose, with waka and Chinese allusion set into it. It was composed in the 990s and after the Empress’s death in 1000, and the date of its last revision is unknown. It runs to something over three hundred sections in the numbering of modern editions, the count varying by edition and line, and the sections run from a single heading and a few names to reminiscences of several pages.
Three kinds of section are mixed without order of kind: list sections, reflective sections, the opening among them, and diary-like reminiscences of the Empress’s court, and the book closes with a colophon. There is no autograph. Four textual lines survive and differ in content and in order: the Sankanbon and Nōinbon lines keep the mixed order, and the Maedabon and Sakaibon lines rearrange the sections by kind. The unit here is the work in the Sankanbon line, the three-volume text on which most modern Japanese editions are based, read as the whole miscellany with its colophon. Its best manuscripts lack the opening part, which editions supply from other manuscripts of the same line, so that even the seasons of the scored text come to it from a sister copy.
Movement II
A list section is a category and its members, chosen by taste. Under “Hateful things”, nikuki mono, stand the visitor who stays and talks, the lover who fumbles his leave-taking at dawn, and the mosquito’s thin voice near the face. These are named for the first time in this literature: the texture of ordinary irritation, for which the tale and the waka had no place, set down with a frankness that is itself a truth about feeling.
The other categories are made the same way: “Things that make the heart beat fast”, kokoro tokimeki suru mono; “Dispiriting things”, susamajiki mono; “Rare things”, arigataki mono. Each item is paced so that the judgment comes as its last word, and the comic or cruel aside lands without preparation: “説経の講師は顔よき” (sekkyō no kōji wa kao yoki)
(a preacher should be good-looking). The governing word is “をかし” (okashi)
(delightful), and a category held open with its members is a judgment the reader can keep adding to. The book knows the world as a field of discriminations, not as a sequence of events.
Then the name-lists: “Mountains”, “Rivers”, “Bridges” and the like, where a place-name is admitted for its poetic echo, as the waka catalogues of poetic places had admitted it. Some are little more than a run of names, could be removed with the book’s knowledge almost unchanged, and show no making at all. They are judged by the same eye as everything else, and set beside a scene of the Empress’s wit they say that the court’s grandeur and its irritations are one texture.
Movement III
The first reminiscence of coming to court finds the newcomer shy, hidden behind a screen at night while the Empress shows her pictures. In the lamplight the newcomer sees the Empress’s hands, and the colour of them against her sleeves. It is a moment of transport, and it is required: every later scene of wit in the book is measured from that fear.
Later the Empress asks “香炉峰の雪いかならむ” (Kōrohō no yuki ika naran)
(how is the snow on Xianglu Peak?), and Shōnagon answers by having the blind raised. The exchange turns on one allusion that neither has to speak, drawn from the Chinese learning of the court, and the answer is a gesture that joins wit and the white world. It is wit as intimacy between servant and mistress, and it is also display, of the kind the court thought unbecoming in a woman.
The reminiscences are timed like comedy. The dog Okinamaro, beaten and banished for chasing the Emperor’s cat, is recognised at last by his tears. A pedantic official’s gate proves too narrow for the carriages. On an outing the cuckoo is sought in vain. Around these runs the court as a state in miniature, rank, office and ceremony, the temple pilgrimages and the preachers, the calendar of rites, and, glimpsed at the edges, carpenters eating and servants at work, seen as spectacle from one room and one rank.
Movement IV
The history is plain. The Empress’s father, the regent Fujiwara no Michitaka, died in 995. Her brothers Korechika and Takaie were exiled in 996 as Michinaga rose. Teishi died in childbirth in 1000. The book records the brightness of her household and almost none of its ruin, and part of it was written after the ruin had come.
The reminiscences of the late years show the Empress in reduced lodgings and do not say why. In those years a message comes from her on a yamabuki petal: “言はで思ふぞ” (iwade omou zo)
(thinking it, unsaid). The words are the book’s own law. The Empress is shown laughing, never grieving, and the silence about exile and death is an act of fidelity to her.
