The Fifth Desk · Evaluation
Act I · The Map
Friedrich Nietzsche · Also sprach Zarathustra. Ein Buch für Alle und Keinen · a book in four parts · 1883 to 1885 · philosophy in literary form, weighed as written work · scored on Nietzsche’s German, read from knowledge, with Walter Kaufmann’s translation and R. J. Hollingdale’s beside it for sense; no text in hand, German quoted only where its words are certain, with the desk’s English beside it, and no translation quoted
Mode
Philosophy written as prophetic narrative; sermon, parable, song and comedy carried on a story of descent and return
Mythos
A borrowed Persian prophet turned against the dualism its bearer founded; the death of God as news not yet arrived; the Übermensch and the last man; the rope over the abyss, the three metamorphoses, the spirit of gravity, the gateway of the moment and the return of all things
Phase
From Zarathustra’s descent after ten years on his mountain, through withdrawals and returns, to the morning after the midnight song, when he leaves his cave
Presentation
Four parts, published 1883, 1883, 1884 and, privately, 1885; ninety numbered units counting the Prologue’s ten sections; nearly every speech closing on the same formula; songs in the second and third parts, verse and a midnight song in the fourth
Register
A pastiche of Luther’s Bible, parataxis, apostrophe, parable and beatitude, rising to lyric and vision and falling, in the last part, to farce
Scale
One prophet, his eagle and his serpent, a town, a handful of disciples and the higher men; God, the will, time, and all that returns
Governing Proposition
A prophet comes down after ten years on his mountain to tell men that God is dead and to teach the Übermensch, is laughed at in the market, and spends four parts of speeches, songs and story withdrawing and returning until he can face a thought he fears, that everything returns. The wager of the book is that philosophy can be written as a prophetic narrative in the language of the Bible it means to unseat, and that a teaching which warns against followers can be given only as the drama of its teacher: his silence before his own thought, his illness under it and his laughter at its paraphrase.
Act II · The Essay
Movement I
Zarathustra was thirty when he went into the mountains, and he stayed there ten years. The Prologue begins with his descent. In the forest he meets an old saint, and the old saint has not heard “dass Gott todt ist”: that God is dead. The book’s first disclosure is given as news that has not arrived, a matter of who has heard. The German sets his going under, untergehen, against the overcoming he will preach, a play the English loses.
Nietzsche published the book in four parts: the first and second in 1883, the third in 1884. The fourth, written in 1884 and 1885, he had printed privately in 1885 at his own cost, for a handful of friends, and it reached the public only in the collected edition of 1892. He called it the fourth and last part, and it is weighed here as part of the work. The subtitle is Ein Buch für Alle und Keinen, a book for all and none. There are ninety numbered units, counting the Prologue’s ten sections, and nearly every speech closes on the same three words: “Also sprach Zarathustra”, thus spoke Zarathustra.
The register is a pastiche of Luther’s Bible: parataxis, “Wahrlich” and “meine Brüder”, verily and my brothers, parable and beatitude. The name is the Persian prophet’s, the founder of the moral dualism of good and evil, and the book turns it against its bearer: the founder of the dualism is brought back to undo it. Across the four parts a narrative frame carries the speeches: a descent, a failure, withdrawals and returns, a thought that cannot be spoken, an illness and a recovery, a company of guests and a final sign. The story thickens part by part, so that Part I is mostly sermon and Part IV mostly story.
Movement II
In the market of a town Zarathustra preaches the Übermensch, the overman. Man, he says, is “ein Seil, geknüpft zwischen Thier und Übermensch, ein Seil über einem Abgrunde”, a rope tied between beast and overman, a rope over an abyss. The market laughs. The figure is literalised at once: a tightrope walker falls, and Zarathustra carries a corpse away from the market.
