The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Gustav Holst · suite for large orchestra, Op. 32, with a wordless offstage female chorus in the last movement · seven movements scored as one work, in the composer’s order · about fifty minutes in performance
Mode
The orchestral suite of character pieces, built on ostinato, quintuple metre and layered harmony in place of thematic development
Mythos
A life as a journey outward, from the warring world through age as threshold to the mystic, ending in disappearance; the planets as dispositions, not gods
Phase
Seven movements: Mars, Venus, Mercury, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune; the first and last in 5/4, the longest fifth, the end a fade to silence
Presentation
Concert music; a large orchestra with celesta, two harps and organ, and in Neptune a female chorus placed offstage, singing without words
Register
From the col legno tapping and hammered brass of Mars to the solo horn of Venus, the bells of Saturn and the receding voices of Neptune
Scale
The cosmos as the frame of a human life; war, love, the mind, festivity, age, illusion and the sacred, one to a movement; about fifty minutes
Governing Proposition
Seven planets are heard as seven dispositions, set in an order that is not the order of the sky. The suite opens with war as a machine, five beats to the bar, and closes with women’s voices offstage singing on a vowel until nothing is left; between them old age, the longest movement and the hinge, passes through dread into calm. The wager of the work is that a gallery of characters, held in one frame, can trace a life from force to its dissolution.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The first movement is “Mars, the Bringer of War”, Allegro, in 5/4. Before any tune there is a rhythm: the strings strike their strings with the wood of the bow, and with harps and timpani they tap out an ostinato on G, five beats to the bar, a figure that limps because the bar will not divide evenly. The brass enter above it in fourths. Nothing in the movement is heroic. The battle is a mechanism, and the music is built the way a machine is built, from a repeated motion that does not tire and does not care.
The form is the knowledge here. Mars cannot be stated in a regular metre: put the ostinato into four or three and the menace becomes a march, which is something soldiers do; in five it is something done to them. The climaxes grind over a held pedal, and its quiet passages are as dreadful as the loud ones. Hypsos is reached by terror, and the terror is made from the metre and the ostinato, not from volume.
The movement ends in hammered chords and a final unison. Force ends without victory: there is no triumph to arrive at, only an end to the hammering. Mars is first because everything after it moves away from force, and its five beats come back at the other end of the suite, in Neptune, where the same metre carries no weight at all. Mars takes about one part in seven of the running time; the frame the two quintuple movements make together takes about three parts in ten.
Movement II
“Venus, the Bringer of Peace” is the answer to Mars, and it opens with one: a solo horn rising, and the flutes answering it downward. The orchestra is high and luminous: flutes, celesta, harps, a solo violin. Where Mars was a mechanism, Venus is stillness, and the stillness is scored, not simply played softly; the celesta and harps hold the sound in the air without driving it anywhere. It is among the suite’s heights, a height of beauty rather than of terror.
Then “Mercury, the Winged Messenger”, Vivace, in 6/8, the shortest of the seven, about one part in twelve of the time. It is wit: cross-rhythms and two keys laid one over the other so that the messenger seems to be in two places at once. The bitonal layering is one of the suite’s departures from the English music around it, and it returns, slower and darker, in Neptune.
These two movements show the suite’s strength and its joint together. Every bar of them is exactly heard. But the subtractive test finds more give here than at either end. Mercury could go with little loss to the argument, and Venus, for all its beauty, renders a mood more than it discloses a meaning. The suite is a gallery, and a gallery can lose a picture and still hang.
Movement III
“Jupiter, the Bringer of Jollity” is a chain of dance tunes joined to one broad central tune in the strings and horns. The outer sections are jollity by title and in fact. The central tune is grandeur: a long diatonic song that rises and settles, and is among the suite’s heights whatever later use has done to it. Its sections are joined by transitions that serve rather than compel, and its episodes are permitted rather than required.
The tune was later lifted out whole and made into a hymn, I Vow to Thee, My Country, which is now sung at national occasions. The hymn is not part of the work. It is evidence of the suite’s presence and of something else: the tune could be separated without damage, which is what the subtractive test asks. It also shows the strain on the suite’s inner law. Jupiter’s central tune is a different world from the other six movements, nationally coloured, its broad song outside their harmonic language.