The silence is also a property of the form. A continuous memoir would have to narrate time, and time at this court ran to exile and death; a miscellany without chronology keeps each moment at its own height, and ruin, which is not okashi, is not admitted. The cost is that the Empress is given no arc. The lost paradise of her household and the impermanence behind every bright scene are evoked, not built, and they are present fully only to a reader who brings the history the book withholds.
Movement V
The voice was paid for. It displays Chinese learning and competitive wit at a court that thought such display unbecoming in a woman, and Murasaki Shikibu’s diary records the price in one word, “したり顔” (shitarigao)
(smug-faced). The narrowness is real as well: everything is seen from one room and one rank, and commoners enter mostly to be found unfitting. The law of what is fitting and what delights is a taste rather than a vision, and its coherence is partly the coherence of a class.
The form it made had no precedent in the tale, the diary or the waka, and it became a tradition. The book is the founding work of zuihitsu, prose that follows the brush. Hōjōki (1212) and above all Tsurezuregusa, which names the Pillow Book, stand in its line, and the zuihitsu ran through the Edo period to the modern Japanese essay. Okashi became one of the two words by which the Heian aesthetic is described, set against Genji’s mono no aware. Abroad the reach is narrower: Arthur Waley’s selection of 1928, about a quarter of the work, the versions of Ivan Morris (1967) and Meredith McKinney (2006), a modern taste for the list and the fragment that it anticipated, and a film that borrowed its title.
It has been read for about a thousand years without break: copied in the medieval period, commented on in the Edo period, parodied, and taught in Japanese schools now. Its text has not come down whole in the sense its age would suggest, and its order cannot be shown to be the author’s. Its voice has: the reader who returns finds it arrogant at one age, brave at another and elegiac at a third, and it is the same voice, judging.
Act III · The Twelve
Subtract and see: much can go, and the form invites it. A miscellany is open by design. A section on bridges or on islands that is little more than a run of names could be removed with the book’s knowledge almost unchanged, and the four textual lines show copyists rearranging and supplementing it for centuries without anyone feeling a whole broken. What resists removal is real. The opening seasonal section must stand where it does, because it sets the method, a category and a judgment in two words. The first reminiscence of coming to court is required: every later scene of wit is measured from the newcomer’s fear. The late reminiscences and the yamabuki petal carry the undertow. Held by the slack name-lists and by an order no author can be shown to have fixed.
Score: 7.2 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: a self can be made of discriminations, and taste, exercised without apology on the smallest things, is a form of knowledge and of loyalty. “Hateful things” names, for the first time in this literature, the texture of ordinary irritation: the visitor who stays and talks, the lover who fumbles his leave-taking at dawn, the mosquito’s thin voice near the face. That frankness is a truth about feeling for which the tale and the waka had no place. The second disclosure is by omission. Written in part after the fall of the Empress’s house, the book keeps her court at its brightest, her laughing, never grieving, and the silence is fidelity. Held off the gate: much of what is disclosed is a mood, one woman’s, seen from one room and one rank.
Score: 8.2 / 10
The book rises often and never far. The opening four seasons are a height of their kind and have been learnt by heart for centuries: purple-tinged clouds trailing over the brightening ridge at dawn, fireflies in the summer dark, crows flying home at autumn dusk, frost and braziers in the winter morning. The newcomer’s first sight of the Empress’s hands in the lamplight, their colour against her sleeves, is a moment of transport. At Xianglu Peak wit and the white world meet in one gesture. Rain hangs on spider-webs like threaded white beads. The elevation is a miniaturist’s, frequent, exact and small in scale. The dreadful is all but absent and grandeur is refused by design, which holds the axis below the higher bands.
Score: 7.9 / 10
Little is built and some is evoked. Across the reminiscences the Empress becomes a figure larger than a person, the radiant sovereign lady whose household is a garden out of time, and the book shapes her court as a lost paradise kept intact by memory. The seasons of the opening set a cosmic order the rest is placed inside, and the impermanence that Buddhist thought gave the age stands, unspoken, behind every bright scene. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is that none of this bears load as a pattern. Teishi is given no arc; the fall that would make her tragic is withheld, so the archetype is present only to a reader who brings the history. The narrator is a type, the clever woman at court, before she is an archetype.
