The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Gustave Flaubert · three tales in one volume · “Un cœur simple”, “La Légende de saint Julien l’Hospitalier”, “Hérodias” · Charpentier, Paris, April 1877 · scored as one book on Flaubert’s French, read from knowledge; no text in hand, French quoted only where its words are certain, with the desk’s plain English beneath, and A. J. Krailsheimer’s translation (1991) for sense
Mode
A collection of three tales scored as one book: the realist tale of provincial life, the saint’s legend, and a chronicle of antiquity, under one discipline
Mythos
The Holy Ghost, the Son and the Precursor traced backward through time: a parrot made sacred step by step, an Oedipal fate built as plot, and the decrease of the prophet before the one to come
Phase
From Félicité’s half century in Madame Aubain’s house, through Julien’s birth, hunts, crime and expiation, to one day at Machaerus that ends with a head carried to Galilee
Presentation
Fiction; three tales in five, three and three sections, set modern, medieval, ancient, so that time runs backward through the volume; an impersonal narration that never rises above its people to judge them
Register
From a servant’s life given in the imperfect of habit and the past historic of its breaks, through the flat bright repetitions of a legend in panels, to an antiquity crowded with names, factions and artefacts
Scale
A servant, a household and a market town; a castle, a knight’s wars and a river; a citadel, a court, a banquet and the Roman legate
Governing Proposition
A servant in a Normandy town gives fifty years of love to people who take it as service and dies seeing her stuffed parrot in the opening heavens; a huntsman born to a prophecy kills his parents in ignorance and is carried to heaven by the leper he warms; at a desert citadel, while the powerful attend to taxes, a legate and a dancer, a prophet is beheaded offstage. The wager of the book is that one impersonal prose can hold a modern life, a legend and a chronicle of antiquity, run backward through time, and show in each the sacred appearing in the form the world allows it, without a word to say whether that form is mocked or blessed.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
“Pendant un demi-siècle, les bourgeoises de Pont-l’Évêque envièrent à Mme Aubain sa servante Félicité.”
“For half a century the women of Pont-l’Évêque envied Madame Aubain her servant Félicité.” The book opens on fifty years, and frames them as other women’s envy. The sentence states the whole tale before the tale begins, and it states it from outside, from the town, as the tale will go on stating everything.
Trois contes was published by Charpentier in Paris in April 1877, in the order Flaubert set: “Un cœur simple”, “La Légende de saint Julien l’Hospitalier”, “Hérodias”. The first is in five numbered sections, the second and third in three each. The order of the book is not the order of writing. “Saint Julien” was begun in the autumn of 1875 at Concarneau; “Un cœur simple” was written in 1876; “Hérodias” from the late autumn of 1876 into early 1877. Set as Flaubert set them, the tales run modern, medieval, ancient: time runs backward through the volume.
The book was written after the commercial failure of L’Éducation sentimentale in 1869 and the poor reception of La Tentation de saint Antoine in 1874, and through Flaubert’s financial ruin of 1875, when he gave up much of his fortune to save his niece’s husband. “Un cœur simple” was written partly for George Sand, who died in June 1876, before it was finished. It was the last book Flaubert saw published. The desk scores it as one book, as it is read, and weighs “Un cœur simple” most, then “Saint Julien”; “Hérodias” is weighed as the third panel, and charged where it is weaker.
Movement II
Félicité serves Madame Aubain in her house at Pont-l’Évêque, with the children, the farms and the market, for fifty years. The tale is told at the pace of a life seen from outside: years pass in a sentence and an afternoon takes pages. Small things are set down and later called on: the bull in the meadow, the walk to Honfleur, the whip across her face on the road. The imperfect tense carries her habits and the past historic her breaks, and the narration never rises above her understanding to judge it. She has no words for what she feels, and the tale does not lend her any.
“Elle avait eu, comme une autre, son histoire d’amour.”
“She had had, like anyone else, her love story.” The economy refuses to make her exceptional: the love story is like anyone’s, and it ends. Then the losses come one after another, each given its weight and no more: a man who leaves, a child who dies, a nephew dead of fever in Havana. What she loves never measures the love. The book neither sneers at her devotion nor consoles it, and it gives the losses in the same even sentences as the household’s days.
Last comes the parrot, Loulou. The story shows step by step how a bird becomes for her the Holy Ghost: the gift, the image in church, the resemblance, the deafness, the stuffing, and its place on the altar of repose for the Fête-Dieu. Her room fills with relics of the dead and the stuffed bird among them. Nothing in the tale says whether this is mockery or miracle, and nothing in the form allows either reading to win. A novel would explain her; the tale cannot, and that is its knowledge.