To the same crowd he gives the overman’s opposite: the last man, a humanity that has made comfort its end and calls it happiness. “Wir haben das Glück erfunden”, we have invented happiness, the last men say, and blink. In the same section of the Prologue stands the book’s most quoted sentence of craft: “Man muss noch Chaos in sich haben, um einen tanzenden Stern gebären zu können”, one must still have chaos in oneself to be able to give birth to a dancing star. After the failure in the market he turns from the crowd to companions.
Part I is his speeches, twenty-two of them, from “Von den drei Verwandlungen” to “Von der schenkenden Tugend”. The first gives the spirit’s three metamorphoses, into a camel, a lion and a child. The speeches take up the body against its despisers, the state in “Vom neuen Götzen”, marriage and children, friendship, and reading and writing; in “Vom Lesen und Schreiben” comes the sentence that names the book’s law: “Ich würde nur an einen Gott glauben, der zu tanzen verstünde”, I would believe only in a god who could dance. Many of the speeches stand alone, as sermons, and some, “Vom Biss der Natter” and “Von alten und jungen Weiblein” among them, could go without loss to the argument. Part I ends, as each part will, on a withdrawal.
Movement III
Part II has twenty-two sections, from “Das Kind mit dem Spiegel” to “Die stillste Stunde”, and here the songs begin. “Das Nachtlied” opens “Nacht ist es: nun reden alle springenden Brunnen lauter”, night has come, now all leaping fountains speak more loudly, and it is one of the great lyric passages in German prose. “Das Tanzlied” and “Das Grablied” follow it.
The disclosures at the middle of the book come here. In “Von der Selbst-Ueberwindung” life is shown as self-overcoming: “Wo ich Lebendiges fand, da fand ich Willen zur Macht”, where I found the living, there I found will to power. In “Von der Erlösung” the Prologue’s rope returns as a bridge, and the spirit of revenge is found at the root of morality: the will’s ill will against time and its “Es war”, it was.
Between these run the polemics against priests, scholars and poets, and several of them repeat one gesture of contempt. Part II closes on “Die stillste Stunde”, before a thought Zarathustra cannot yet speak. The thought is not named, and he is silent before it. The book has reached a teaching its teacher is afraid of, and from here it can go on only as the story of that fear.
Movement IV
Part III has sixteen sections, from “Der Wanderer” to “Die sieben Siegel”, and its speeches carry more story than those before. In “Vom Gesicht und Räthsel”, a vision and a riddle, the spirit of gravity rides on Zarathustra’s shoulder as a dwarf, and at a gateway named Augenblick, the moment, Zarathustra confronts the thought of the return.
Then a dog howls under the full moon, and a shepherd lies with a black snake in his throat. He bites off its head and rises transformed, laughing. The recurrence is never stated as doctrine in this book; it is met here as a vision and a riddle.
In “Der Genesende” Zarathustra collapses under the thought, and recovers. His animals, the eagle and the serpent, recite the doctrine back to him, and he laughs at it as a “Leier-Lied”, a barrel-organ song: a teaching recited by followers is already its paraphrase. “Das andere Tanzlied” follows, and Part III ends on “Die sieben Siegel” and its refrain: “Denn ich liebe dich, oh Ewigkeit!”, for I love you, O eternity.
Movement V
Part IV has twenty sections, from “Das Honig-Opfer” to “Das Zeichen”, and it is mostly story. The higher men come to Zarathustra, among them the last pope, out of service, and the ugliest man, the murderer of God, who answers the corpse Zarathustra carried in the Prologue. The part holds verse, “Das Lied der Schwermuth” and “Unter Töchtern der Wüste”, and a parody of the Last Supper.
Then comes the comedy: the higher men worship an ass, and the Ass Festival tests the teaching by its parody. The higher men, mocked through the part, are made the audience of its culmination, the midnight song of “Das Nachtwandler-Lied”, which turns on one line: “Doch alle Lust will Ewigkeit”, but all joy wants eternity. Mahler set the song in his Third Symphony.
