The Fifth Desk · Evaluation

Act I · The Map

Literature · Novel in monthly parts · 19th c. · Chiswick Mall, London from Russell Square to Curzon Street and Gaunt House, Queen’s Crawley in Hampshire, Brighton, Brussels at Waterloo, Paris, the German court of Pumpernickel and Bath, from about 1813 to the early 1830s

Vanity Fair

William Makepeace Thackeray · a novel without a hero · sixty-seven chapters under the preface “Before the Curtain” · issued by Bradbury and Evans in twenty monthly parts in nineteen numbers, January 1847 to July 1848, then in one volume, with the author’s own etchings, wood engravings and pictorial initials · scored as the novel as published, its plates weighed where they carry meaning · read from knowledge; no text in hand, quoted only where its words are certain

The Plate · the book as a puppet booth, its curtain drawn back at both sides; along the floor a line cut into nineteen numbers, the last of double length; two strands leave the left together, cross a little before the middle and part; a heavy upright stands near the middle, and a third, fine strand ends against it in a black dot; the upper, heavier strand climbs to a peak and drops sheer, and the lower sinks into a long trough and rises; a dotted line runs under the lower strand for the whole length; the two strands meet again near the end, where a small ring stands, and a high dashed arc runs from just before the upright to that meeting

Mode

Satiric panorama of society in monthly parts; a picaresque and a sentimental novel set side by side and made to answer each other

Mythos

Bunyan’s fair where everything is for sale; the vanity of the Preacher in Ecclesiastes; the puppet booth and its showman; Becky as siren and as Clytemnestra

Phase

From the coach leaving Chiswick Mall in about 1813, through Brighton, the Duchess of Richmond’s ball and Waterloo at the close of chapter 32, the Crawleys’ life on credit and the catastrophe in Curzon Street, to Pumpernickel, Jos’s death and the shutting of the box

Presentation

Fiction; sixty-seven chapters under a preface, issued in twenty monthly parts with the author’s plates and initials; two strands alternated in blocks; an intrusive narrator who is first the Manager of the Performance and later a traveller who met the characters

Register

From the comedy of the drawing room, the auction and Vauxhall, through the narrator’s sermons and his sentiment over Amelia, to the single clause in which a man lies dead on the field

Scale

The aristocracy, the baronetcy, the City and its bankruptcies, the army and the war, the court, the colonies, the servants and tradesmen who carry the debts, three generations of families and the Continent, held in one ledger of money

Governing Proposition

Two girls leave a school on Chiswick Mall: one with money and a soft heart, one with neither money nor scruple. A showman who calls himself the Manager of the Performance follows them for twenty years, through a bankruptcy, a battle, a marriage on credit and a catastrophe in a drawing room, and refuses to say what either of them is inside. The wager of the novel is that a society can be shown whole as a fair where everything is for sale, that virtue, vice and rank there are functions of income, and that a book can do without a hero because the Fair has none.

Living Well on Nothing a Year

8.5 / 10
Tier IV · Canonical

Act II · The Essay

Movement I

Before the Curtain

The book begins on the boards of a booth. In the preface, “Before the Curtain”, the narrator names himself the Manager of the Performance and looks out on the Fair: everything in it for sale, and he the showman of the puppets who will play. The title is Bunyan’s, from The Pilgrim’s Progress, and the subtitle refuses the thing a novel of the day was expected to have: “A Novel without a Hero”. The frame is not ornament. It sets the stance of the whole book, a voice that owns its characters and will not say what they are inside.

The novel was issued by Bradbury and Evans in twenty monthly parts in nineteen numbers, the last a double number, from January 1847 to July 1848, in yellow wrappers, and in one volume in July 1848. It runs to sixty-seven chapters under the preface. The plates, the wood engravings and the pictorial initials are Thackeray’s own and were issued as part of the work; they are weighed where they carry meaning, the last plate of the last number above all, and otherwise set aside. The unit scored is the novel as published.

Two girls leave Miss Pinkerton’s academy on Chiswick Mall in about 1813: Amelia Sedley, a rich merchant’s daughter, gentle and loved, and Rebecca Sharp, poor, clever and without a protector. As the coach pulls away Becky flings Johnson’s Dictionary out of the window. The scene is comedy fully made, and it states the terms: one girl takes what she is given, the other throws it back. The book alternates their strands in blocks and makes each the measure of the other.