Movement III
“Saint Julien” turns from the provinces to legend, and from a life seen from outside to a fate announced in advance. Julien is born under a prophecy, and the tale is built on it: every hunt he rides is a step toward the bedroom where the prophecy will be fulfilled. Twice it nearly comes true before its time, once by a sword that falls and once by an arrow loosed at what he takes for a stork. The legend is told flat, bright and repetitive, its scenes following one another like panels in a window.
The hunts grow. In the great hunt the slaughter goes on past reason, beast after beast, until nothing is left of the hunter but appetite. At its end a black stag curses him: “Maudit! maudit! maudit!”
“Accursed! accursed! accursed!” The curse names what the hunt has been. The appetite the legend gives its saint is the same appetite that will make him a criminal, and the tale does not separate them.
The deed is done in ignorance, and it is done in Julien’s own bed: the two he kills there are his parents. The dreadful is given at the same height as the warm will be at the end, and in the same flat colours. It is an Oedipal fate built as plot, load-bearing from the prophecy forward, and the knight’s wars around it are ground: what matters is the line drawn from the birth to the bed.
Movement IV
The expiation is a ferry. Julien’s penance is given on a river, in the same flat repetitions as his hunts, and the excess that killed now serves. At its end comes the leper on the river, and the body warmed against the body.
The leper is Christ, and the ascent follows. The tale makes the ascent from the same appetite as the crime: sanctity is reached through the same excess, turned. The appetite that kills and the appetite that sanctifies are one appetite, and the legend is told so that the reader cannot keep them apart.
Then the narrator steps out for one clause and names the source: “telle à peu près qu’on la trouve, sur un vitrail d’église, dans mon pays”
“much as it may be found on a church window in my country.” The legend has been a reading of an image all along, and the form has been the window it names. “Mon pays” turns the tale into an artefact, a legend read off glass in one place.
Movement V
“Hérodias” is one day at the citadel of Machaerus, in three sections, a classical unity. The tetrarchy, the Arab war and the factions of Judaea are all in play; the Roman legate, Vitellius, is present; there are the stores of arms and the taxes. The powerful attend to all of this, and to a banquet with the Pharisees, while the prophet’s fate waits offstage, in a cistern. The density of names, factions and artefacts sometimes clogs the narration, and the first half of the tale withholds elevation for long stretches.
At the banquet Salome dances, and the turn of history happens offstage, in the cistern. The decrease of the prophet before the one to come, the hinge of the Christian story, is shown only by its sign: the head. The tale evokes more than it builds, and its meaning is partly a mood of decadence; but its close is exact. “Comme elle était très lourde, ils la portaient alternativement.”
“As it was very heavy, they took turns carrying it.” The head of the Precursor is carried to Galilee, and the book ends on its weight.
Read in the order Flaubert set, the three tales run from the Holy Ghost of a servant’s parrot, through the Son as a leper on a river, back to the Precursor at a desert court: a history unwound to its source. In each the sacred appears in the form the world allows it, a parrot, a leper, a severed head, and in each it is seen without comment. Félicité’s last vision holds the whole book at one height: “elle crut voir, dans les cieux entr’ouverts, un perroquet gigantesque, planant au-dessus de sa tête”
“she thought she saw, in the opening heavens, a gigantic parrot hovering above her head.”
Act III · The Twelve
Within each tale the subtractive test is hard to pass. “Un cœur simple” compresses half a century into five sections and nothing in it is idle: the bull in the meadow, the walk to Honfleur, the whip across her face on the road, each is called on later. Its first sentence states the whole frame. “Saint Julien” has the inevitability of its prophecy, and every hunt is a step toward the bedroom. What holds the axis below the top is the book as a book: whether the triptych is required or three finished things bound together is a fair question, and “Hérodias” carries archaeological furniture (the citadel, the stores of arms, the factions at the banquet) that its drama does not all need.