The last section is “Das Zeichen”, the sign. Zarathustra leaves his cave “glühend und stark, wie eine Morgensonne”, glowing and strong, like a morning sun. The book ends on a sign and not on a doctrine. Whether the recurrence is a cosmology, a test or a myth, whether the Übermensch is a type, a goal or a provocation, why the last part turns to farce: more than a century of readings has not closed these questions, and they are the book’s own.
Act III · The Twelve
The test is subtractive, and it bites hardest in the first two parts. The spine is required: the Prologue’s failed descent, with the fall of the tightrope walker and the corpse Zarathustra carries; the turn from the crowd to companions; the thought he cannot yet speak in “Die stillste Stunde”; its confrontation at the gateway; the collapse and recovery of “Der Genesende”; the higher men of the last part. Each part ends on a withdrawal or a seal, and the order cannot be shuffled. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is the speeches between. In Parts I and II many are freestanding sermons, “Vom Biss der Natter” and “Von Kind und Ehe” among them, and several polemics against priests, scholars and poets repeat one gesture of contempt; the argument would lose no step without them. Part IV earns its length by comedy and the midnight song, though “Von der Wissenschaft” and the Ass Festival are slack. The scale is permitted more than compelled.
Score: 7.8 / 10
What the book brings into the open can be stated, and much of it holds. The death of God comes as news that has not arrived: the old saint in the forest has not heard it. The last man is its most exact prophecy, a humanity that has made comfort its end and calls it happiness: “Wir haben das Glück erfunden”, we have invented happiness, the last men say, and blink. The spirit of revenge is found at the root of morality, the will’s ill will against time and its “Es war”, it was. And life is shown as self-overcoming: “Wo ich Lebendiges fand, da fand ich Willen zur Macht”, where I found the living, there I found will to power. Held below the top because the counter-teachings, the Übermensch and the recurrence, are disclosed as tasks rather than as conditions that hold when stated, and some claims do not hold at all, the speeches on women first among them.
Score: 9.0 / 10
Height is reached often, and in more than one key. The lyrical, in “Das Nachtlied”, one of the great lyric passages in German prose. The visionary and dreadful, at the gateway named Augenblick, with a dog howling under the full moon and a shepherd who bites off the head of the black snake in his throat and rises transformed, laughing. The ecstatic, in “Die sieben Siegel” and its refrain, “Denn ich liebe dich, oh Ewigkeit!”, for I love you, O eternity. Then the midnight song, and the close, Zarathustra leaving his cave “glühend und stark, wie eine Morgensonne”, glowing and strong, like a morning sun. Held below the top by frequency: between the heights run long flats of exhortation in one cadence, and the sublime register is sometimes insisted on rather than reached.
Score: 8.9 / 10
Myth built, not evoked, and built from nothing traditional except a borrowed Persian name turned against its bearer: the founder of moral dualism is made to undo it. The book makes figures that have since become common property: the Übermensch; the last man; man as a rope over an abyss, a figure literalised at once by the tightrope walker; the camel, lion and child of the spirit’s three metamorphoses; the eagle and the serpent; the spirit of gravity as a dwarf on the shoulder; the gateway; the great noon. They are load-bearing. The recurrence is never stated as doctrine but met as a vision and a riddle. Held a step below the top because Zarathustra himself is more figure than person, and the particular in the archetype is thin: we learn that he was thirty when he went into the mountains and stayed ten years there, and we learn his moods; little else.
Score: 9.1 / 10
The inheritance is the German philosophical treatise, the aphorism Nietzsche had practised since Human, All Too Human, and, as model and target at once, the Gospel and Luther’s Bible. The swerve is total: philosophy written as a prophetic narrative with parables, songs and a comic fourth part, its prophet a teacher who drives away his disciples and laughs at his own animals when they recite his doctrine as a “Leier-Lied”, a barrel-organ song. No book in German before it did this with philosophy; the nearest forms, Hölderlin’s Hyperion, the wisdom books and Emerson, are partial. The stake was real and paid: the parts sold almost nothing, the fourth was printed at the author’s own cost for a handful of friends, and the form cost him the hearing of academic philosophy for a generation. Held off the very top only because the scriptural register, his chosen instrument, is also an inheritance he could not wholly bend.
