The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Henry James · a novel in fifty-five chapters · first serialised in Macmillan’s Magazine and The Atlantic Monthly, 1880 to 1881, and published in book form in 1881 by Macmillan in London and Houghton Mifflin in Boston · scored on the revised text of the New York Edition, volumes III and IV (Scribner, 1908), in James’s English, with the 1881 text named where the revision bears; read from knowledge, with no text in hand, and only words that are certain are quoted
Mode
The marriage plot carried past the choice into its consequence; a novel of consciousness, of manners and of money in one long book
Mythos
The American innocent abroad; Eve given freedom and fortune, choosing knowledge and falling into it; a Bluebeard’s house in Rome with a daughter walled in and a secret in the closed room; the ghost of Gardencourt, promised and kept
Phase
A summer and autumn and the year after, from tea on the lawn at Gardencourt to the acceptance in Florence; a gap of some three years; then Rome, the vigil, the disclosure, Ralph’s death and the garden at the close
Presentation
Fiction; fifty-five chapters told by an omniscient narrator who keeps close to Isabel, with long passages placed in Ralph, Madame Merle, Osmond, Rosier, Goodwood and Warburton
Register
Social, ironic, exact, with a shadow of ceremony; comic and conversational for long stretches, rising to dread in the vigil and to a sexual force at the close
Scale
A dozen figures of one class across three nations; a fortune, a marriage, a daughter and a death
Governing Proposition
A young American woman, Isabel, refuses two suitors, Warburton, an English lord, and Goodwood, to keep her freedom; a fortune left to her by Ralph’s father at Ralph’s request makes her free, and makes her prey. Madame Merle brings her to Osmond, an aesthete and collector in Florence, whom she marries because he seems to ask nothing; after three unnarrated years she discovers, in a single night by a dying fire, that his nothing was a whole aesthetic of possession, and later learns that Madame Merle is the mother of his daughter. The wager of the novel is that freedom exercised as taste can choose its own captivity, that the choosing is no less free for being wrong, and that a benefaction meant to free can be the cause of a ruin.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
The novel opens on a lawn. “Under certain circumstances there are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea.” The scene is the lawn at Gardencourt, an English country house, and the sentence sets the register of the whole book: social, ironic, exact, with a shadow of ceremony over it. The book’s subject is a young American woman, Isabel. The narrator is omniscient and keeps close to her, never merged with her; the distance between them is the instrument of the book’s irony, and it is held for fifty-five chapters.
Isabel is the American innocent abroad, and she means to keep her freedom. Two suitors come to her and are refused. Warburton is an English lord of radical opinions and real decency; Goodwood is a man of force, whose claim on her is sexual and plain. The refusals are needed, because they define the freedom she will spend. The book surrounds her with comedy: Henrietta Stackpole, the brisk American journalist, and her Mr Bantling, whose doings run on through Henrietta’s European tour and the Paris chapters, longer than the argument requires.
James serialised the novel in Macmillan’s Magazine and The Atlantic Monthly in 1880 and 1881, and published it in book form in 1881, with Macmillan in London and Houghton Mifflin in Boston. In 1908 he revised it for the New York Edition, where it fills volumes III and IV, and that revised text is judged here. The revision adds and heightens figure throughout; the 1881 text is the first state of the same novel and is named where the revision bears, above all at the last kiss. The Preface James wrote for the New York Edition is criticism of the book and is not scored.
Movement II
The hinge of the book comes in chapter 18. Ralph asks his father to enrich Isabel, so that she may live as her imagination asks, and the bequest is made. It is a generous act, and it is also an act of watching, the first gesture of Ralph’s vicarious love. The fortune makes her free, and it makes her prey. From this point the bequest, Madame Merle and Osmond are one mechanism, and none of them can be lifted out.
In chapter 19 Madame Merle sets out her doctrine of the self: “What shall we call our ‘self’?” A person, she holds, is made of the “envelope of circumstances” around her. Isabel answers that nothing outside her expresses her. In a few lines of talk the book states its argument as character, and the two women take the positions they will hold to the end.
Madame Merle brings Isabel to Osmond, an aesthete and collector in Florence, with a daughter, Pansy. He seems to ask nothing, and that is why she chooses him: he looks like the one man who would leave her free. The Florence chapters run the courtship to her acceptance in chapter 35. The reader, kept close to Isabel, sees Osmond and Madame Merle much as she sees them. Then the book stops, and some three years pass unnarrated.
Movement III
The novel resumes in Rome with the marriage already made. What it became is not shown. It is discovered, as Isabel discovers it, and the elision is the form’s boldest act: a narrative told across those years would know less than one that withholds them. Ned Rosier courts Pansy, and the courtship tests Isabel against Osmond; it is necessary in its consequence and long in its telling.