Movement II

Five Thousand a Year

Becky climbs. Her world is the baronetcy of Queen’s Crawley and its town house in Great Gaunt Street, where Sir Pitt keeps to his gaiters; Miss Crawley and her money, whose illnesses and will the family scramble over across several numbers; the Bute Crawleys’ schemes and Lady Southdown’s tracts. Much of this is permitted rather than compelled, and the slack of the instalment shows in it. But the climb is the book’s first argument: a woman with no fortune makes her way by wit alone through a society that values nothing else so much as fortune.

She marries Rawdon Crawley, and the two of them live in Curzon Street on credit. Chapter 36, “How to Live Well on Nothing a Year”, and its sequel set out the method: the bills unpaid, the tradesmen put off, the house held on the goodwill of Raggles, the old Crawley servant who owns it and is ruined by them. The cost is named and placed. The book’s finding about English society is here stated as a mechanism, not as a moral: rank and respectability run on credit, and somebody below pays.

Becky puts the finding into a line: “I think I could be a good woman if I had five thousand a year.” The narrator does not refute it. Virtue in the Fair is a function of income, and the sentence is the more disturbing for being reasonable. The prose here is Thackeray at his most supple, quick and exact in social register, carrying irony for chapters without strain; the sermons that come between the scenes are where it slackens, repeating a point the scenes have already made.

Movement III

Darkness Came Down

Amelia’s strand is the sentimental novel the book sets beside the picaresque. She loves George Osborne; Dobbin loves her and serves her. Her father fails, the Sedley goods go to auction, and old Osborne, in his pride, disinherits his son for marrying a bankrupt’s daughter. The comedy runs alongside: Jos Sedley, Collector of Boggley Wollah, and the rack punch at Vauxhall. The two strands cross at Brighton and at Brussels, where the army gathers before Waterloo.

At the Duchess of Richmond’s ball George slips Becky a note. The plot keeps it: the note will come back in the last number. The battle is then kept offstage for chapters, and the book lets it in at the close of chapter 32 with one clause: “Darkness came down on the field and city: and Amelia was praying for George, who was lying on his face, dead, with a bullet through his heart.” The turn from comedy to death in a sentence is the height of the book’s making.

Waterloo falls near the middle of the book, and it falls exactly where the plot needs it: George dies while his betrayal is still unread, and Amelia is bound for fifteen years to a fiction. The farce at Vauxhall and the bullet obey one law. George dies having just tried to buy Becky, and Amelia’s grief is spent on a man who was not worth it. Old Osborne reads his dead son’s letter, and the pride that broke the son is broken in its turn.

Movement IV

A Rescue and a Catastrophe

Becky rises to the top of the Fair. She is presented to George IV; she moves in the world of Lord Steyne and Gaunt House; in the charades at Gaunt House, in chapter 51, she plays Clytemnestra. The myth is set down as a party game and will come back as a question. The book has made of her an archetype from particulars: the adventuress, the governess who climbs, the siren, and now Clytemnestra.

Rawdon is taken for debt to a sponging-house. He comes back, in chapter 53, “A Rescue and a Catastrophe”, and finds Becky with Lord Steyne. The scene has the force of tragedy, and the narrator’s note at its centre is the book’s point of most dreadful clarity: Becky admired her husband at that moment, strong and brave and victorious. At the moment of her fall the adventuress admires the man she has used.

Was she guilty? The book asks and does not answer. The showman who claimed to own the puppets declines to see inside this one, and the refusal is the form of the book’s knowledge: in the Fair nobody is known from within. It is also its limit. The novel shows why people act and what it costs, rarely what it is to be them, and no mind in it is opened the way the great inward novels of the century open theirs.

Movement V

Vanitas Vanitatum

The late numbers move to the Continent and to the German court of Pumpernickel, and the narrator steps into the story as a traveller who met these people there and heard their history from Tapeworm. It is a change of rules in mid-play, an improvisation the serial tolerates rather than requires. In chapter 64 he draws Becky as a siren, singing above the water with the monster’s tail below it. He will not show the tail; he says it is there.