Score: 7.0 / 10
The inheritance: the waka culture and its catalogues of poetic places, the Chinese learning of the court, Bai Juyi above all, and the women’s kana prose of the tenth century, the tale and the diary, the Kagerō diary among them. The turn is a form none of them offered: a book with no story and no single occasion, made of lists, judgments and scenes, governed only by a first-person sensibility that ranks the world. The list section, a category and its members chosen by taste, is its instrument. The stake was real and was paid: the voice displays Chinese learning and competitive wit at a court that thought such display unbecoming in a woman. Held below the top because the waka culture supplied the categories, and the daily practice of wit at court placed part of the wager on proven ground.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Change the form and the book loses what it knows. A continuous memoir would have to narrate time, and time at Teishi’s court ran to exile and death; the miscellany, discontinuous and without chronology, keeps every moment at its own height, and its silence about the fall is a property of the form, not only a choice. The list is the second instrument: a category with its members is a judgment held open, so the world is known as a field of discriminations rather than a sequence of events. The mixture of kinds is the third: a scene of the Empress’s wit beside a list of hateful things makes the court’s grandeur and its irritations one texture. Held off the top because the order is not secured: the Maedabon and Sakaibon lines rearrange the sections by kind, and the work survives it.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Evidence rather than promise. The book has been read, copied and commented on for about a thousand years: named by Kenkō in Tsurezuregusa, commented on in the Edo period, parodied, and taught in Japanese schools. Modern scholarship keeps finding questions in it: four textual lines and no fixed order, the politics of its silence about Michinaga, a woman’s display of Chinese learning, a self made in public, the list as a form. The voice changes with the reader who returns to it, arrogant at one age, brave at another, elegiac at a third. Held below the higher bands because much of its yield is renewed pleasure rather than renewed meaning, and beside The Tale of Genji, its own age’s well, it has sustained less argument.
Score: 8.2 / 10
The field: Japanese vernacular prose and poetry of the tenth and early eleventh centuries, with the Chinese letters of the Heian court behind them. The force is high. The book is the founding work of zuihitsu, prose that follows the brush, and with the opening seasons and the lists it gave Japanese prose a form for the judging self that it had not had. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Hōjōki (1212) and above all Tsurezuregusa, which names the Pillow Book, stand in its line; the zuihitsu ran through the Edo period to the modern Japanese essay; and “okashi” became one of the two words by which the Heian aesthetic is described, set against Genji’s “mono no aware”. Held below the top because Genji redirected more, and abroad its reach has been admiration more than redirection.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Weighed on form, then presence, then fabric. Span: about a thousand years read without break, copied in the medieval period, named by Kenkō, commented on in the Edo period, taught in schools now and translated widely in the last century. That puts it at the top of the step for centuries and at the threshold of millennia. Form is charged: no autograph; four lines that differ in content and in order; the best Sankanbon manuscripts lacking the opening part; supplementary sections whose place in the work is uncertain. The defining form, lists, reflections and scenes in one voice, is legible in every line, so the charge is moderate, about three tenths. Presence is wide in Japan and narrower abroad, where it is read chiefly by students and admirers; that holds it off the top of the band.
Score: 9.2 / 10
The command of the sentence is the book’s surest quality, judged on the Japanese as far as this reading can judge it. The opening is four judgments of two words each, with a few strokes of image apiece, and has served for centuries as a model of Japanese prose. The reminiscences are timed like comedy: the Xianglu Peak exchange turns on one unspoken allusion, and the banished dog Okinamaro is recognised at last by his tears. In the lists the judgment comes as the last word of an item, and the cruel aside lands without preparation. Charged: the axis includes arrangement, and the arrangement is loose and unsecured, and some name-lists show no making at all. The music of the kana prose is beyond this reading and is neither credited nor charged.