Score: 8.9 / 10
The disclosure can be stated, and it holds. In “Un cœur simple”, a life of total love given to people who take it as service, by a woman with no words for it, is neither diminished by its objects nor redeemed by them: what she loves (a man who leaves, a child who dies, a nephew dead of fever in Havana, a stuffed parrot) does not measure the love. The book refuses both the sneer and the consolation. In “Saint Julien”, the appetite that kills and the appetite that sanctifies are one appetite. In “Hérodias”, history turns offstage while the powerful attend to taxes. Held lower because the second and third disclosures are carried more by pattern than by understanding of persons, and the third is partly a mood of decadence rather than a meaning.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Height is reached in every tale, and at the close of each. Félicité dies in the heat of the Fête-Dieu with the censer smoke rising to her room, and sees, in the opening heavens, a gigantic parrot hovering above her head: grandeur and absurdity at one height. Julien’s great hunt goes on past reason, and the black stag curses him; at the end the leper on the river is warmed body against body, and the ascent follows. “Hérodias” rises at the dancer and falls to its plain last line. The dreadful stands as high as the warm: the parents in Julien’s bed. Held below the top because elevation is withheld by method for long stretches, most of all in the first half of “Hérodias”, and because the reader’s distance is part of the effect.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Myth built, in three ways. “Saint Julien” is an Oedipal fate built as plot: the prophecy, the two near misses (a sword that falls, an arrow loosed at what he takes for a stork), the deed done in ignorance, the expiation by ferry and the leper who is Christ. “Un cœur simple” builds a myth out of the provinces: the parrot, Loulou, becomes for Félicité the Holy Ghost by steps the story shows one by one (the image in church, the resemblance, the stuffing, the altar of repose), so that the archetype is made in the particular and never leaves it. “Hérodias” stands at the hinge of the Christian story. Together they trace the Holy Ghost, the Son and the Precursor backward through time. Held from the top because “Hérodias” evokes more than it builds.
Score: 9.0 / 10
The inheritance is the conte and the nouvelle, Mérimée’s and Balzac’s, the realist tale of provincial life, and the saint’s legend. The turn: the impersonal method, perfected in the novels, carried into the short form, so that a servant’s life, a legend and a chronicle of antiquity are written under one discipline in which irony and pathos are not chosen between; and the form of the triptych, three ages run backward, with the second tale closing on a legend told as the reading of a church window. The stake was real: a ruined man after two failures, turning to the minor form. What holds the axis at the bar is that the method was his own and proven in Madame Bovary; the departure is in application and arrangement more than a new road.
Score: 8.5 / 10
Change the form and the knowledge goes. “Un cœur simple” is told at the pace of a life seen from outside: years pass in a sentence and an afternoon takes pages, and the narration never rises above Félicité’s understanding to judge it, so that the parrot vision cannot be read as either mockery or miracle. A novel would explain her; the tale cannot, and that is the point. “Saint Julien” is written as the window it names: flat, bright, repetitive, sequential, a legend in panels. “Hérodias” is a single day in three sections, a classical unity, with its event offstage. The backward order makes the first tale’s Holy Ghost the last stage of a history the book then unwinds to its source. Held off the top only because the third tale’s form is more a container for its material.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Evidence rather than promise: about a century and a half of reading has not settled the parrot. Is Félicité’s vision irony, tenderness, or both at full strength? Readers have not stopped arguing it, and Julian Barnes built a novel, Flaubert’s Parrot (1984), on the question of which stuffed parrot was the model. “Saint Julien” keeps yielding on the relation of the hunt to the sanctity, and on the narrator’s closing “mon pays”, which turns the legend into an artefact. The structural readings of the triptych (three ages, three persons, three kinds of faith) are many, and none closes it. Held a step down because “Hérodias” has yielded less, and much of the commentary returns to the same few questions in the first tale.
Score: 8.9 / 10
The field is French prose fiction of the nineteenth century, and the short story in Europe. The force: the book showed that the short tale could carry the full weight of the impersonal art, that a servant’s life could be written with the gravity given to a saint’s, and that three historical registers could be held by one prose; it set a standard for the story as a made object. Held where it is because the reorganising force in Flaubert’s field was Madame Bovary, and this book perfects more than it redirects. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Maupassant, Flaubert’s pupil, worked in its light; Gertrude Stein’s Three Lives (1909) was conceived from “Un cœur simple”; Wilde’s Salomé (1891) drew on “Hérodias” among other sources; and the line of the modern story through Joyce’s Dubliners is commonly traced to Flaubert’s method, the book one source among several.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Survival is weighed on about a century and a half, and on the presence that span allows. The text survives whole, as published, with Flaubert’s own proofs; nothing in its fabric is charged. Presence is continuous: it is set in French schools and universities, translated into many languages and kept in print in English in several versions, and “Un cœur simple” is among the most anthologised and taught stories in French. Its surfaces, Normandy under the July Monarchy, the medieval legend, Roman Judaea, were period settings when it was written and have not dated the book. A survival under two centuries does not stand with the millennia, and the book’s widest presence is carried by one story of three: “Hérodias” is read far less than the first tale.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Judged on the French, with the music of the sentence heard only as far as a reader of French prose hears it; the limit is the reader’s. The prose is as finished as any in the language: the rhythm of the paragraph, the placing of the concrete detail, the imperfect for a life’s habits and the past historic for its breaks, and clauses that close on a fact. The economy of “Un cœur simple” gives Félicité her love story in one sentence that refuses to make her exceptional. The last sentence of “Hérodias” carries the head of the Precursor to Galilee by turns, because it is heavy. Charged: in “Hérodias” the density of names, factions and artefacts sometimes clogs the narration. Elsewhere the making is load-bearing throughout.