Amelia’s strand comes to its judgment. Her devotion has fed for years on a dead man’s image and on Dobbin’s service, and Dobbin at last tells her so to her face: the good woman’s goodness is a form of selfishness. Then Becky produces George’s note from the Richmond ball, and the fiction Amelia has lived by is broken and she is freed for Dobbin. The plot has kept its accounts across the whole length. Rawdon dies governor of Coventry Island; Jos dies, and the last plate shows Becky behind the curtain at his sickbed with the name of Clytemnestra. The text keeps a lawyer’s reticence.

The book closes on the Preacher: “Ah! Vanitas Vanitatum! which of us is happy in this world? Which of us has his desire? or, having it, is satisfied?” And the showman returns to his booth: “let us shut up the box and the puppets, for our play is played out.” The frame set before the curtain is shut at the end. Fielding’s Tom Jones, the master whose narrator this one inherits, stands above it at 8.7, the better made and the more consequential book; Pride and Prejudice stands level at 8.5, its economy the mirror of this book’s breadth and disclosure.

Act III · The Twelve

1The Inevitable (Ananke)

The double spine passes the subtractive test. Becky without Amelia is a picaresque; Amelia without Becky is a sentimental novel; the book needs both, and needs Waterloo exactly where it falls, killing George while his betrayal is still unread and binding Amelia for fifteen years to a fiction. The note George slips Becky at the Duchess of Richmond’s ball, produced by her in the last number to free Amelia for Dobbin, shows the plot keeping its accounts across the whole length. What holds the axis lowest of the twelve is that a great deal is permitted rather than compelled: Miss Crawley’s illnesses and the scramble for her will, Lady Southdown’s tracts, the younger Pitt’s courtship, the Bute Crawleys’ schemes and much household business could lose a third without loss of a fact the book needs, and the narrator’s sermons repeat their point. Part of the length is the instalment’s.

Score: 7.6 / 10

2The Unconcealment (Aletheia)

The disclosure is articulated and holds: English society runs on credit, and virtue, vice and rank are functions of income. Chapter 36, “How to Live Well on Nothing a Year”, and its sequel show the Crawleys living in Curzon Street on unpaid bills, and the cost is named and placed: Raggles, the old Crawley servant who owns the house, is ruined by them. Becky’s sentence “I think I could be a good woman if I had five thousand a year” states the finding in a line, and the narrator does not refute it. The second disclosure is less comfortable: Amelia’s goodness is a form of selfishness, a devotion that feeds on a dead man’s image and on Dobbin’s service, and Dobbin at last tells her so. The third is old Osborne’s pride, which disinherits his son and is broken by Waterloo. Held below 9.0 because the understanding is more diagnostic than inward: it shows why people act and what it costs, rarely what it is to be them.

Score: 8.8 / 10

3The Sublime (Hypsos)

A comic and satiric book that rises seldom, and rises high when it does. The close of chapter 32 is among the great sentences of the Victorian novel: “Darkness came down on the field and city: and Amelia was praying for George, who was lying on his face, dead, with a bullet through his heart.” The battle has been kept offstage for chapters and is let in with one clause. Rawdon’s return from the sponging-house to find Becky with Lord Steyne, in chapter 53, has the force of tragedy, and the narrator’s note that Becky admired her husband at that moment, strong and brave and victorious, is the book’s point of most dreadful clarity. Old Osborne reading his dead son’s letter and old Sedley’s long decline rise in a lower key. Between these the register is the drawing room and the auction, by design. The frequency is low; the height is real.

Score: 8.1 / 10

4The Archetypal Deep (Mythos)

The title and the frame are built, not hung. The fair is Bunyan’s, from The Pilgrim’s Progress, where everything is for sale; the vanity is the Preacher’s, from Ecclesiastes, and it closes the book. The puppet booth of the preface and the box shut at the last sentence make the frame govern the narrative stance from first page to last. Becky is an archetype made from particulars: the adventuress, the governess who climbs, the siren, whom the narrator draws in chapter 64 singing above the water with the monster’s tail below it, and Clytemnestra, whom she plays in the charades at Gaunt House in chapter 51 and whom the last plate names when she stands behind the curtain at Jos’s sickbed. What she has done is asked in mythic terms and left there. Held at this figure because Amelia and Dobbin are types, the clinging vine and the faithful knight, without the same depth: the gate is cleared by Becky and the frame, not by the whole cast.