Score: 8.6 / 10
One physics governs the whole: everything that enters the book is judged, and judged by the same eye. Take the two most distant elements: a list of the names of rivers, and the last reminiscences of the Empress in her decline. One law holds them, the law of what is fitting and what delights, applied to a place-name for its poetic echo and to a mistress for her grace. The range of tone is wide, from the farce of the pedantic official whose gate was too narrow for the carriages to the yamabuki petal, and the voice never breaks its rule; even the silence about the fall obeys it, since ruin is not “okashi” and is not admitted. Held off the top: the law is a taste rather than a vision, and narrowness of class is part of its coherence.
Score: 8.4 / 10
More orders are present than the form suggests. The self and its judgments; the court as a state in miniature, in rank, office and ceremony; the natural order through the seasons, fully and finely; the sacred, in temple pilgrimages, preachers and the calendar of rites; love, in dawn leave-takings and letters; labour, glimpsed in carpenters eating and servants at work; and history, the fall of the Empress’s house, held by omission. One sensibility joins them, and the list is the joint. But much is listed rather than integrated, and every order is seen from one room and one rank: the state as ceremony, labour as spectacle, the provinces as rumour, and the history that shaped the author’s life kept outside the frame. A wide small world, wider than a lyric body, narrower than a novel of society.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.1 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 9.2, then The Swerve at 8.7 and The Made and Pressure on Tradition at 8.6. About a thousand years read without break in its language, charged for four divergent lines but legible in every one; a form no inheritance offered, lists, judgments and scenes governed by one first-person sensibility, made at a cost its great rival recorded; sentences of four judgments in two words each and reminiscences timed like comedy; and the founding of the zuihitsu, from Hōjōki and Tsurezuregusa to the modern Japanese essay.
Limiting Dimension
The Archetypal Deep at 7.0: the Empress nearly becomes the radiant lady of a lost paradise, but she is given no arc, and the fall that would make her tragic is withheld. The Inevitable at 7.2, held by the slack name-lists and by an order no author can be shown to have fixed, and The Encompassed at 7.3, many orders listed rather than integrated and every one seen from one room and one rank. The music of the kana prose is beyond this reading, and is neither credited nor charged.
The Necessity Cap is unmet: The Inevitable at 7.2 falls short of the threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.4, The Made at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.4, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 9.2, The Swerve at 8.7 and Pressure on Tradition at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Unconcealment at 8.2 and The Archetypal Deep at 7.0 fall short. The Universal Minimum is unmet: The Inevitable at 7.2 and The Archetypal Deep at 7.0 fall below 7.5. The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.3. The aggregate stands below 9.0 in any case; the summit is closed on the aggregate and on three conditions.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of the Makura no Sōshi of Sei Shōnagon, scored on the Sankanbon (three-volume) line, the text on which most modern Japanese editions are based, read as the whole miscellany: the list sections (ruisanteki), the reflective sections (zuisōteki) and the reminiscences of the court (nikkiteki), with the closing colophon. The supplementary sections printed after the main text in Sankanbon editions are context only, and the Nōinbon, Maedabon and Sakaibon lines are named as transmission, not scored. Every score is judged on the classical Japanese original, which is not in hand; none of the text is in the desk’s files. Japanese is quoted on this page only where its words are certain, in the original with a romanisation, and beneath each quotation stands a plain English rendering in parentheses, made for this page and not taken from any published translation. The rhythm and sound of the kana prose are beyond this reading except in a few passages, and are neither credited nor charged. No section numbers are given, since no edition’s numbering is held with confidence. Translation · Meredith McKinney’s The Pillow Book (Penguin, 2006), the version best known to this reading, was used for sense. Ivan Morris’s version (1967) and Arthur Waley’s selection (1928), about a quarter of the work, are named. None is in hand, none is quoted, and nothing in any of them is charged to the work. Names follow the usual romanised forms. Facts that could not be verified, among them the date of the last revision, the account of the book’s making and its title in the colophon, the age of the oldest manuscripts, the proportion of each kind of section, and whether a Chinese miscellany of lists stood behind the form, are not given or are left open.