In chapter 40 Isabel comes upon Madame Merle standing while Osmond sits. Nothing is said that she can hold. A relation is registered as an image before it is understood, and the reader registers it with her. The hint is the book’s method: the deception is shown from inside the mind that is deceived.
Chapter 42 is a single night of Isabel’s reflection by a dying fire, without dialogue. The climax of the novel is a woman thinking in a chair, and James claimed it as his best thing. Room by room the marriage shows itself: Osmond’s nothing was a whole aesthetic of possession, in which she was to be a fine object in his collection, and the wide rooms she thought she had entered were “the house of darkness, the house of dumbness, the house of suffocation”. The recognition is slow and reaches something near dread. Later fiction of consciousness would make a method of what this chapter does.
Movement IV
Osmond’s house is a Bluebeard’s house. Pansy is the walled-in daughter, obedient in everything, and the secret is in the closed room. In chapter 51 the Countess Gemini, frivolous in all else, discloses it: Pansy is Madame Merle’s child. The double parentage turns the courtship in Florence over. The fortune that made Isabel free had made her prey, and the mechanism of bequest, Madame Merle and Osmond is complete.
Pansy is sent to a convent, which is the tower of the Bluebeard house; the convent in this book is a prison and not a faith. Isabel and Madame Merle meet there. The woman of the envelope of circumstances has used Isabel as one more circumstance, and the meeting at the convent is the last turn of their two positions.
Every relation in the book has been a question of freedom and use, of who is collecting whom. Osmond collects; Madame Merle arranges; Pansy obeys; Warburton is decent; Ralph watches; Goodwood presses. Henrietta, the free woman in a comic key, marries Bantling with open eyes, the counterpart of Isabel’s tragedy. Even the comic strand obeys the law, though at times it sits beside the main action rather than inside it.
Movement V
Ralph is dying at Gardencourt, and Isabel kneels by him. His generosity, meant to free her, was the cause of her ruin, and at the end he knows it. His words rise without sentiment: “if you’ve been hated you’ve also been loved.” Ralph had told her long before that the ghost of Gardencourt could be seen only by someone who had suffered. At dawn it appears to her: the one supernatural touch in the book, promised early and kept.
In the garden at the close Goodwood makes his claim, and his kiss is “like white lightning”; in the 1881 text it was “a flash of lightning”, and the revision sharpens the sexual charge of the scene rather than softening it. Isabel goes back to Rome. The book gives her no death and no release, and leaves the reasons for her return to the reader. Henrietta has the last word, to Goodwood, and it is the book’s last irony.
Reviewers in 1881 complained of the open close. The question it leaves has kept argument alive ever since: duty to Pansy, a promise, pride, the refusal of Goodwood’s claim, fear of freedom itself. The novel has been read as the type of the novel of consciousness, as a feminist tragedy and as an anti-feminist one, as a study of money, of American innocence and of aestheticism. It is the James novel most read and taught, it stands at the centre of F. R. Leavis’s The Great Tradition (1948), and it was adapted by the BBC in 1968 and by Jane Campion in 1996.
Act III · The Twelve
The spine is required. Ralph’s request that his father enrich Isabel is the hinge of the whole: the fortune that should let her live as her imagination asks is what makes her prey, so the bequest, Madame Merle and Osmond are one mechanism and none can be lifted out. The suitors are needed too, since her refusals of Warburton and Goodwood define the freedom she then spends. What holds the axis is what could go without loss: part of the comedy of Henrietta Stackpole and Mr Bantling, which recurs past the point where it does work, in Henrietta’s European tour and the Paris chapters; some of the slow early Albany and London passages; and Ned Rosier’s courtship of Pansy, necessary in its consequence and long in its telling. None is idle in kind, but there is more of them than the argument compels.
Score: 8.4 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds: freedom exercised as taste can choose its own captivity, and the choosing is no less free for being wrong. Isabel picks Osmond because he seems to ask nothing, and finds that his nothing was a whole aesthetic of possession, in which she is to be a fine object in his collection. Chapter 42 states it with full clarity: the marriage is “the house of darkness, the house of dumbness, the house of suffocation”, a dwelling she had mistaken for wide rooms. The book discloses the double edge of the gift as well: Ralph’s generosity, meant to free her, is the cause of her ruin, and at the end he knows it. That a benefaction can be a harm, and that a woman’s independence in the 1870s was a market position, are stated so that they hold. Held off the top only because the condition is one woman’s, in one class.