Score: 8.6 / 10

5The Swerve (Parekklisis)

The subtitle is the swerve: “A Novel without a Hero”. Thackeray refused the hero of the sentimental and the silver-fork novel, which he had parodied for years in Punch and elsewhere, and put at the centre an amoral woman who is the book’s most living figure and is never punished in proportion, beside a heroine the book quietly indicts. The stake was real: he was known as a journalist and parodist, not a novelist, and entered the market of the monthly part that Dickens held. But the inherited path is plain. The intrusive, moralising, ironic narrator is Fielding’s, whom Thackeray revered; the satiric anatomy of the town is the eighteenth century’s, Hogarth’s and Smollett’s; and the irony at the expense of sentiment is Austen’s turned to a larger stage. A turn taken with weight, not a new road: held below the gate.

Score: 8.3 / 10

6The Living Form (Entelecheia)

The form carries knowledge in two ways. First, the double strand: Becky’s rise and fall against Amelia’s fall and rise, crossing at Brighton and Brussels and again at Pumpernickel, is an argument about two kinds of self-interest that a single plot could not make. Second, and more original, the narrator’s withholding. Was Becky guilty with Steyne? The book asks and does not answer. Did she hasten Jos’s death? The last plate answers with an image, the text with a lawyer’s reticence. The showman who claims to own the puppets and then declines to see inside them is the form of the book’s knowledge: in the Fair nobody is known from within. Held at this figure because the serial form loosened the instrument: the Pumpernickel numbers and the narrator’s late entry as a character are improvisations the form tolerates rather than requires.

Score: 8.4 / 10

7The Bottomless Well (Apeiron)

The evidence of return is long and continuous: some hundred and seventy-eight years of reading, and criticism that keeps finding the book open. The narrator, moralist, showman, cynic or sentimentalist; the question of Becky’s guilt; Amelia as heroine or as indictment; the economics of the book, its credit, its inheritances and its Indian fortune; its women; its use of the Napoleonic war; and the relation of the plates to the text: each has sustained work, and each return finds more in Becky above all. Held at this figure because the well is shallower around Amelia and Dobbin, whose rereadings tend to turn on the narrator rather than on them, and because the book’s thought is less layered than that of Anna Karenina or Middlemarch.

Score: 8.6 / 10

8Pressure on Tradition (Agon)

The field is the English novel of the 1840s and the Victorian realist novel after it. The force is real: the book made the panoramic social novel without a moral centre, organised by money and rank rather than by a hero’s progress, and it carried Fielding’s ironic narrator into the Victorian novel as a moral instrument. Achieved reach is scored with intrinsic force: Charlotte Brontë dedicated the second edition of Jane Eyre (1848) to Thackeray; Trollope wrote his life for the English Men of Letters (1879), and the social panorama of Trollope’s novels stands in his line; and Becky stands, in a comparison often made though the debt is not documented, behind Wharton’s Undine Spragg. Held below the gate because the reach is narrower than Dickens’s, and the Victorian novel’s moral inwardness ran rather through George Eliot.

Score: 8.4 / 10

9The Imperishable (Aphtharsia)

A text of some hundred and seventy-eight years, whole, published in the author’s lifetime under his eye, and read without a break since. The presence is wide: continuously in print, taught as a principal Victorian novel, translated, and adapted for film and television again and again. The topical surface, Regency fashion, the court of George IV and the silver-fork world the book mocks, has been outlived: the novel is read for Becky and for money, not for its references. It sits a tenth below the top of its band and not at it because its presence, wide as it is, is narrower than that of Pride and Prejudice, Jane Eyre or the major Dickens, which are more read.

Score: 9.1 / 10

10The Made (Techne)

The prose is among the most supple of its century: conversational, quick, exact in social register, able to turn in a clause from comedy to death, as at Waterloo, and to carry irony without strain for hundreds of pages. The comic scenes are fully made: Becky flinging Johnson’s Dictionary out of the coach window at Chiswick Mall in the first chapter; Jos and the rack punch at Vauxhall; Sir Pitt in his gaiters at Great Gaunt Street; the auction of the Sedleys’ goods. The dialogue is precise in class, and the author’s own plates and initials add a second voice. Charged: the sermonising repeats; the sentiment around Amelia and little Georgy is laid on in the way the book elsewhere mocks; and the serial slack shows in the middle numbers. Level with the best English novels of its decade, below the summit of the form.