Score: 9.3 / 10
Change the form and much of what the book knows goes. A teaching that warns against followers cannot be given as a treatise without contradicting itself; it must be dramatised, and the drama is the knowledge: Zarathustra’s fear of his own thought, his silence before it, his illness after it, his laughter at its paraphrase. The recurrence exists in the book as an ordeal undergone, not a proposition proved, and that is the point. The comic fourth part, where the higher men worship an ass, tests the teaching by its parody. Held below the top because in Parts I and II the form is often a container: those speeches could be set as numbered aphorisms without loss, and Nietzsche did set much of the same thought so, in The Gay Science and in Beyond Good and Evil.
Score: 8.7 / 10
Evidence, not promise: more than a century of readings that have not closed it. Whether the recurrence is a cosmology, an ethical test or a myth; whether the Übermensch is a type, a goal or a provocation; why the fourth part turns to farce, and whether it is the book’s end or an interlude; whether Zarathustra ever speaks the thought himself. Philosophers and critics have read it to opposed ends, and the questions they divide on are the book’s own. Formal depth yields too, on return: the Prologue’s rope comes back as the bridge of “Von der Erlösung”, the dwarf comes back at the gateway, and the corpse the prophet carries in the Prologue is answered in the last part by the ugliest man, the murderer of God. Held off the top because the dramatic surface is thinner than the doctrine, and readers return more for the ideas than for the persons.
Score: 9.2 / 10
The field is German literature and thought of the nineteenth century, and the book pressed on both. Its intrinsic force is a reorganisation of what philosophical writing could be: the thinker as poet and prophet speaking in persona, and a new rhetoric of German prose after Luther and Goethe. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Richard Strauss’s tone poem (1896) and Mahler’s setting of the midnight song in his Third Symphony; Stefan George’s circle, Rilke, Thomas Mann, Musil, Benn and German Expressionism, which took up its rhetoric; Shaw’s Man and Superman (1903), Yeats, D. H. Lawrence and Kazantzakis; and, in thought, the existentialists and Heidegger. The reach has a dark side, in the book’s claiming by National Socialism, which is reach and not credit. Held below the top because much of the reach runs through the ideas more than the form, which few could imitate without parody.
Score: 9.2 / 10
Survival is demonstrated over some one hundred and forty years. The text is whole: Nietzsche saw all four parts through the press himself, and the later tampering of his sister fell on his notebooks, not on this book. Presence is continuous and among the widest of any German book of its century: in print without a break, translated into most written languages, and read far outside the academy by every generation since the 1890s. It stands at the top of the usual step for its span. Not higher: the Lutheran pastiche has dated as a surface, readers now come to it as much for its slogans as for the book, and its reception carries the charge of appropriation, which fame does not offset. A survival of a century and a half does not stand level with the millennia.
Score: 9.1 / 10
Judged on the German as far as it can be held from knowledge; the sound of the whole German line is neither credited nor charged. Nietzsche is one of the masters of German prose, and the book shows it at its best: the short sentence turned like a proverb, “Man muss noch Chaos in sich haben, um einen tanzenden Stern gebären zu können”, one must still have chaos in oneself to be able to give birth to a dancing star; the wordplay that translation loses, in Übermensch, untergehen and Untergang, overcoming and going under; the rhythm of the songs; the comedy of the fourth part’s voices. Charged: the pastiche is uniform for long stretches, the apostrophes, the exclamations and the archaisms recur until they become a manner, and the coined compounds are sometimes strained. Nietzsche wrote leaner and sharper in the books on either side of it.