The hymn is wear as well as presence. Jupiter’s tune is now often heard as a patriotic anthem the suite never wrote, and Mars as the sound of cinema, and for many listeners both are exhausted early, not by return but by familiarity. The suite has survived its own use, and survived it whole; the score is played as Holst left it. But a work that lives partly as other things is a work whose survival carries a cost, and The Imperishable is set a tenth below the top of its step for it.
Movement IV
“Saturn, the Bringer of Old Age”, Adagio, in 4/4, is the longest movement, close to a fifth of the time, and it stands fifth. The suite’s centre of gravity in time is old age, not war or jollity. It opens with alternating chords in flutes and harps, a slow tread, a clock. Beneath it a procession forms in the low instruments. The movement climbs through dread to a climax with bells, and then, where a lament would end, it finds a calm, and the calm is earned rather than asserted.
This is where the suite discloses most, and where its myth is built. Age is not decline here but passage: through dread into acceptance, a death and transfiguration in small with no person in it. The alternating chords are a clock, and the movement’s form is the clock stopping. Saturn is the hinge. Before it the planets are near and active, war, love, the mind, the festival; after it they are far and strange, and the suite turns inward and away.
Then “Uranus, the Magician”: a march that stamps and a scherzo figure that skips, with timpani under them, a magician on a stage. The march is repeated past what its idea needs and is grotesque before it is sublime. At its climax the organ sweeps in a sudden glissando and the whole spell collapses into a long hush. It is the one sudden stop in the suite, and after it nothing forceful returns.
Movement V
“Neptune, the Mystic”, Andante, in 5/4: the metre of Mars, emptied. Chords in two keys at once drift over a quiet ostinato, the celesta glinting, and then a female chorus, placed offstage, sings without words, on a vowel. At the end the voices repeat a single bar, and the sound recedes until it is gone. The last planet is not reached; it is dissolved into. Change the form and the claim goes: the fade is written into the orchestration, and the ending is the knowledge.
The order is not the order of the sky. Outward from the sun Mercury and Venus would come first; Earth is omitted; Pluto was not discovered until 1930, and Colin Matthews’s Pluto, the Renewer (2000) is not part of the work. The order is a life: force, love, wit, festivity, age, illusion and its collapse, and disappearance. The swerve was real for English music, a cosmology in place of the pastoral and the ceremonial, but the ground had been cleared in Europe: Schoenberg’s Five Orchestral Pieces had been heard in London in 1912 and 1914, Debussy’s Sirènes had already given a wordless female chorus to the orchestra, and Stravinsky’s ballets had shown what an ostinato could carry.
The suite was first heard privately at the Queen’s Hall, London, on 29 September 1918, under Adrian Boult, and it has been performed and recorded continuously since the 1920s. Its reach is wide and mostly outside the hall, in the orchestral sound of space and war in film. Set beside The Rite of Spring (9.2), a score of the same decade, it loses on every axis; beside the Symphonie fantastique (8.8), the nearest posted work in kind, it ties only on The Imperishable. Its strengths are survival, height and orchestral command; its limit is that a superbly made gallery of characters is not a reorganisation of its art. What it holds is a life heard from war to silence, with old age at the turn.
Act III · The Twelve
The frame resists the subtractive test. Mars must open, because everything after it moves away from force; Neptune must close, because a fade is the only ending for a sequence that leaves the world; and Saturn, the longest movement, set fifth, is the hinge where the outward planets give way to the inward. Within the frame the test finds give. Mercury could go with little loss to the argument. Jupiter is a chain of dance tunes joined to a broad central tune, its episodes permitted rather than compelled, and the tune was lifted out whole to live as a hymn. Uranus repeats its march past what its idea needs. The movements are routinely played singly, and the suite does not resist it.
Score: 7.8 / 10
What is disclosed through sound is credited in full, and two movements disclose more than a mood. Mars shows force as mechanism: a battle that is not heroic, built from an ostinato in an asymmetric metre, strings tapping with the wood of the bow, the climaxes grinding over a pedal. Saturn shows age not as decline but as a passage through dread into acceptance: a slow tread of alternating chords, bells at the climax, then a calm the movement earns rather than asserts. The claim can be stated and holds: the forces that govern a life are dispositions, not gods, and a life passes from force toward stillness. What holds the axis is the rest. Venus, Mercury, Jupiter and Uranus render characters and moods with great skill, and on this axis a mood ranks below a meaning.