Score: 8.7 / 10

11The Inner Law (Cosmos)

One law runs through: everyone in the Fair is buying or selling, and the narrator holds the goods of the drawing room and the death on the field in one ledger. Take the two most distant elements, the Vauxhall farce of Jos and the rack punch and the bullet through George’s heart. They obey the same law: George dies having just tried to buy Becky, and Amelia’s grief is spent on a man who was not worth it. That is a wide range held. The law slips in the narrator’s own physics. He is the puppet master who knows all, then a sentimentalist who weeps over Amelia without irony, then, in the late numbers, a traveller who met these people at Pumpernickel and heard the story from Tapeworm. The comedy absorbs much of this, but it is a change of rules in mid-play, and the tone toward Amelia is not settled from part to part.

Score: 8.3 / 10

12The Encompassed (Megethos)

A wide world held in one structure: the aristocracy, from Lord Steyne and Gaunt House to the baronetcy of Queen’s Crawley; the City, with Osborne and Sedley as merchants and the Sedley bankruptcy; the army and the war; the court, where Becky is presented to George IV; the colonies, in Jos’s Indian money and Rawdon dying governor of Coventry Island; the servants and tradesmen who carry the debts; families across three generations; the Continent; and the evangelical and clerical worlds of the Southdowns and the Bute Crawleys. Money integrates them: they are held, not listed. Held below the top because the sacred enters only as satire, labour only as the creditor’s loss, the natural order hardly at all, and no consciousness is opened from within.

Score: 8.7 / 10

Act IV · The Reckoning

8.5 / 10 · Final Average

Placement: Tier IV · Canonical

Strongest Dimensions

The Imperishable at 9.1, then The Unconcealment at 8.8, then The Made and The Encompassed at 8.7. A text whole and continuously read for some hundred and seventy-eight years; a disclosure of society as a fair run on credit, where virtue is a function of income and a good woman’s devotion can be a form of selfishness; a prose able to turn from comedy to death in a clause; and a world from Gaunt House to the ruined tradesman held in one ledger of money.

Limiting Dimension

The Inevitable at 7.6: the double spine, Waterloo and the note are strongly required, but much of the serial matter, Miss Crawley’s will, the Southdown tracts and the household business, is permitted rather than compelled. Then The Sublime at 8.1, a book that rises seldom; and The Swerve and The Inner Law at 8.3, for a departure taken along Fielding’s road and a narrator whose rules change in mid-play.

The Necessity Cap clears at 7.6 against a threshold of 7.5. The Coherence Floor clears: The Living Form at 8.4, The Made at 8.7, The Inner Law at 8.3, each against 7.0. The Epochal Gate is unmet: The Imperishable at 9.1, The Unconcealment at 8.8 and The Archetypal Deep at 8.6 clear the bar of 8.5, but The Swerve at 8.3 falls short, since the novel without a hero is a turn taken along the road of Fielding, Hogarth and Austen rather than a new one, and Pressure on Tradition at 8.4 falls short by a tenth, since its reach through Brontë, Trollope and Wharton is narrower than Dickens’s. The Universal Minimum is met (no axis but The Encompassed falls below 7.6, against 7.5) and The Encompassed, which is exempted, clears its own floor of 6.0 at 8.7. The aggregate, 8.5, holds the work in Tier IV of itself; the unmet gate would hold it there in any case.

Basis · a reading from knowledge of William Makepeace Thackeray’s Vanity Fair: A Novel without a Hero, issued by Bradbury and Evans in twenty monthly parts in nineteen numbers, the last a double number, from January 1847 to July 1848, and in one volume in July 1848: sixty-seven chapters under the preface “Before the Curtain”, with the author’s own steel etchings, wood engravings and pictorial initials. The unit scored is the novel as published; the plates are weighed where they carry meaning and otherwise set aside, and later revisions of the text are not the unit. The work is in English, so no translation is in question. No text was in hand, nothing was measured on a text, and no quotation was checked against a file; the novel is quoted only where its words are certain, briefly: the subtitle, two chapter titles, Becky’s sentence on five thousand a year, the last sentence of chapter 32 and the close of chapter 67. Matters that could not be verified are not given, among them the length of the novel in words, the chapter in which Becky speaks of five thousand a year, the words in which the book asks after her guilt, whether the yellow wrappers were set deliberately against Dickens’s Dombey and Son, the text of the cheap edition of 1853, and the reported judgments of Trollope and Tolstoy on Thackeray. Citations are by chapter.