Score: 9.5 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: Félicité’s room, crowded with relics of the dead and a stuffed bird, and the banquet hall at Machaerus with the Roman legate Vitellius, the Pharisees and the dancer. One law governs them: devotion and appetite pressed to the limit, seen without comment, until the sacred appears in the form the world allows it, a parrot, a leper, a severed head. The range is wide and held: the provinces, a legend in colour, an ancient court. Narrowness is not coherence, and this book is not narrow. Charged: the third tale’s political exposition runs on a looser law than the other two, and the unity of the triptych is partly an arrangement the reader is asked to complete.
Score: 8.8 / 10
Judged on what the book holds, as three tales. Consciousness: Félicité’s, given from outside and wholly. The family: Madame Aubain’s house, the children, the nephew, Julien’s parents. Labour: a servant’s fifty years of work, with the farms and the market. The state and history: Rome, the tetrarchy, the Arab war, the factions of Judaea, and the knight’s wars in Julien. The sacred: in all three, from popular devotion to legend to the Precursor. The natural order: the hunt, the animals, the sea at Trouville, the river. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is that they are integrated by the triptych’s design more than by any one tale, and each tale holds few of them at depth: history in the first is ground only, the inner life in the third is thin.
Score: 8.0 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.8 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Made at 9.5, then The Living Form and The Imperishable at 9.1. Prose as finished as any in the French language, carrying a servant’s life in the imperfect of habit and closing each tale on a plain fact; three forms each made the instrument of what its tale knows, a life seen from outside, a legend written as a window, a single day with its event offstage; and a book read and taught without a break since 1877.
Limiting Dimension
The Encompassed at 8.0: three ages, three social orders and the sacred in three forms are held together by the triptych’s design more than by any one tale, and each tale holds few orders at depth. Next above it, The Swerve at 8.5: the impersonal method was Flaubert’s own and proven in his novel, and the departure lies in its application to the short form and in the backward arrangement of the three. “Hérodias”, the third panel, is charged where it is weaker: its exposition and its crowded furniture are charged on The Inevitable, The Unconcealment and The Inner Law, a tenth here and there.
The Necessity Cap clears at 8.9 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Made at 9.5, The Living Form at 9.1, The Inner Law at 8.8, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Imperishable at 9.1, The Archetypal Deep at 9.0, The Unconcealment at 8.8, Pressure on Tradition at 8.6 and The Swerve at 8.5 clear the bar of 8.5, the last exactly at it. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 8.5, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.0. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Gustave Flaubert’s Trois contes, scored as one book, the volume published by Charpentier in Paris in April 1877, in Flaubert’s order: “Un cœur simple” (five sections), “La Légende de saint Julien l’Hospitalier” (three) and “Hérodias” (three). The pieces weighed most are “Un cœur simple”, then “Saint Julien”; “Hérodias” is weighed as the third panel. Every axis is judged on Flaubert’s French. No text was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. French is quoted only where its words are certain, with the desk’s own plain English beneath; no published translation is quoted. “Un cœur simple” is known closely, scene by scene; “Saint Julien” well in its sequence; “Hérodias” in its outline and principal scenes. Translation · A. J. Krailsheimer’s (Oxford World’s Classics, 1991) is the version best known to this reading and was used for sense; Roger Whitehouse’s (Penguin, 2005) beside it. Neither is quoted, and nothing in either is charged to the book. The sound of Flaubert’s French beyond the sentences known here is neither credited nor charged. Facts that could not be verified, among them the newspapers in which the tales appeared before the volume, the length of the book in words, and what Flaubert wrote of the tone of “Un cœur simple”, are not given. Citations are by tale.