Score: 7.8 / 10
Height is reached often, and in several registers. The terror of Mars: the ostinato, the brass in fourths above it, the final hammered chords, and quiet passages as dreadful as the climaxes. The beauty of Venus: the solo horn rising, the flutes answering, the solo violin, the stillness of celesta and harps. The grandeur of Jupiter’s central tune, whatever later use has done to it. The dread and the release of Saturn, the suite’s greatest height, its bells and its quiet close. The organ’s sudden glissando and the collapse at the climax of Uranus, then a long hush. Neptune’s sublime of distance. Five of seven movements rise. Held below the top because Mercury is wit, Jupiter’s outer sections are jollity by title and in fact, and the march of Uranus is grotesque before it is sublime.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Myth is evoked across the suite and built in one movement. The figures the titles name are astrological dispositions, and they carry little archetypal structure of their own: “the Bringer of War” is a type, not a story. What is built is a passage from the warring world outward to the mystic, with age as the threshold: a life as a journey from Mars to Neptune, ending in disappearance. Saturn bears that load. Its tolling, its procession and its arrival at peace are a death and transfiguration in small, without a person in it. Elsewhere the patterns are summoned as colour: a magician on a stage, a messenger in motion, an English festival. As in all wordless music the particular is thinly kept, and here the titles keep it more than the notes.
Score: 7.7 / 10
The inheritance is the late Romantic programme suite and the large modern orchestra of Strauss, with three nearer models: Schoenberg’s Five Orchestral Pieces, heard in London in 1912 and 1914; Debussy’s Nocturnes, whose Sirènes had already used a wordless female chorus; and Stravinsky’s ballets. The departures were real for English music: an ostinato in 5/4 as the whole ground of a movement, bitonal layering in Mercury and Neptune, a fade to silence as an ending, a cosmology in place of the folk-song pastoral and the Elgarian ceremonial around it. The stake was modest: a little-known teacher writing for an orchestra he could not hope to hear, under no commission. The swerve is from his English surroundings more than from Europe, which had cleared the ground.
Score: 7.8 / 10
In two movements form is the knowledge. Mars cannot be stated in a regular metre: the limping five is the machine, and the ostinato is what force is. Neptune cannot end any other way: the fade, the chorus repeating one bar until it is lost, is the claim that the last planet is not reached but dissolved into. Saturn’s alternating chords are a clock, and its form is the clock stopping. The cost is the suite form itself. Seven character pieces in a row make a gallery, and a gallery’s frame contains rather than thinks. Mercury and Jupiter would say much the same in another order or apart, and the argument is carried by the two ends and the fifth movement more than by the whole design.
Score: 7.9 / 10
Evidence over promise, and more than a century of it, but uneven in kind. Performance yields on return: the orchestration of Venus, Saturn and Neptune keeps giving detail, and the tempo of Mars stays open. The interpretative literature is thinner than the work’s fame: the biographies by Imogen Holst and Michael Short, Raymond Head’s studies of the astrology and the sources, and little sustained analysis beside them. Whether the order means a life or a horoscope, and how far Schoenberg reached into the score, are real questions, and they have not drawn the re-examination the desk’s highest pages show. What holds the axis lowest of the eleven is familiarity: for many listeners Mars and Jupiter are exhausted early, not by return but by repetition outside the hall.
Score: 7.6 / 10
The field is the concert music of its tradition and decade: the European orchestra of 1910 to 1920, with The Rite of Spring, Schoenberg’s pieces, Debussy’s Jeux and Mahler’s late symphonies. Against that field the work reorganised little of what music could do. Its means came from Paris, Vienna and St Petersburg; its achievement was to command them in one legible design. In English music it was larger: it opened the English orchestra to the modern repertory of rhythm and colour. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: the reach is documented and wide, though mostly outside the concert hall, where the suite became a template for the orchestral sound of space, war and wonder in film scoring from the middle of the century on. In concert composition it is narrower.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Survival is weighed on form, presence and fabric, over about 108 years from the first performance. The form survives whole: the score is complete, published and played as Holst left it. Presence is among the widest of any orchestral work of its century: continuously performed and recorded since the 1920s, a staple of the Proms and of orchestras worldwide, and its central tune sung as a hymn at national occasions. That breadth earns at most a tenth, and part of it is wear: Jupiter’s tune is now often heard as a patriotic anthem the suite never wrote, and Mars as cinema. The surface fixed to its moment is small; the astrology is a frame, not a topicality. The wear holds the figure a tenth below the top of its step.