Score: 9.0 / 10
The register is ironic, social and analytic, and its elevations are few but real. Chapter 42 is the chief: a night of slow recognition that reaches something near dread, as the marriage reveals itself room by room. Ralph’s death at Gardencourt, with Isabel kneeling and his “if you’ve been hated you’ve also been loved”, rises without sentiment. The ghost of Gardencourt, which Ralph had told her she could see only after suffering, appears to her at dawn: the one supernatural touch in the book, and earned. The garden at the close, with Goodwood’s kiss “like white lightning”, is the last height. Between them lie long stretches whose pleasures are comic and conversational, not elevated. What holds the axis is frequency: the heights are real, and there are three of them in fifty-five chapters.
Score: 8.2 / 10
The particular takes on archetypal weight, lightly. Isabel is the American innocent abroad and a figure of Eve: given her freedom and her fortune, she chooses knowledge and falls into it, and the book asks whether the fall was fortunate. Osmond’s house in Rome is a Bluebeard’s house, with Pansy the walled-in daughter and a secret in the closed room, that Pansy is Madame Merle’s child; the convent where Pansy is sent is its tower. The ghost of Gardencourt is a true motif, promised early and kept. These patterns are load-bearing in part, since the Eve figure and the trap are the plot. But the book builds them by implication, and much of its weight is social and psychological rather than mythic; Osmond is a type of the aesthete more than an archetype. The figure sits above evocation and a tenth below the full construction the gate asks for.
Score: 8.4 / 10
The inheritance is the English and European novel of the marriage plot, with Dorothea and Casaubon in George Eliot’s Middlemarch (1871 to 1872) the nearest precedent, and James’s own international theme from Daisy Miller and The American. The swerve is in where the action is placed. The marriage plot ends with the choice; this book begins its true action after the choice, and it elides the courtship’s end and the first years of the marriage, so that Isabel’s discovery comes to the reader as it comes to her. In chapter 42 the climax is a woman thinking in a chair, which James claimed as his best thing and which later fiction of consciousness made a method. The ending refuses both conventions: no death for the heroine, no release. The stake was real: reviewers in 1881 complained of the open close, and James revised to sharpen it, not soften it. Held under 9.0 because Eliot had taken the unhappy marriage to the centre first.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Change the form and the book loses what it knows. Its knowledge is that a mind can be wholly deceived by what it most admires, and the form enacts it: the reader, kept close to Isabel, is given Osmond and Madame Merle much as she sees them, with only hints, as in chapter 40, where Isabel finds Merle standing while Osmond sits, a relation registered as an image before it is understood. The three-year gap is the form’s boldest act: what the marriage became is not shown but discovered, in chapter 42, as Isabel discovers it. A narrative told across those years would know less. The title is form as well: a portrait, a figure framed and looked at, which is what Osmond wants of her and what the novel refuses to leave her as. Held a step off the top by the looser chapters that hold The Inevitable.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Evidence over promise, across a century and more of re-examination without exhaustion. The ending alone has kept argument alive since 1881: why Isabel returns to Rome, whether for duty to Pansy, a promise, pride, the refusal of Goodwood’s sexual claim or fear of freedom itself; and Henrietta’s last words to Goodwood keep the question open. The revision of 1908 has made a second field, the comparison of two states of one novel. The book has been read as the type of the novel of consciousness, as a feminist tragedy and as an anti-feminist one, as a study of money, of American innocence, of aestheticism, and of Ralph’s vicarious love. Each yield is real and the book sustains it. Held under 9.0 because the yield turns on a single central question more than on the many interlocking ones of the largest novels.
Score: 8.9 / 10
The field is the novel in English of the later nineteenth century. The intrinsic force is high: the book moved the novel’s action inward, making a single consciousness the theatre of the plot and its climax an act of reflection, and it did so in a long, social, fully plotted book, not a sketch. That is a real reorganisation of possibility, a hinge between Eliot and the modernists. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: it is the James novel most read and taught; it stands in F. R. Leavis’s The Great Tradition (1948) as central to his line; Edith Wharton’s The House of Mirth and The Age of Innocence work in its wake; and the fiction of consciousness of Conrad, Ford and Woolf runs through James, of whom this is the first full achievement. Held under 9.0 because the larger break came in James’s late novels, The Wings of the Dove, The Ambassadors and The Golden Bowl, and the book’s reach runs in part through them.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Weighed on form, then presence, then fabric, over a hundred and forty-five years from book publication. Form: the text survives whole in two authorial states, both in print, with no loss; the revision is a fact of survival, not a charge. Presence: continuously in print, taught in universities across the English-speaking world and beyond, and adapted, by the BBC in 1968 and by Jane Campion in 1996, with Nicole Kidman. Fabric: it has outlived the conditions that made it; the expatriate society of Florence and Rome, the market in American heiresses and the marriage law of the 1870s are history, and the book is read for what they pressed on. What holds it at the usual figure for its span is presence: it is read more in the academy and less by general readers than the most widely read novels of its century.