Score: 8.6 / 10
Take the two most distant elements: the midnight song of the fourth part and the Ass Festival a few sections before it, or the Prologue’s sermon in the market and “Das Nachtlied”. One law is claimed for them, laughter and the affirmation of all things: “Ich würde nur an einen Gott glauben, der zu tanzen verstünde”, I would believe only in a god who could dance. The comedy is meant to belong to the sublime, and mostly it does. But the law shifts as the book goes. The Übermensch, which governs Part I, recedes behind the recurrence and is hardly the centre by Part IV; the higher men are first mocked and then made the audience of the culminating song; and the contempt of the polemical speeches works against the affirmation the book ends on. Some of the tension is designed, the teacher outgrowing his teaching. Not all of it is.
Score: 8.3 / 10
Many orders, and one figure holds them, more by address than by scene. Consciousness, in Zarathustra’s solitude, fear, nausea and convalescence. The sacred, in the death of God, the last pope out of service, a parody of the Last Supper and the worship of an ass. The state, attacked as a new idol. The body, defended against its despisers. Marriage, children and friendship. Learning, in the scholars and the conscientious in spirit. The natural order, in the sun, the sea, the mountain and the animals. Time and the cosmos, in the recurrence. Held at this mark because the orders are argued about more than held in lives: there is no family, no labour and no history acted out, and almost every person is a type.
Score: 8.4 / 10
Act IV · The Reckoning
8.8 / 10 · Final Average
Placement: Tier IV · Canonical
Strongest Dimensions
The Swerve at 9.3, then The Bottomless Well and Pressure on Tradition at 9.2, The Archetypal Deep and The Imperishable at 9.1. Philosophy written as a prophetic narrative in the language of the Bible it means to unseat, at the cost of its author’s hearing; more than a century of readings that have not closed it; a reorganisation of what philosophical writing could be, carried into music, poetry, fiction and thought; figures, from the last man to the gateway, built to bear weight and become common property; and a text whole and in print without a break.
Limiting Dimension
The Inevitable at 7.8, held by the speeches of Parts I and II: many stand alone as sermons, several repeat one gesture of contempt, and the argument would lose no step without them, so that the scale is permitted more than compelled. Next above it, The Inner Law at 8.3: one law of laughter and affirmation is claimed for the whole, but the Übermensch recedes behind the recurrence, the higher men are mocked and then made the audience of the culminating song, and the contempt of the polemics works against the affirmation the book ends on.
The Necessity Cap clears at 7.8 against a threshold of 7.5, by three tenths. The Coherence Floor clears with room: The Living Form at 8.7, The Made at 8.6, The Inner Law at 8.3, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is met on all five: The Swerve at 9.3, Pressure on Tradition at 9.2, The Archetypal Deep at 9.1, The Imperishable at 9.1 and The Unconcealment at 9.0 clear the bar of 8.5. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis falls below The Inevitable at 7.8, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.4. Every summit condition is met; the work is held below the summit by its aggregate alone.
Basis · a reading from knowledge of Friedrich Nietzsche’s Also sprach Zarathustra. Ein Buch für Alle und Keinen, scored as the four parts as Nietzsche wrote them: Parts I and II published in 1883, Part III in 1884, and Part IV, written in 1884 and 1885, printed privately at his own cost in 1885 and published in the collected edition of 1892. Nietzsche called Part IV the fourth and last part, and it is scored as part of the work; that he once thought of further parts is context, not a charge. The book enters the literature desk as philosophy in literary form and is weighed as written work, its thought through its form; the page argues neither for nor against the philosophy beyond what the twelve axes weigh. Every axis is judged on the German. No text, German or English, was in hand; nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file. German is quoted only where its words are certain, each phrase with the desk’s English beside it, and events are paraphrased. Translation · Walter Kaufmann’s (in The Portable Nietzsche, 1954), read for sense, and R. J. Hollingdale’s (Penguin, 1961) beside it. No translation is quoted, and neither is charged to the book. The sound of the whole German line is beyond this reading and is neither credited nor charged. Facts that could not be verified, among them the size of the private printing of Part IV, the length of the book in words, the field editions said to have been carried in the war of 1914, the commentaries said to stand among its many readings, and the wording of passages known only approximately, are not given. Citations are by part and section title.