Score: 9.1 / 10
The command of the orchestra is the highest part of the making and bears weight: the col legno strings, harps and timpani of the ostinato in Mars; the high, luminous Venus, flutes, celesta and solo violin; the cross-rhythms of Mercury; the procession in the low instruments of Saturn; the timpani under Uranus and the organ’s sudden glissando; the placing of chorus and celesta in Neptune, where the fade is written into the orchestration itself. Every movement is exactly heard. The costs are in the composition rather than the scoring. Development gives way to ostinato and repetition; Jupiter’s sections are joined by transitions that serve rather than compel; Uranus leans on sequence. The counterpoint and the large-scale harmonic thinking are plainly lesser than the scoring.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: Jupiter’s English festival tunes and Neptune’s bitonal chords dissolving offstage. They obey one law in part: each movement is a planet’s character, held as a disposition, and the whole moves from the near and forceful to the far and still. Shared means support the law: ostinato as the ground of Mars, Saturn and Neptune; quintuple metre at both ends; bitonality and stacked fourths in Mercury, Saturn and Neptune. The range is wide: battle, love, play, festivity, age, magic and mysticism. But the law loosens where the movements stand alone. Jupiter’s central tune is another world, nationally coloured, its broad diatonic song outside the harmonic language of the other six. A gallery’s unity is a frame’s unity more than an inner law.
Score: 8.0 / 10
The suite names a large range: war and the state at arms in Mars; love and peace in Venus; the mind in Mercury; communal festivity, and through the tune the nation, in Jupiter; age and death in Saturn; illusion and its collapse in Uranus; the sacred beyond form in Neptune; and over all of it the cosmos as the frame of a human life. That is a wider span than most orchestral suites attempt, and the cosmological frame joins several orders. What holds the figure is integration: the orders arrive one to a movement, each in its own room, more listed than held together, and labour, the family and history are absent. The form holds its orders side by side, and the figure records it.
Score: 7.3 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.0 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Imperishable at 9.1, then The Sublime and The Made at 8.7. A score that has survived whole and continuously present for more than a century, heights of terror, beauty, dread and distance in five of its seven movements, and a command of the orchestra in which every movement is exactly heard and the last fade is written into the scoring itself.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 7.3: war, love, the mind, festivity and the nation, age and death, illusion and the sacred are named, one to a movement, more listed than held together, and labour, the family and history are absent. Next above it, The Bottomless Well at 7.6 and The Archetypal Deep at 7.7: a literature thinner than the work’s fame and a familiarity that exhausts before return, and figures that are types rather than stories, with myth built only in Saturn.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.8 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor is met: The Made at 8.7, The Inner Law at 8.0 and The Living Form at 7.9, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 9.1 alone clears the bar of 8.5, and Pressure on Tradition at 8.0, The Unconcealment at 7.8, The Swerve at 7.8 and The Archetypal Deep at 7.7 fall short. The Universal Minimum is met, The Bottomless Well clearing it by a tenth: the lowest of the eleven axes it covers is 7.6, against 7.5. The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 7.3. Four of the five summit conditions are met; with the Epochal Gate unmet and an aggregate of 8.0 the work stands in Tier IV, at its foot.
Basis · the score of The Planets, Op. 32, a suite of seven movements scored as one work, in Holst’s order: Mars, Venus, Mercury, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune; read from knowledge under the desk’s convention for concert music, with its performance tradition as evidence. No score, edition or recording was in hand, and data/texts holds nothing for this work. No movement is scored separately, and no single performance, recording or arrangement is the object. The hymn made from Jupiter’s central tune and Colin Matthews’s Pluto, the Renewer (2000) are not part of the work and are weighed as evidence of presence and reach only. There are no words: the chorus in Neptune sings on a vowel, and the movement titles, of which the desk is certain, are the only words given. Tempo headings and metres are given only where certain. The time shares of the movements were computed by script from ranges across the recorded tradition, and the running time is a range, not a measurement. Details that could not be verified, among them the years of composition, the sponsor of the first performance, the date of the first complete public performance, the composer’s own recordings and their tempos, the composer’s programme note and his astrological sources, the orchestra in detail, the notes of the motto in Uranus and any name they spell, the staging of the chorus’s fade, the date and words of the hymn, and claims for the suite’s influence on particular film scores, are not given. The sound of the work as heard is beyond this reading and is neither credited nor charged.