Score: 9.0 / 10
Judged on James’s English, in the 1908 text. Command of the medium is high and load-bearing. The opening sentence, “Under certain circumstances there are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea”, sets the whole register: social, ironic, exact, with a shadow of ceremony. The dialogue is among the finest in the English novel: Madame Merle’s “What shall we call our ‘self’?” and her doctrine of the “envelope of circumstances”, set against Isabel’s refusal to be expressed by anything outside herself, state the book’s argument as character in a few lines. The control of irony at the narrator’s distance from Isabel, close and never merged, is complete. The revision heightens figure and sharpens the sexual charge of the ending; it is heavy in places, and that is weighed lightly. Held off the top by the slack in pacing.
Score: 9.1 / 10
One law governs the whole: every relation in the book is a question of freedom and use, of who is collecting whom. Take the two most distant elements, Henrietta’s brisk comedy of the American journalist and the terror of chapter 42. They obey the same law: Henrietta is the free woman in another key, who marries Bantling with open eyes, the comic counterpart of Isabel’s tragedy, and her last word to Goodwood is the book’s last irony. Pansy’s obedience, the Countess Gemini’s frivolity, Warburton’s decency, Ralph’s watching and Goodwood’s force are all positions on the one axis. The range is wide: social comedy, psychological tragedy, a ghost, a sexual climax; and the ghost is set early and kept, so that even the one supernatural touch obeys the law. Held off the top because the comic strand, though governed, at times sits beside the main action rather than inside it.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Several orders held, and held together. Consciousness, at full depth. The family: the Touchetts’ separated marriage, the Osmond household, Pansy’s double parentage, and Isabel’s dead child, mentioned in passing, a loss the book lets lie. Money: the bank, the bequest, the market in heiresses, the ironies of a fortune given. Nation and history: America, England and Italy set against one another, and the English aristocracy in Warburton’s radical lordship. Art: Osmond’s collecting, and Rome’s ruins as the ground of Isabel’s thinking. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is what is thin: labour, which is never seen; the state, beyond Warburton’s politics; the sacred, since the convent is a prison and not a faith; the natural order, present as gardens and Roman light, as setting. The book holds a class and its relations, not a society.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.7 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Made at 9.1, then The Unconcealment and The Imperishable at 9.0. A prose of social irony held at an exact distance from its heroine, with an opening sentence that sets the register and dialogue that states the argument as character; a disclosure, which holds, that freedom exercised as taste can choose its own captivity and that a benefaction can be a harm; and a text whole in two authorial states, continuously read and taught for a hundred and forty-five years. Behind them The Living Form, The Bottomless Well and The Inner Law at 8.9: a three-year gap that makes the reader discover the marriage as Isabel does, an ending argued since 1881, and one law of freedom and use from Henrietta’s comedy to the vigil.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 8.0: consciousness, the family, money, three nations and art are held in one structure, but labour is never seen, the state goes no further than Warburton’s politics, the sacred is a convent that is a prison, and nature is setting; the book holds a class and its relations, not a society. Next above it, The Sublime at 8.2, three heights in fifty-five chapters of a register mostly comic and analytic; then The Inevitable and The Archetypal Deep at 8.4: the Henrietta and Rosier strands run longer than the argument compels, and the Eve and Bluebeard designs are built by implication rather than carried as structure.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.4 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.9, The Made at 9.1, The Inner Law at 8.9, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Unconcealment at 9.0, The Imperishable at 9.0, Pressure on Tradition at 8.8 and The Swerve at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Archetypal Deep at 8.4 falls short by a tenth. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.2, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.0. The aggregate, 8.7, holds the work in Tier IV of itself; the unmet gate would hold it there in any case.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Henry James’s The Portrait of a Lady, serialised in Macmillan’s Magazine and The Atlantic Monthly, 1880 to 1881, and published in book form in 1881 (London: Macmillan; Boston: Houghton Mifflin). The unit scored is the revised text of the New York Edition, volumes III and IV (New York: Scribner, 1908), in fifty-five chapters, in James’s English; no translation stands between. The 1881 text is the first state of the same novel and is named where the revision bears, chiefly at the last kiss; on the 1881 text The Made would stand the same within a tenth. The Preface of 1908 is criticism of the book and is not scored. No text was in hand; nothing was measured by script, and no quotation was checked against a file. The novel is quoted only where its words are certain: the opening sentence, Madame Merle’s question and her phrase “envelope of circumstances”, the three houses of chapter 42, Ralph’s words at his death and the two states of the kiss. Everything else is paraphrased, including Ralph’s argument for the bequest. Passages are cited by chapter only where the chapter is certain. Facts that could not be verified are not given, among them the number of monthly parts in each magazine, the length of the novel in words, the measure of the 1908 revision beyond its famous instances, the modern editions that print the revised text, and the range of translations.